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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! Beautiful OS i've ever read! But it was kinda sad. It has potential to turn into some SS or FF. Please update the next part! I guess she's a spirit! Please write another part for this, i can't get sleep until then!
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Posted: 11 years ago
diffrnt concept. Nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am from Jaipur and have been to the Amer Fort nd palace multiple times. 
But it will never be the same again for me.
I just loved this story. 
The way you have incorporated Chan Chan with Khushi Arnav's story is amazing
Loved the hint of the super natural mixed with the present times. 
Beautiful story. loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
one word epic
i loved it 
i think u can change into SS
superb and mesmerizing OS
i am speechless and picture perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow👏
Now that was truly magical👏
brilliant work👏
And for some reason I am not happy but neither am i sad after reading it... coz isn't it blessing enough to actually find a love so true, so eternal after all?
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was beautiful...don't even want to know why and what! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...
amazing os...its not just a os it has much more to it...
well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW it was different
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
It ws sheer beauty... D way u decribed d gal she sounded lyk an epitome f beauty... I mst say u r a creative, poetic n descriptive writer...  Very well done... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb and lovely part
thanx for the pm
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