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OMG, Mints. That was just superb. I could feel their pain as if it was mine.You are a terrific writer.👏
Khushi's pain is so understandable. Again in the show, She was seen begging him to give a chance to prove her truth even after all this. It's as if she has no self respect. You have dealt with her disappointment in a realistic way. Any woman would be broken after all that.
I am glad he realised his mistake in your story.
I was shocked when he didn't use his head to put two and two together in the show after she told him the truth. He was supposed to be an intelligent guy.
I very much hope you continue this story. Can't wait to read more.
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