Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 5

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

Superbly written.

You have a brilliant way of presenting both sides of a story and I felt I was actually present in the scene, watching two strong individuals go through their personal hell and crumble finally.

Khushi has finally learnt the ugly truth and sees the fabric of the bond that tied her to her Arnavji, disintegrate.

And Arnav Singh Raizada just got a glimpse of how his life would be, without Khushi.

A wasteland.

Would you add more parts to this?

Please.

I love angst now and then but at the end of the day, I am a total sucker for happy stories.

Hint hint, wink wink.

Jokes apart, you are a fabulous writer and I would love to read more. A lot.

Cheers to the awesome threesome. You guys rock...

Originally posted by: kondhili

Mintsji you should totally convert this into an SS, why a doubt there?😕

That was such a lovely take on what should ideally have been shown on the show...Alas 😔

Nevertheless i would love to read how the remorseful arnav tries to win back his heartbroken khushi..

So please come back and try to carry this tale forward and we would love to read further into this...😃

Liza

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

Superbly written.

You have a brilliant way of presenting both sides of a story and I felt I was actually present in the scene, watching two strong individuals go through their personal hell and crumble finally.

Khushi has finally learnt the ugly truth and sees the fabric of the bond that tied her to her Arnavji, disintegrate.

And Arnav Singh Raizada just got a glimpse of how his life would be, without Khushi.

A wasteland.

Would you add more parts to this?

Please.

I love angst now and then but at the end of the day, I am a total sucker for happy stories.

Hint hint, wink wink.

Jokes apart, you are a fabulous writer and I would love to read more. A lot.

Cheers to the awesome threesome. You guys rock...

Originally posted by: kondhili

Mintsji you should totally convert this into an SS, why a doubt there?😕

That was such a lovely take on what should ideally have been shown on the show...Alas 😔

Nevertheless i would love to read how the remorseful arnav tries to win back his heartbroken khushi..

So please come back and try to carry this tale forward and we would love to read further into this...😃

Liza

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

When will you update?

Originally posted by: mints23

Haha Vandy!! I wish I was in Delhi... could have strangled you!! 😛

Originally posted by: Afya

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OMG, Mints. That was just superb. I could feel their pain as if it was mine.You are a terrific writer.👏

Khushi's pain is so understandable. Again in the show, She was seen begging him to give a chance to prove her truth even after all this. It's as if she has no self respect. You have dealt with her disappointment in a realistic way. Any woman would be broken after all that.

I am glad he realised his mistake in your story.

I was shocked when he didn't use his head to put two and two together in the show after she told him the truth. He was supposed to be an intelligent guy.

I very much hope you continue this story. Can't wait to read more.