Originally posted by: kondhili
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Will take some time but will come back to unR this...Don't mindπ*************************************************************************************************************Not going to lie i was so looking forward to reading the OS from Its complicated. Hence was a little disappointed when you mentioned it was a random idea of yours but after reading this awesome OS words fail me. πHai that was such a poignant and vivid tale that you had going around there. The description were so detailed as if the whole show was running just in front of me.No khushi just an arnav with an anamika who comes and goes but leaves a mark.We can debate was she ghost, was she arnav's imagination but that will destroy the beautiful tale that you have penned out here.A very visual and gripping tale which i couldn't seem to put down once i started.You should definitely pen down your random ideas more often cause they are so amazing.Thanks for the PM.Liza
Heartbreakingly beautiful...
Heart breaking bacause its so short...for me...
I have been searching every nook and cranny of if...
To read something like this on arshi...
I did found some...but they only gave me tit bits of what I wanted tto see..
But u with only with this one os..capture ed something that I wanted ...to feel and read...just a suggestion as an ardent fan of ure writing...if in the future..
U want to start another ff on arshi...pls do it in a historical setting...
I would love to read...the feel that u gave in this os...made my heart bit increase..I was wishing that I dont finish it soon...I have reading it extra slowly...but all beautiful things comes to an end...this is one of ure best work up u till now...it wont be an exaggeration if i say that it was a masterpiece. ...do continue. ..and keep enchanting us with ure wonderful writing. ..
Originally posted by: -Harjas-
OMG! Beautiful OS i've ever read! But it was kinda sad. It has potential to turn into some SS or FF. Please update the next part! I guess she's a spirit! Please write another part for this, i can't get sleep until then!
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