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Posted: 10 years ago
I like thz crazy priya..in ur ff..jst like me ;-) love it
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Awesome. Everything was perfect... A very light ye beautiful ff to read... Update soon..
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sorry for this late reply, just started to read ur FF, its smashingly awesome, Priya ki yeh tewar mujhe bohot pasand aya, just the first part, intro agar aisa hain toh story toh dhasu hogi, anyways going for next part and plz next time do PM me whenever u update, plz
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Second part, well Ayesha se isse zyada kya umeed ho sakti hain, but u live Dadi, kya pasa pheka unhone, chalo attend latte hain RaYa ki interesting shaadi
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third part, nice one, chalo baatein to shuru huyi, plz continue ASAP
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very interesting,update soon.
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This part was just so amazing... Everything was perfect... it was really very interesting..do update soon
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awesome updt dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi everyone!  A big Thanks to all who are appreciating my ff. I didn't thought k I'll get good response, so once again thankyou and hugs.

Part-4:

Ram woke up at 6:00 a.m and tries to wake up priya.

Ram: priya 6 baj rahe hai utho

Priya: 5 min aur sone dijiye na

Ram: theek hai, par yaad hai na dadi ne tumhe 7 baje neeche bulaya hai?

Priya: ofcourse yaad hai

Ram: ok, mai bahar jar aha ho, tum ready hoke dadi ke paas chali jana

Priya: ok…..abhi mujhe sone dijiye please

Ram came back at 8:00 and sees priya is still sleeping and he wakes her up

Priya: shit! 8 baj gaye

Ram: haan, aur tum abhi tak ready bhi nahi ho

Priya: toh aap mujhe jaga nhi sakte the

Ram: oh god, tumhe bhoolne ki bhi bimari hai kya…6:00 baje jagaya that oh tumne kaha k 5 min ke uth jaogi

Priya: aapne mujhe jagaya,meri yadash bht strong hai, agar aapne jagaya hota toh zaroor yaad hota

Ram: tum roz itni der tak soti ho

Priya: arey sorry, ye toh mai batana hi bhool gayi k mujhe subah der tak soni ki aadat hai, aapko koi problem hai is se?

Ram: nahi mujhe koi problem nahi hai….he mutters under his breathe:but tum badi problem mai phans sakti ho

Priya: kuch kaha aapne

Ram: nahi…ab jaldi se ready hojao dadi must be waiting for you

Priya: haan abhi jati ho

Priya gets ready and come downstairs praying k dadi shouldn't scold her.

Dadi: priya puttar, tu aagayi, itna late kyun hogayi?

Priya: wo dadi subah aankh nahi khuli isliye

Dadi: koi baat nahi puttar, tujhe pata hai na tujhe aaj apni pehli rasoi banana hai

Priya: ji dadi(hesitatingly)

Ram saw her hesitation and came to the conclusion that may be priya don't know cooking.

Ram: dadi yeh sab karna zaroori hai kya?

Dadi: ye rasm hai puttar

Ram: priya aisi koi rasm nahi karegi

Dadi and priya looked at himwith eyes popped out.

Dadi: kyun nahi karegi?

Ram: kyunki mai keh raha hoon

Priya was silent listener to this and she was trying to figure out what is happening

Dadi: wajah to bata

Ram(hesitatingly): kyunki shayad priya ko khana banana nahi aata

Dadi looksat priya  for an answer

Priya: ram ye aap ko kis ne kaha ki mujhe khana banana nahi aata

Ram: wo tum dari hui lag rahi thi to maine socha k shayad

Priya: oh god! Bina kuch jaane aap conclusion pe aagaye

Ram: tumne to mujhe bataya nahi na ki tumhe cooking bhi aati hai

Priya was now irritated and says: galti hogayi jo nahi bataya and realizes k dadi is also present there and changes the topic: dadi kitchen kahan hai

Dadi called preeto's grand daughter in law Daljeet and asks her to guide priya to kitvhen and show her where all cooking materials are present.

In kitchen:

Daljeet: bhabhi agar aaap ko kuch bhi help chahiye toh aap mujhe bula lena

Priya: ok, thanks

Now priya looks at the kitchen and starts thinking k what she should cook because she don't know what they like in sweet dish. So she takes out her phone and calls ram

Ram receives the phone:

Ram: hello

Priya: sweet dish me kya banao

Ram: excuse me , aap koun hai aur ye kya sawal kar rahi hai

Priya: Mr Ram kapoor mai aapki wife Priya Ram Kapoor bol rahi ho, hamari shaadi hui hai last nite, remember?

Ram: oh! Mujhe kaise pata chalega mere paas to tumhara number nahi hai, ek min, ek min tumhare paas mera number kahan se aaya , maine toh tumhe nahi diya

Priya: wo subah aap ka phone dressing table par that oh maine aapke phone se apne phone pe call kiya aur aap ka number save karliya.

Ram was stunned because no one has taken the liberty till now to touch his phone without his permission.

Priya continues: mai aapki legally wedded wife toh apne pati ka number lene ke liye permission ki thori na zaroorat hai.

Ram smiles and thinks she never fails to amaze me and make me smile with her antics.

Priya: jaldi bataye, yahan sabko meethe me kya pasand hai

Ram: tum kheer banado, sabko wo bahot pasand hai

Priya thanks him and before he could say anything she cuts the call.

At Dining Table:

Priya serves the kheer to every one:dadi, ram, daljeet, kuljeet(daljeet's husband), preeto.

Every one tastes the kheer  and appreciate her k kheer is very tasty and yummy.

Priya: please aaplog meri jhooti tareef mat kariye, mai janti hoon kheer itni bhi tasty nahi hai, kyunki mai bahot kam khana banati  hoon

Dadi: theek hai puttar, kheer bahot zyada achi nahi hai par phir bhi achi hai , tu thoda aur sikhege na toh tu sabse achi kheer bana sakti hai

Priya: thank you dadi, kya aap mujhe khana banana sikhaoge

Dadi: kyun nahi puttar bilkul sikhaogi

A smile crepts on Ram  face listening dadi's and priya's convo  and he thinks: priya you surely know how to win other's heart  aur tune sab ka dil jeet liya hai with a pause mera bhi. I am falling for you priya, yes I am falling for you.

Precap: ram and Priya visiting some mela along with family.