ArHi FF! The Cult [Completed] - Page 17

Wow...women involved in this murder mystery...! Kushi is shaken by the pictures she saw and was fighting to keep her composure...! Did she happen to have any connection with Arjun's mom..?.arnav is intrigued by Kushi...and it's not normal...as attested by Shukla and Keith...!

Yay for Prof. Gupta. I wish my professors were as cool as she is, and I don't blame Arnav at all, no siree.

 Long day today so I just got a chance to read it.  I like this combo of Keith, Shukla & Arnav.  The young one is fearless and speak his mind, Shukla is by the book and old school and Arnav balance them out.  Helen's visitor is definitely a lead worth checking but they need to go further back to when she met Vimla.  How will Professor Gupta react to the trio?  Maybe a good idea to relax the atmosphere b4 they go to the crime scene.  I think collectively and with Arjun's help they will enter the clandestine tribe but surely there will be lots of danger.  I am really enjoying this one as it is bringing me back to Dan Brown.  I read his books overnight as I was so intrigued.  I love to see the Indian version of this as u r doing a great job setting the scene and the suspense up.  

interesting one...

Finally we have our opposing characters..shukla vs keith (why keith?), with their own views and own methods of investigation. I enjoyed the silent observer arnav. I like how you are building this story..

I like the way you present men and women in your stories, they are someone you would know but not understand easily. It is relationships which are strong and difficult to understand: siblings, colleagues, and people bound by fate.

The men with Arnav in his team are as different as chalk and cheese, yet they work well together a lot like life. We also have Vimal who is a representation of money, power and lust; Arjun who may have a more to do with the murders than what meets the eye, his mother was killed in a gruesome manner. The women too we have Anjali who is disturbed, Suman who is a vital key in the story as we have a Helen who is a reflection of that ugly part of society. Then we have Khushi, a professor who is not revealing much but is becoming integral to the investigation, is it because a certain ACP has shown some interest in her.

This is getting more and more interesting. 

very well written..interesting update..continue soon..😊

Wow interesting update
Liked how Arnav thought like the killer trying to figure their motive
Uncle n nephew scene was so sweet
Hilarious ...when khushi introduced herself n Arnav almost chocked on his tea.
Now I understand why Arjun asked Arnav not to wear uniform when going to meet khushi incase anyone was watching
Gotta feeling khushi is in very deep with this as well as . She seemed scared but not because of the goariness of the photos but more like fear of someone finding out she talked to Arnav .Why was she surprised when Arnav said it might be the women who did it? Does she know the women? Wouldn't be surprised if khushi was related to someone in the cult or the cult did something to her or someone she knew!
Arnav has seen someone with this tattoo which means prob someone in the cult ?
Wow Arnav called her "my girl" in his mind already they have similar dress sense n similar likes talk about soul mates .
Can't wait to see what happens at crime scene
This story is getting more n more interesting by min
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin

Its beautifully written RB. Cannot wait till the story unfolds. Thanks for the pm.