SS : If You Had My Love *Complete*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayelo Readers! πŸ˜‰
Me back, u pareshaan? πŸ˜† I know! πŸ˜‰
So me back with another torture of mine! πŸ˜†
Baaki sab jaane ke liye kijiye update ka wait!πŸ˜‰

Triangle love story concept! Jisko pasand aaye, theek hai!
Jisko nahi, woh bhi theek hai! πŸ˜Š

Index

CS + Prologue : Page 1
Part 1 : Page 4
Part 2 : Page 8
Part 3 : Page 12
Part 4 : Page 18
Part 5 : Page 20
Part 6 : Page 23
Part 7 : Page 27
Part 8 : Page 31
Part 9 : Page 34
Part 10 : Page 36
Epilogue : Page 39
                                                               
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Posted: 11 years ago
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                                Character Sketch

DCP Sameer Rathore - ETF Chief. Best friend of Arjun. Aware of the feelings blossoming in his heart and mind, but for Aayesha or Anushka, unaware of that.

ACP Aayesha Kapoor - ETF's ammunition expert. Has some unknown feelings for Sameer.

ACP Anushka Chatterjee - ETF's Encounter Specialist. In love with Sameer, but tries her level best to hide her feelings.

DCP Arjun Rawte - ETF's Second-in-command. Best friend of Sameer. In a situation just like Sameer. Doesn't know whether he loves Riya or Sakshi.

Riya Mukherjee - ETF's Research Specialist. In love with Arjun, but doesn't show.

Sakshi Anand - Crime Journalist. Her feelings for Arjun are just mere attraction or love, doesn't know.

Shreekant Sen - Tech Expert. Somewhere has feelings for Liza, or maybe Vaishali?

Liza D'Cruz - Senior Forensic Expert of ETF. Likes Shree, but doen't let anyone know.

Vaishali Singh - Assisstant Tech Expert. She too likes Shree.

Chandrakant Patil - Commando. Unlike the other males, is happily married.

Arpita Patil - Chotu's Choti. Good friend with other females of ETF.

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                                             Prologue

"Boudi, jaake dekhiye na..." a lady said to the other.

"Haan, dekhti hunn..." the lady replied.

Meanwhile,

She was getting married today. But that glow, her usual charm was missing today. Suddenly, someone opened the door.

"Mausi?" she asked.

"Khoob bhalo amar shona bacha..." the lady replied.

She just passed the lady a fake assuring smile.

"Taiyyar ho?" the lady asked.

"Haan bas 5 minute...uske baad mein aa jaungi niche.." she replied.

The lady nodded in +ve and left. She picked up her phone, and started watching those pictures...which were now just a memory. And him...who was never supposed to be her, who was never destined to be hers.

She then picked up her wedding card which was lying on the dressing table.

Indraneil Dasgupta weds...

*To be continued*

~~Sorry for the mistakes. Waiting to know ur views~~ πŸ˜³

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PS : If u guys didn't like the concept, me won't continue! Plz post ur honest views! Agar pasand ni aaya and still u write ki yes do continue, toh that won't be good na? So plz honest views! πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by MriduB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reswa πŸ˜‰*edited*
haaye kya story hai JBπŸ˜‰
love triangles on saleπŸ˜† 
everyone confused about their feelings except for chottu...!!! sabse shareef banda ho gya  chottu to ETF ka...
prologue is very interestingwa...!!!!
tu na prologue mai hi shaadi karwa leπŸ˜›
who is getting married??? kahin anu to nai?😲
update fastwa plzπŸ˜‰
Edited by devildiva21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start..n interesting character sketch!
do continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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weds riya mukherjee...right?

and apart from chotu all r in love triangle...kitne dil tootenge yaar...

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mridu u asked for honest views...so here are they

i liked the CONCEPT of love triangle...but

itne saare love triangles???

being a SaSha fan i m in love vid Sameer and Aisha...both indiviually nd even as a couple...

so...itss a bit wierd feeling fr me to visualize sm1 else too in the pic...

bt on the same time...its ur creation...MRIDU

the one who always stood by Sam fans like me...

so i kind of have a blind faith on u...dat ur story willl be worth satisfying...

so now the decision lies to u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku321

mridu u asked for honest views...so here are they

i liked the CONCEPT of love triangle...but

itne saare love triangles???

being a SaSha fan i m in love vid Sameer and Aisha...both indiviually nd even as a couple...

so...itss a bit wierd feeling fr me to visualize sm1 else too in the pic...

bt on the same time...its ur creation...MRIDU

the one who always stood by Sam fans like me...

so i kind of have a blind faith on u...dat ur story willl be worth satisfying...

so now the decision lies to u


Firstly, thanks for such a honest reply!
And now coming to the jodi thing :
Itne saare LT's hain, toh matlab hai logon ke dil tootenge...after all it's a LT! 
Baaki mein kuch nahi kahungi, wait for the update! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice...
Plz tell me who is the girl??
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like it!!!It sounds interesting.. 
Well everyone's love life is pretty complicated expect for Chottu's :P
I guess the bride in the prologue is either Anu or Riya????

do contd soon :D