THAT WAS SIMPLY FABULOUS DEAR !!loved the fight...can u imagine...u made me fall in love even with their FIGHT !!
u are a heck of a writer dear...
the tension..the anxiety ...all was portrayed soo damn beautifully...
i felt as if i was a part of their convo...as if i was one of them !!
and u know what..i hav been reading ur work since today..its evening and i m still glued !!
besides taking breaks for food and water <and ofcourse washroom 😆>
i havent moved an inch...
my back is aching ..eyes watered but just cant help it..
such is ur magic dear !!
the best part bout this ff is that it highlights the real things that happen between a couple in a situation like these two !
i mean u dont just go n kiss sum1 if they luk attractive to u ..nt after a hribble convo !
so this is it..
a really long comment..
bt when it comes to such a commendable writer like u..cant help it !!!👏
nd ya...do update sooon...please !
and accept mah buddy request !! please !😳
Edited by sarthshru - 10 years ago
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