ArHi FF! The Cult [Completed] - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the fact that it's Arnav's POV we see all the time. And the fact that his mind is like a steel trap. He's a perfect lead. Let's his team work in their area of expertise and then extrapolates what he has learnt and joins the dots. 

Khushi is still an unknown variable at this point. 

I must say - it's definitely getting into the realms of CM. And unlike a one-hour episode - we're getting a whole big fat story out of it. I am loving it. Will we get a Garcia-type character? I hope so. 

Eagerly waiting for the next update. 

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Posted: 10 years ago
😃

Arnav is a man of few words ... sits back and hears it all out before forming 
an opinion ... but his mind is always working ... on an overdrive ... 

"There was something bigger at play, I could feel it..." realises Arnav ... 
He does realise that this was something deeper and more dangerous 
than they realised ... he had seen and sensed the fear in Khushi's eyes ... 
but they have yet to see how much she is able to help them ... 
there will always be a fear of them being watched by the group who performs 
the rituals ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 10 years ago
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
who is khushi afraid off -
great update RB
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Posted: 10 years ago
liked the brain stroming sessions between Keith and Shukla...i liked the three...also the way Arnav narrates the story from his pov...still now it's Arnav who is narrating...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
The story is very engaging and intresting:-)
Can't wait for the nxt update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic and brilliant update, written perfectly. 

So Shukla has found out there are 17 other similar cases from 5 different stations. 

Wow love the lunch, especially Arnav and khushi's private conversation. Arnav was thinking that khushi might think he is a creep because of all the staring.

So Arnav has realised that khushi looks afraid, eager to read more. 

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 



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Posted: 10 years ago
Crime scene visit still pending...hmmm..! 

So Arnav's summation that there could be a cult involved...does it come from what he saw and heard from Kushi...because none of the others concluded anything like this...!

Is hypnosis involved in making the victims obey orders as said by Arnav...?

So Keith is hogging the lime lite with Kushi...and jalebi's make an appearance...and the constant looking over the shoulders...interesting...!

Does she know the people...or some signs ow is she hoping to recognize any sign of danger since she's looking over her shoulders..? Or is it sheer paranoia...she giving into ...? Can't wait for the next part...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav and Khushi are just sooo... cute! Is that so abnormal amid this horrible suite of murder cases that seem to link this pre-Vedic cult?

This story is fascinating! It's all I can say...as with all your stories I just cannot wait to see what happens next.

I really hope nothing happens to Khushi...I get the feeling she knows a lot about this possible cult, or enough to know she is in danger...
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Posted: 10 years ago
No discussion about the crime during lunch.   That was amazing.     4 people meeting to solve/learn about the crime, didn't discuss about it at all.   Arnav  saw fear in Khushi's eyes when he met her earlier and even now he can see fear behind her smiling eye.   And he also observed that 
people ease around khushi and are able to talk  
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update ... his analysis of her body language is very nice.