OS: Dr. Raizada--A Journey of Love and Friendship - Page 19

Arnav is sexy as doctor business or anything !!!

That was a heart-warming story. Loved it!

I m fan of ur OSs...

This was such a beautiful OS...just like a fairy tale...loved it..

Lovely update:))
I truly loved ur story:))

Aww, this is such, such, such a lovely OS.. LOVED it! :)

Hey dear thanks a lot for the pm.

It was simply fantabulous.. 👏

I felt as if I m reading a novel in short. It was beautifully written with a happy ending.

I love happily ever afters...😛

Do keep up with the good work.

The OS was fantastic. Loved it, especially the way you narrated Arshi's journey of friendship & love giving a glimpse of significant happenings at various stages of their life which strengthened their bond 😊

 

Depiction of Arnav & Khushi becoming friends was lovely 😊

 

Arnav chiding his friends for making fun of Khushi, following her to her hideout, telling her that her cake was amazing & that her surprise was better than the layered one & telling her that she was perfect the way she was & asking her not to change was well framed

 

Khushi not liking other girls ogling at Arnav, confronting him asking him to wear a shirt, Arnav questioning her as to why it bothered her so much, their talks leading to their most beautiful first kiss, Khushi dreaming of a life with Arnav, shocked to know from his Dadi that he had left the previous night, Khushi broken down that he had left her after their kiss was excellently portrayed 👏

 

Khushi walking away from Veer in anger for proposing to her in the middle of a huge crowd, hiding herself from Arnav intentionally though she knew that he kept searching for her & then startled to see him at the temple & wishing to hide herself again showed the unexplainable grief Dadi's words& the matching sudden disappearance of Arnavafter their kiss had planted in her heart

 

Their confession of how much they loved each other was beautiful❤️… ❤️ ... ❤️Arnav telling Khushi that she meant the world to him when she said that she believed Dadi's words that Arnav belonged to someone better than her was excellently written

 

The end was the best of all, though I loved the whole OS…..Arnav lieing on his wife's lap & kissing his unborn child was sooo adorable   ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

 

Thanks for the PM

 

its beautiful, superb...

Superb dear.but y those rainas.i hate them n then that stupid veer.well a beautiful love story.amidst all d class differences n d dadi arshi became one.well no one can separate our arshi.