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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

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OMG, Mints. That was just superb. I could feel their pain as if it was mine.You are a terrific writer.👏

Khushi's pain is so understandable. Again in the show, She was seen begging him to give a chance to prove her truth even after all this. It's as if she has no self respect. You have dealt with her disappointment in a realistic way. Any woman would be broken after all that.

I am glad he realised his mistake in your story.

I was shocked when he didn't use his head to put two and two together in the show after she told him the truth. He was supposed to be an intelligent guy.

I very much hope you continue this story. Can't wait to read more.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

The kind of story that touches the heart.

Beautiful.

I had tears in my eyes while reading it.

Hope you will put things right slowly in the next updates.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Res!

I'll edit tomorrow or later in the weekend if you don't mind.
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Edited: This was really nice and well written. I both loved and hated the aftermath of the scene in the show. But, this... this was good.
I liked the fact that Khushi stayed strong, and showed no emotion to Arnav. He kind of needs to suffer a little with the guilt. Nice read.

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Oh!! I cried after reading this 😭 ...

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chitra

@chitrajay

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Stunning!
Loved the dedication!

Will comment...loudly soon!

It better be really LOUD!!!

Need to justify Mints' faith in our abilities!😃

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

outstanding os
emotions were vrry well potrayed
they reached directly to my heart

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan
Wow! This was simply awesome!
I had lump in my throat while reading this!

You have described the state of their being so well!
I am gonna nominate this for Best Sad OS.

You should definitely continue in next parts :)

Hey thank you so much... I saw that you have also nominated me for best new author...

I am seriously honored... and really glad that you enjoy reading my stories...

Will absolutely continue this OS! 😊

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SPraba
HEY MINTY AWESOME UPDATE. I CRIED. SO WELL WRITTEN. THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR.

Hey thanks Prabha...And I know it hurts remembering those beautiful IPK Days!!

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sumond
Its always a pleasure to read anything you write and once again you have done a fabulous job, pls do cont. if you can.thanks a ton for the pm

Hey Thank you so much... I am so happy that you enjoy reading my work...

Will surely continue this story! 😊

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ranogill
very good concept...when khushi took down all her belonging in ipkknd they could have explore this aspect and made ipkknd more realistic instead they put kidnapping track...i would like you to write more parts to see thing would have turn out if there were no kidnapping track. i would like to read how both tackled this situation

I agree... there was so much to be explored in Arnav-Khushi relationship...

So many emotions left untold... so many endings kept open... would like a closure for all of them...