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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..ram ki shaadi ayesha se ho rhi thi 😲 acha hua bhag gyi πŸ˜†
Priya ayi toh shaadi attend karne par yaha uski hi shaadi ho jayegi..lol
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting story...pls continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dhamakedar starting...very different..enjoyable also..very good..ple continue soon..if it is possible..so pm me in ur next update. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It is a outstanding ff.. Everything is gud but the best part is shiney and niharika are hubby and wifey aur sone pe suhaaga is ayesha ir there daughter.. Too gud , the three bimbos look so gud with each other... In most of the ff ram is the stuborn and arrogant one but in ur ff priya is the one and thats usp of ur ff... Till now just love it... Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Ayesha bhag gaye shadi k mandap se πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
accha hua mujhe lagta hai priya shadi k liye maan jayegi
very interesting story
looking frwd d nxt pls continue soon
pls PM me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago

First of all thankkk  youuu to all who have liked my ff . it means a lot to me as iam writing story for the first time.

Part-3

Shipra called priya in the room and dadi and ram went to another room because they don't want  k their presence to trouble priya.

Priya:

Kya hua ma tum sab itne udas kyun ho

Niharika: beta Ayesha shaadi chorkar chali gayi, ab tu hi hamari izzat bacha sakti hai

Priya: isme mai kya karsakti hoon

Shiney: puttar ji ab tum hi hamari last hope  ho, beta please tu ram se shaadi ke liye maan ja

Priya: chachaji ye kya bol rahe ho aap, mai aise kaise shaadi karlu

Niharika: beta tu hamare liye, hamari family ki izzat bachane ke liye itna nahi karsakti

Priya: dekhiye  mai aap logo ki bahut izzat karti ho par iska matlab ye to nahi na ki mai kisi se bhi shaadi karlu

Niharika was about to say something, shipra  signals her and shiney to leave the room and they leave the room.

Shipra: priya

Priya: ma please mujhe emotional blackmail karne ki zaroorat nahi hai

Shipra: nahi mai tujhe bilkul force nahi karoongi shaadi ke liye but itna zaroor kahungi ke agar aaj yahan shaadi  nahi hui toh tere papa ki bahot badnaami hogi aur jo itne saal se izzat kamayi hai, naam kamaya hai ye sab mitti me miljayega aur ek baat beta agar tu shaadi ke liye maan gayi toh mai is baat ki guarantee leti hoon ki tujhe ram se acha humsafar nahi milega, agey teri marzi

Priya turn towards her father and asks: papa aap bhi chahte ho ke mai ye shaadi karlu

Sudhir: haan beta par isliye nahi ki meri izzat par koi aanch na aaye balki apni khushi se

Priya: aap ko lagta hai ke mai ram ke saath hamesha khush rahoongi aur wo mere liye best husband prove hoga

Sudhir: ha beta, ram bahot acha larks hai, wo jis lladki se shaadi karega na wo bahot lucky hogi

Priya: toh theek hai papa, mai ye shaadi karne ko tayyar hoon

Sudhir: kyat u ram se ek bar milna chahegi?

Priya: nahi papa, agar aapne ram ko choose kiya hai toh I trust you completely(she was unhappy about only one thing: she has dreamed about her marriage like wat she'll wear, how functions will be organized ,etc but her biggest dream was ruined because of Ayesha)

Bride was brought down in the mandap and she was weaing full gunghat so both ram and priya couldn't see each other.

Sudhir( to shipra): kahin hamne priya ke saath kuch galat toh nahi kiya na, achanak se uski shaadi karadi, kya wo ram ko as husband accept karegi

Shipra: sudhir hamne koi galti nahin ki, infact priya ke liye ram se acha koi mil hi nahi sakta , wo kitna calm and mature hai aur hamari beti  kaisi hai ye to app jante hai, wo priya ka khayal ache se rakhega

To enlighten the mood shipra says: mujhe toh ram ki fikr horahi hai

Sudhir: kyun?

Shipra: arey hamare ghar ka toofan jo ab uske ghar jaraha hai

Sudhir: shipraa.

Shipra: waise dekhte hai ram shaadi ke baad bhi itna hi clam rehta hai ya priya use pagal kardegi

All rituals were performed and Ram and Priya were pronounced as husband and wife infront of whole world.

Sudhir asks dadi k he want to spend sometime with priya before she leaves. Dadi agreed and said ke ram and priya can stay here for some time and meanwhile all barati will leave for their house so as to make arrangementspriya and sudhir were talking and ram was sitting away from there, giving privacy to daughter and father.

After some time , sudhir comes to ram and shipra was chatting with priya (rather giving her list of do's and don't's)

Sudhir: thank you beta tum ne aaj hamari izzat rakhli

Ram: uncle please aap mujhe thanks mat kahiye

Sudhir: waise priya mujhe papa bulati hai

Ram: sorry papa

Sudhir: beta tumhe jaisi jeevan saathi chahiye hogi shayad meri priya waisi nahi hai

Ram: mai samjha nahi uncle

Sudhir: beta wo thodi ziddi hai aur agar koi cheez uske mutabik nahi hui toh naraaz hojati hai but dil ki ekdum saaf hai kuch bhi apne mann me nahi rakhti

Ram: don't worry papa mai poori koshish karunga ke uski har wish poori karo aur usko har khushi dee saku

Sudhir: thanks beta

He was about to say  something when they heard some one's laughter and turns to see, it's priya who was laughing on something said by shipra. It was the first time when ram was actually seeing the girl with whom he had married. He was mesmerized by her beauty she was simple yet elegant  and her smile it was too charismaticand thoughts she has the second quality that I wanted in my life partner(quality 2: simplicity and beauty). Priya also saw ram for the first time when she felt k someone is gazing her and thinks: toh priya te hai tere pati dev, thore mote hai par bahut cute hai aur smile toh bilkul bachon jaisi hai. They both came back to their senses when shipra and sudhir called them respectively.

Shipra: kya priya kahan kho gayi?

Priya : kuch nahi maa

Shipra: dekh ab teri shaadi hogayi hai toh bachon jaisi harkate karna chod de ab tu kisi bahu hai, kisi ki patni hai toh apni reponsiblities ko ache se poora karna aur kisi ko shikayath ka moka nahi dena aur khabardar jo apni stupid wishes se ya crazy demands se ram ko tang kiya to

Priya: kya maa shaadi hoke abhi ek ghanta bhi nahi hua tumne toh apne damad ki side lena shuri kardiya

Shipra: priya…jo mai bol rahi

Priya interrupted: ha maa mujhe yaad hai aur waise bhi tum ho na mujhe bar bar yaad dilane ke liye

At same time:

Sudhir: ek aur baat beta jo tumhe priya ko samajne mai help karegi

Ram: ji kahiye na papa

Sudhir: wo jab bhi kisi se naraz hoti hai na agar wo us insane ko apna manti ho toh uspar apna gussa nikalegi warna chup chap rahegi aur us  insane se baat nahi karegi theek se aur jahan tak mai apni beti ko jaanta hoon wo apni sudden shaadi se gussa ya frustrate hogiaur  agar usne tum par apni frustration nikali toh samj lena k usne tumhe apna pati dil se maan liya hai

After exchanging of do's and don't between ma-beti and damad –sasurji, raya left for their destination.

**Flashback ends**

Present:

Raya have reached their destination and they were given a grand welcome by dadi and all rituals were performed and everyone retarded to their room.

Raya also reached their room.

Priya: ram aap ko konsi side chahiye

Ram: kya?

Priya:  I mean bed par aap left side pe soyenge ya right pe?

Ram: any side

Priya: waise aapse ek baat pooch?

Ram: pooch

Priya: aap ek idiot(Ayesha) se shaadi karne ke liye kaise  maan gaye

Ram started laughing

Priya: aap has kyu rahe hai, maine koi joke crack kiya hai kya?

Ram: actually pehli bar kisi ladki ko aapne aap ko idiot bolte suna toh control nahi hua

Priya( in angry tone): stop laughing ram, mai apne bare me nahi Ayesha ke bare me puch rahi thi

Ram: sorry, mujhe kaise pata lage ka tum Ayesha ko idiot bolti ho, wo dadi ne usey choose kiya tha aur maine haan kardi

Priya: bina usey dekhe, aise hi shaadi ke liye maan gaye

Ram: haan dadi ne dekha than a

Priya: par shaadi to apko karni thin a,  agar use aap ki shaadi hojati na to poora ghar parlour bana ke rakhti wo idiot

Ram: tumne bhi toh mujhe bina dekhe shaadi ke liye haan kardi kyun

Priya: kyunki papa ne kaha aur mai janti hoon mere papa mere liye kabhi koi wrong decision nahi lete

Ram: tum Ayesha se bahot naraz hogi na , uski wajah se tumhari life all of a sudden change hogayi

Priya: ha, aur mann kar raha hai ki, bhagwan kare wo jis kaam se gayi hai wo poora hojaye(in angry tone)

Ram(smilingly): priya log jab kisi se gussa hote hai na to curse karte hai na ki dua dete hai

Priya: zaroori toh nahi na ke mai logo ko follow karo, iske peeche ek reason hai

Ram: kya reason hai?

Priya: reason mera personal hai aapse kyun share karo, abhi mujhe neend aarahi hai mai sone ja rahi hoon, goodnight

With that she goes to sleeram also wishes her goodnight and drifted to sleep.

Precap: priya making her first rasoi.

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Raya ka shadi ho gaye πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
fantastic update 
waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
thx 4 PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Cont soon nd pm me plz next timeEdited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear...pls continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
to sweet update soon waiting