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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: fatima15

amazing update :) loved it

oh so its anushka who is getting married
liza injured her hand and was crying πŸ˜­
loved shree's concern for liza
Mr. Damnit πŸ˜†
loved arjun and sameer's conversation
awww how seeet arpita brought food for everyone :)
can't wait to read more
continue soon


Originally posted by: DesiiiDivaaa

Interesting concept...awesome update. Continue soon πŸ˜Š


Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

nice prologue continue soon


Originally posted by: Craziestfan

nice start... Contd...


Thanks guys! Glad that u liked d update! Will post soon! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: devildiva21

res :D*edited*
superb update JB...
yes dekha me was right about anu... πŸ˜† *victory dance*but ye kya kiya she is sachi mai getting married?? awww sam ki feelings... ❀️ he doesn't know why he is feeling like that ya jaan ke bhi anjaan bn rha hai??? love how arjun understand ki he is in worry...
shriza scenes were very emotional... liza not even talking to him properly and shree feeling bad...
chottu arpi scenes were lovely... kya pyar hai dono mai... πŸ˜‰
JB teri dhamkee na... 🀣 can't help but rofl...
continue soon...


CC! πŸ˜³
Sahi guess tha? πŸ˜† Pehli baari, nahi toh aage tu humesha mere se sach nikalvati hai! πŸ˜†
Hmm...Sam ki feelings waali cheez ka answer mein update mein dungi! πŸ˜‰
Haha...Dhamki bina kaam ni chalta aaj kal! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sonycs001

nice part

so anushka loves sameer
sameer confused about his feelings
continue soon



Thanks guys! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Whr Is Riya??? And Ayesha???

 
 
And Liz ko kya hua??


Mere liye ik update mein sabhi characters laana impossible hai! πŸ€”
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Mridu darling,tumhari jitni bhi tareef karu,utna hi kam hai.
U r seriously an amazing writer.
Mujhse bhi zyada acchi likhti ho...

Wokay...
Now,coming to the update.

Well,it was an amazing start.
So,Anushka is getting married to Indraneel...
Sameer is confused between Ayesha and Anushka...
OMG...
Yaar,tumne toh mujhe ek Bengali Wedding hi dikha di thru ur words.
It was perfectly expressed...
I just loved it a lot.
Aww...
Chotu and Arpita...
They are so adorable...
Arpita ne sabke liye khana lekar aayi...
Aww...
I loved her gesture and care for the ETF members.
Hope everything goes well...
Bang On.
Continue,please...


Haha...
Ur Dhamkis...
I am inspired by it...

Thanks for the pm.


Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Shree and Liza ka scenes were good and emotional,as well.


Zebbie itni bhi tareef mat karo yaar! Bigad jaungi mein! πŸ˜†
Thanks a lot Zebbie! Glad that u liked it! πŸ˜³

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: priyagopana

nice update...
loved it
lovd shree's concern for liza
n lovd the convo btw sarjun
can't wait...
cont soon...


Originally posted by: ShanayaShimmers

Nice Mridu... N pls pls pls Arjun n Riya ka hi banana not Sakshi!! I cant stand that ghastly girl!!


Originally posted by: NSohi13

Amazing concept ... Plz update soon ... Plz pm me next part :)


Originally posted by: naina1143

πŸ˜‰interesting ...starting to tu humshaa acchi karati he πŸ‘... dekhate hai  πŸ€”


Thanks everyone! πŸ˜³

@Shanaya : Dekhte hain...woh toh mere uppar depend karta hai ki whoz going to get paired with whom! πŸ˜‰

@Naina : Di, iss baar theek ending karungi! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Anu got MARRIED?! Sameer!! Ab Sochne se kya fayda?? IDIOT (if he actually loves her!!)!!!😑


AW!! Shree cares for Lisa... Bt why is she behaving that way..?? Kuch to choot raha hai..!!πŸ˜›

Hayee.. Arjun apne dost ko kitni achi tarah pehchaanta hai... LOVE u Bhai..!!πŸ˜‰

Club??!! Wow..!! πŸ˜‰

Aye haye... Chotu JI aur Arpi JI..!! HOW ROMANTIC!!πŸ˜†

No Riya, Sakshi or Ayesha? Onko bhi dikhao yr..!😊


Waiting...


Haha...u will get to know everything very soon! πŸ˜‰
Hmm...kuch toh choot raha hai...think think! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
It's not possible to get all d chrcs. in a single update! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47


Originally posted by: lovvinit

Hey nice. Pls cntinue. Dear


Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

nice update.


continue soon.


Originally posted by: alee001

superbbb dear!!!!


so sameer is in confusion!!!


Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

continue soon dear

nice update


Thanks guys! Glad that u liked d update! πŸ˜³

@Alee : Not only Sam, but others too! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -BlazingWater-

So Anu is getting married 

and Sam is confused :| 
Chotu Arpita part was so cute!!
Shree Liza part was sweet..ohh Liza is behaving differently :(
Sam Arjun part was great!!!
great update,contd soon :D


Thanks a lot! Glad that u liked d update! πŸ˜³

Originally posted by: life93

 hi mriduπŸ€—...

 awesome partπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...loved itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ so anushka is getting married...but does she love him?...n
liza got hurt😭...n was crying...
shree's concern was nice...choti ji is really cute...
n sam arjun convo was πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...anushaka apni favourite haiπŸ˜ƒ...update soon 


Thanks!
Anu loves Sam! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
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                                        Part-2

He came out of the trance, when he heard someone calling his name. He placed the photo frame back in its place, and turned.

"Kisine bulaya..." he asked.

"Meine Rathore Sir..." said Liza, who was standing at a distance.

"Oh...khadi kyun ho, have a seat..." he said.

"It's ok Sir...woh mujhe kuch baat karni thi Sir.." she said.

"Haan bolo..." he replied calmly.

"Rathore Sir...kya mein kal ki leave le sakti hunn?" she asked.

"Haan...par tumne already next week 3 din ki chutti le rakhi hai Liza...if you don't mind...would you like to explain ki tum itni chutiyaan kyun le rahi ho? Sab theek hai na?" a concerned chief asked.

"Woh Sir...woh...woh next week meri...meri shaadi hai..." Liza replied.

And every single person present in the room was shocked. And specially Shree.

He didn't knew why he was feeling sad. He didn't love her. He hated her. Didn't he?

Suddenly,

"Wah! Shree Liza tum dono shaadi kar rahe ho aur humein bataya bhi nahi?" Sakshi spoke up.

Both of them looked at Sakshi.

"Nahi nahi...Shree is just my colleague and nothing else..." Liza said.

"And we thought that you guys are dating each other..." Riya said.

"Tu bhi kya Ri..." Shree said, and shook his head.

"Congrats! Par lagta hai koi humein invite karne ke mood mein nahi hai...par phir be...being extremely kamina's, hum khud hi apne aap ko invite kar lete hain...Sam tu chal raha hai na?" said Arjun.

"Khud hi toh bola ki being extremely kamina's...ab tera dost hunn...kamina just like you...toh off course...aaunga hi..." Sameer replied.

Liza just passed them a weak smile. And Sam granted her the leave. She walked out of the conference room, as Shree left behind her too.

"Liza..." 

She turned and looked at Shree.

"Kya hai Shree?"

"Tum sach mein..." 

"Haan, mein shaadi kar rahi hunn...uske liye I guess mujhe tumhari permission lene ki zarurat nahi hai!" she said and walked away, but Shree stood there, almost freezed at his place.

Suddenly, someone came from behind and patted his shoulder. It was Vaishali.

"Shree, woh codes chahiye..." she said.

But Shree was lost somewhere. She stood in front of him and waved both her hands in front of his eyes.

"Haan kya huya?" he asked her as he came out of the trance.

"Woh hacking codes chahiye...(after a few seconds) Sab theek hai na?" she asked.

"Hmm..." was his only reply.

Aasman tu mera...
Ya hai mera khuda...
Dekhta hunn jahaan...
Tu hi tu...
Tu hi tu...

Nearly 2-3 hours later,
Sam's cabin,

"Rathore Sir..." she said.

He lifted his face and noticed Riya.

"Haan Riya...any problem?" he asked her.

"Woh...Arjun Sir kahaan hai?" she asked.

"Arjun? Pata nahi...ik minute...(checks his phone for any msg from him) Oh yes! Woh Sakshi ke saath dinner pe gaya hai..." he replied.

"Acha? (after a few seconds) Sir, agar aapko problem na ho toh aap mujhe drop kar sakte hain aaj?" she asked.

"Haan Riya...ismein problem waali kya baat hai? Jab jaana hoga toh mein tumhein bata dunga and will drop you at your place..." he replied.

She flashed her dimpled smile, and walked out of his cabin.

Even though she was the one, who rarely got jealous of anything or anyone. But she always felt a bit jealous and insecure, when Sakshi was around Arjun.

An hour or so later, the chief had called it a day. Except for him, Aayesha and Riya, everyone had left. The trio took an ETF SUV, and drove to their places. 

The ride was a silent one. But Sameer had some things to clarify. He wanted to talk to both Riya and Aayesha. But for now, talking to Riya was a much better option. 

The SUV came to a sudden halt. 

"Aayesha hum pahunch gaye..." Sam said.

She stepped out and bid the duo and left. Suddenly,

"Riya..."

"Yes Sir..."

"Aage aa kar baithogi please..."

She looked at Sameer confused.

"Kya huya Sir?" she asked.

"Kuch baat karni hai..." he replied.

Riya stepped out and sat on the passenger seat, next to Sam.

"Kahiye Sir..."

"You like Arjun...Don't you?" he asked her with a smile on his lips.

And she was looking at him shocked. 

"Sir woh..."

"Riya, bahane banane se koi faayda nahi hoga..." he replied.

Precap
Sam plays the cupid b/w Ariya.

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PS : Last time, agar kisine Ariya/SaSha/ShrIza waala drama kiya na...toh bas phir...meri dhamakedar gaaliyan sunn ne ke liye ready rehna! πŸ˜†
Edited by MriduB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

superb update JB
liza ki bhi marriage... 😲 baat kya hai sab shaadi karne mai hi lage huye haiπŸ˜‰ hope shree marriage rukwa lega... πŸ˜›
are wah sam gonna play a cupid for ariya... haaye mazze...
JB teri dhamkee... makes me... 🀣Edited by devildiva21 - 11 years ago