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Posted: 10 years ago
this is for u for grate update

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Awesome update dear...continue soon !!!
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Superbb update dear...so ram is falling for priya.. 😛
Cont soon nd plz pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update👏👏👏
now Ram is falling 4 Priya
hope Priya falling 4 Ram soon
thx 4 PM pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww soo cute update..ple ho sake toh aur thora bada update de na...love it..waiting 4 next..nd if it is possible so pm me :)
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excellent update, waiting for next update.pls update soon.
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I like the ff
Priya and ram's character sketch is little different but I like it
And nice update👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priya along with u never failed to amaze me, I mean this update was just fantastic, I must say iss ladki me presence of mind bohot hain and with that she is honest which I liked the most, now plz continue ASAP
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thanks for PM and am waiting for next part
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sorry for being late..i hope this is the big update...do leave ur comment..and pls if u didnt like anything then do notify..i'll be glad

Part-5

Priya was in her room reminiscing all her moments with ram and came to the conclusion that he is a true gentle man and my parents were so right k I couldn't have got such a caring and good husband. He was actually trying to help me infront of dadi by saying k I'll not cook, so sweet of him!

Days were passing by and ram , priya were growing comfortable in each other presence with each passing day. Now it was the time for ram and priya to leave for Mumbai, so kuljeet suggested that before departing why not visit mela which is organized nearby. Priya agreed half heartedly and this didn't go un noticed by ram.

In room:

Ram: priya agar tum mela nahi dekhna chahti toh hum nahi jayenge

Priya: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai, mujhe mela dekhna hai

Ram: phir tum udas kyun ho?

Priya: mujhe mere bachon ki yaad aa rahi hai

Ram(in surprised tone): tumhare bache

Priya:  haan

Ram: kitne hai

Priya: around 500 hongey

Ram: kya aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi

Priya: ye aapka trademark question hai kya, hamesha yahi bolte hai"mujhe bataya kyun nahi"

Mera NGO hai waha par around 500 bache hai, mai unhe bahot miss kar rahi hoon, maine unse kaha tha do din mai aajaongi par yahan ye sab kuch hogaya, wo log mujhse bahot naraz hongey

Ram: bas itni si baat, iska solution hai na mere paas

Priya: kya?

Ram: tum pehle smile karo phir batata hoon

Priya: bataye na pls

Ram: first smile please

Priya: aap kitne ziddi hai

Ram: tumhari sangath ka asar hai

Priya: very funny

She smiles and says ab khush

Ram: haan bahot zyada khush

Priya: toh ab bataye

Ram: kal hum mela dekhne jarahe hai na, maine suna hai waha bahot ache toys milte hai jo Mumbai mai nahi milte, toh hum wahan se un sab ke liye gifts le lengey, that's it, problem solve

Priya(in excitement hugs ram): superb idea and separate herself from him.

Ram: ab toh khush ho na

Priya: haan , bahot zyada

Ram: toh chalo ab so jao kal  subah jaldi nikalna hai

Priya: good night, sweet dreams

Ram: same to you

Both doze off to sleep.

Next day: in mela

Ram and priya were enjoying and also buying gifts for children.

While moving ahead priya spots a bangle shop and she runs to the shop excitedly and ram follows her

Ram: tumhe chudiyan pasand hai

Priya: bahot zyada

Ram: batao konse color ke khareedo tumhare liye

Priya: mai bahot confused hoon…ek kam karte hai bhaiya sare colors k pack kardena…theek hai na ram

Ram: haan bilkul

Priya: thank you so much..mai bata nahi sakti mai kitni crazy hoon chudiyon ke liye

Ram: tumhare chehre ki khushi dekh kar pata lag raha hai

Priya: aagey chale

Ram: sure

As ram and priya were moving a boy suddenly calls out from back priyaaa….both were stunned and they turned back only to find raj(boy with whom priya met in marriage)

Priya: hi raj , how are you?

Raj: mujhe tumse baat nhi karni hai

Priya(making sad face): kyun?

Raj: tumne mujhse jhoot kaha k tum do din baad chali jaogi, par tum abhi tak yahin ho

Priya: oh iam so sorry, wo situation kuch aisi hogayi k mujhe rukna pada

Raj: kaisi situation?

Priya: abhi aap nhi samjhoge

Raj: ek min..yahin rukna…kahin mat jaana…mai bas abhi aaya

Priya: raj suno toh

Ram was looking at her smilingly

Priya: ye mera dost hai

Ram: jaanta hoon

Priya: kaise

Ram: jab tum dono us din frndshp kar rahe the mai wahin tha

Priya: oh

Raj comes with a rose and a heart shape ballon and sit infront of priya(like while proposing): priya mai tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon

Priya: yes raj bolo

Raj: kyat um meri girlfriend an kar mujhse shaadi karogi

Priya(surprised): aap ko ye sab kis ne sikhaya

Raj: maine film me dekha k hum jis ko bhi pyar karte hai us se aisi hi kehte hai..bolo na tum mujhse shaadi karogi

Priya: sorry raj meri shaadi toh hogayi hai inse(pointing towards ram)

Raj glares at ram,:ab mai kya karoon

Ram: I am sorry yaar agar mujhe pata hota k tu  priya se pyar karta hai toh mai kabhi is se shaadi nahi karta

Raj: sach bolrahe hoon na

Priya: haan ofcourse, agar tumne mujhe pehle bata diya hota toh mai itna cute n sweet ladke ka dil thori na todti

Raj: theek hai, par meri ek shart hai

Ram: kya?

Raj: tum priya ko kabhi nahi rulaogey, promise me, nahi toh mai tumhe khoob maro ga

Ram: arey yaar mujhe thodi na teri maar khani hai. I promise mai priya ko kabhi nahi hurt karonga

Raj: bye priya, mujhe yaad rakhna aur mujhe phone bhi karna

Priya: ofcourse mai tumhe nahi bhoolungi aur haan phone bhi karungi, bye

Raj(looking towards ram): apna promise yaad rakhna, bye

Ram: haan yaad hai, bye

After raj went, ram said baap re kamal ka ladka tha

Priya: haan kitna sweet tha

Both were  moving forward when suddenly priya spots  pakode, so they buy pakode and accidentally bump into kuljeet and their packets get exchange.priya want to eat pakode right then so they sit under a tree and starts eating pakode. After eating 2-3 pakode priya starts behaving weird and ram couldn't find out the reason for her such behavior. Kuljeet comes and says bahi aapne pakode khai toh nahi

Ram: maine nahi khaye par priya ne khaye aur ajeeb behave kar rahi hai

Kuljeet: mar gaye…

Ram: kya hua, koi problem hai

Kuljeet: wo daljeet ne mujhe drink karne se mana kiya that oh maine bhang ke pakode liye the taki usko pata na chale lekin aap ke aur mere pakode exchange hogaye

Ram: tu pagal hogaya agar kisi ne priya ko aise dekh liya toh janta hai kya hoga?

Kuljeet: sorry…par ab kya karna hai

Ram: tu dadi ko bol de k mai aur priya ghar chale gaye

Kuljeet: theek hai…once again sorry ji

Now priya started her blaberring

Priya: ram aap kabhi khidki se chalang lagayi hai

Ram: kya?

Priya: mai jo pooch rahi uska jawab dijiye

Ram: nahi

Priya: haw…ladka hokar bhi nahi…maine toh na kayi bar chalang lagayi hai

Ram(surprised): majak kar rahi ho

Priya: nahi…pata mai jis hostel me rehti thin a, wahan ki warden bahot strict thi aur shaam ko 6 baje ke baad kahin jaane nahin deti, toh hum friends ko  jab bhi movie ke liye jaana hota toh warden ko neend ki goli khilakar, window se jump kar ke jaate

Ram(smilingly): tum toh badi dare devil ho yaar….jab warden so jati thi toh phir gate se hi chale jate tumlog

Priya: aap na bahot masoom ho, gate pe watchman  bhi toh hota hai na

Priya suddenly sees puppet dance and insists ram:chaliye na mujhe dance dekhna hai bahot maza aaega

Ram: nahin mujhe nahi dekhna , mujhe toh yahan zyaada maza aa raha hai

Priya: theek hai..aur ek baaat batau

Ram: sure….jaldi batau…mujhe tumhare hidden talents jan na hai

Priya: aap ko pata hai mai valentine day par college kya lejati thi

Ram: nahin

Priya: guess kariye

Ram: shayad flowers ya cards

Priya: nahin …galat….

Ram: arey yaar mujhe kaise pata hoga….tumhi batao

Priya(laughingly):pehle kahiye aap haaar gaye

Ram: ok I lost…ab to batado

Priya: mai na  rakhi lejati thi college ko valentines day par

Ram: kya..rakhi ….wo bhi valentine day par….par kyun

Priya: job hi ladka mujhe propose karne aata mai usey rakhi bandh deti….uske baad na koi ladke ni himmat nahin dikhayi priya Sharma ko propose karne ki

Ram: tum waqai mai bahot ajeeb aur crazy ho

They both were laughing their heart out. Suddenly priya stops laughing and keep gazing at ram

Priya: ram aap smile karte hue bahot cute lagte hai….so keep smiling

Ram:thank you..waise tum bhi bahot cute ho

Priya laugh out loud and says: aap pehle insane hai jisko mai cute lagti ho warna baqi sabhi maan na hai ki mai kisi rakshas se kam nahi ho…waise aap ko bahot tang karti ho na…kuch bhi ulta seedha bol deti hoon

Ram: haan wo toh hai

Priya: phir aap mujh pe gussa kyun nahi hote…pata hai mujhe kitna bura lagta hai aapko ulta seedha sunate hue…par phir bhi aap gussa nahin hote and starts crying

Ram: please rona mat..mai is liye gussa nahin hota kyunki mujhe kisi pe bhi gussa nahin aata

Priya: sachi

Ram: sachi muchi

Priya: mujhe kuch confess karna hai

Ram: haan bolo

Priya: I think I like you..no no I really like …you r too good….so sweet.. and she  fall asleep

Ram's happiness knew no bounds her words were ringing in his mind

Ram: agar tum mujhe pasand karne lagi ho priya toh mujhe yakeen hai k tum mujhse pyaar bhi karne lago go aur mujhe us din ka intezar rahe ga…bhale hi aaj tum ye sab bhang ke asar se kaha but I really hope ki ek din tum apne poore senses mai mujh se ye sab kahogi

He carried away her to the house.

Next morning priya woke up  and asks ram mujhe kal k kuch yaad nahi aaraha hai..hum ghar kab aaye

Ram: wo actually tumhare sar me dard that oh hum jaldi aagaye the aur tumne jo tablet lit hi sar dard ke liye shayad uski wajah se yaad nahi hai kuch bhi(ram decided not to tell her about eating bhang wale pakode bcoz she hv said earlier she don't like alcohol in any form..to avoid her guilt of having drink)

All took their breakfast, packing was done ram and priya take dadi's blessing and priya  assured dadi k  as soon as she reaches Mumbai she'll call her and they left for the Mumbai.

Precap: ram and priya in kapoor mansion sharing their life secrets with each other.