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love the holi party and Ariya romance.
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update :) loved it
love the way riya answered that senior :)
awww riya was really angry :)
holi party was awesome
ariya scenes were just lovely  
and love the way arjun applied color on riya and himself
chotu disturbed their private moment 😡
can't wait to read more
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Awesome update...continue soon 😊
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hey dear read all the parts and i must say u r A amazing writer👏

sry for the late rply😳

i loved it yaar its awsm...thnk god ki us vishal k dimagh mai thodi akhal ki khidki khuli huhhh(sigh of relief)...

i hope riya too will soon realize her love for arjun...love ajun taking care of riya,singing for riya,and the most was the holi wala romance😃

loved the way riya replied to the seniors jaise k 7 taisa😆...

poor riya she hav gone through so much without any fault of her😔

plz plz plz cont. soon and PM plzzz (chota sa cute sa puppy wala face)
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Arjun & Riya :: AASHIQUI -Tom & Jerry's Love Story 

after sometime..she feels some burning on her face..

Riya(in mind):-oh..god kahi..iss color se muze allergy na ho jaye..abhi face wash kar leti hu..

She walked to the water tank..wash her face..

Riya:-ab jara thik lag raha he..oh..hanki bhi nahi he mere pass..

Arjun:-par mere pass he..

He take his hanky from his pocket..& come close to her..wipe her face by his hanky...

Riya(innocently):-thanks..mere face pe koi rashes toh nahi na aayi..?

Arjun(smile):-nahi..

She leave..& go to Sonali..

Shree:-Sonali bhabhi..wow kya party di he...mein to aapke pair bhi chune ke liye tayar hu..

Riya:-haa..mein bhi..superb party..lekin aakhir bhabhi kiski he..

Sonali:-plz..guys..tum logo ki tarif  kuch jyada nahi ho rahi..

Riya(looking to a stall):-hey sonali kya waha pe "Bhang" he..?

Sonali(naughtly):-bilcul..aur "Thandai" bhi..

Riya:-wow "Bhang"..

Neha:-Riya..tum bhang toh nahi pine wali na..

Chotu:-oye.."bhang" mat pina..

Shree:-agar tu "Bhang" piyegi na toh Arjun sir..

Riya:-oh..ho..meine aisa thodi na kaha ke mein pine wali hu..mein to pilane wali hu..

They all looking her excitedly..

Sonali:-matlab..?

Riya:-are dekho..toh sahi..Bhai ,Vishal ko toh..

Neha :-no..no..no..tum baki sabko pilado..par Vishal ko nahi..

Riya:-oh..ho..lekin kyo..?

Neha:-tumhe kya..mere liye musibat ho jayegi..

Riya:-come on Neha.."bhang " Vishal piyega..aur problem tumhare liye kaise hogi..

Neha(in Riya's ear):-Arjun ko "Bhang " pilake dekho ..fir pata chalega..

Riya don't understand what she mean..she give her questioning look..

Neha(again in Riya's ear):-are meine suna he "bhang "pine ke baad jyada romantic ho jate he boys..

Riya:-gr8..fir toh mein ab Vishal ko "bhang " pilake rahungi..

Sonali:-par tum Sam ko nahi pila paogi..woh toh glass bhi haat mein nahi lega..

Riya:-my dear bhabi..just keep your eyes on me..

She leaves..all Sonali,Neha,Shree & Chotu looking To riya..

She take 2 glasses of "Bhang"..

First start walking to Vishal..

Riya:-hey Vishal ...ye lo.."Thandai.."

He looks her suspecially..

Riya:-kya?lo na.."thandai " he..

Vishal:-Riya tum kahi zoot toh nahi bol rahi...

Riya(trying to blackmail him emotionally):-ye kya Vishal..tumhe muzpe bharosa nahi he..?aur kitana sab hone ke baad bhi mein tumpe itana bharosa karti hu..aur tum..muzpe..

Vishal(get emotional):-oh..no..no..mere kehne ka matlab woh nahi tha Ritz..accha tu plz naraz mat ho..(he take glass from her hand..)ok..mein pi leta hu..thik he..aur muze tumpe pura bharosa he..you are my friend..(he drink the whole glass..& then started feeling something odd)Ritz..kuch ajeeb sa lag raha he..

Riya:-oh..dont worry..(looking to the group..& wave hand to Neha & call her)..Neha..plz come here..

Neha come close to them..& looking suprizingly to Riya..how easily she made him drink "Bhang"..

Riya:-oh..Neha..dekho..Vishal kya keh raha he..

She winked Neha..& start walking to Rathod..

Riya:-Bhai..

Rathod(who is talking to someone,turned back & smile):-haa...bacche..

Riya(also smile):-ye aapke liye..(she hold the glass in front of him..)

Rathod:-Riya..?

Riya:-ye.."thandai " he bahi..lijiye na..

Rathod(laugh):-Riya..tum shayad bhul gayi ho..ke mein ETF chief hu..aur muze bewakuf banana bahot mushkil he..

Riya:-Bhai..aapko muzpe bharosa nahi he..ye sach me "Thandai"  he..

Rathod:-Riya..meine kaha na..tumhari ye trick muzpe nahi chalegi..

Riya(emotionally):-mein itane pyar se aapke liye layi hu..kay hua agar "bhang " he toh..?apne behen ke liye itana bhi nahi kar sakhte aap..?

Rathod(take a deep sigh,hold her face in his both hand..):-mein tumhare liye apni jaan bhi de du bacche..par mein bhang nahi pita..

Riya:-plz..bhai..ye meri prestige ka sawaal he..(she look to the group of shree,Chotu,& Sonali..he also realize the group is looking to them..he take a deep sigh)

Rathod:-ohh..god  tum kabhi nahi sudharogi..ok..bacche par mein sirf ek sip hi lunga..

Riya:-half glass plz..?

Rathod:-oh..god thik he..

She give him the glass..he drink it partially..

Rathod:-ab khush..?

Riya(smile):-hmm..

She walked to the group..

Riya:-dekha..guys..?

Sonali:-Riya..you are gr8..

Shree:-mein nahi manata..

Riya:-kyo..?

Shree:-Vishal sir ko toh "Bhang " mein bhi pila sakta tha..aur I am sure..Rathod sir ko toh tu ne "bhai..Bhai.." bol ke emotional kiya hoga..

Riya:-dekh..meine kaise "bhang" di isase kya farak padta he..?unn dono ne pi na par..

Shree:-Ritz..agar "Bhang " pilani hi he na..toh Arjun sir ko pila ke dikha..woh nahi teri pyari pyari bato se pigalenge aur nahi tu unhe emotional bana payegi..

Chotu:-haa..sach me..Arjun sir ko bhang pilana toh impossible he..

Riya:-abhi dikahati hu tum logo ko..

Shree:-dekhte he..tu  iss baar fail ho jayegi..?

Riya:-no way..

Shree:-lagi shart..iss baar mein aur Chotu nahi harege?

Riya:-haa..agar tum aur Chotu haar gaye toh woh karna padega jo mein kahugi..& vice 'versa..done..?

Shree:-done..

She leave..

Chotu suddenly remember when he privoiusly saw Arjun & Riya..

Chotu:-oye..tu ne mere naam se shart kya lagai..?

Shree:-are chilla kyo raha he..?ham kya Arjun sir ko nahi jante he kya..?woh bhang nahi pilne wale..

Chotu(mutters):-shayad pi bhi le..aaj kal muze unake symptoms kuch thik nahi lag rahe..

She take two glass..one of thandai & another of bhang..

Come near to Arjun..

Riya:-Arjun sir..ye thandai..

Arjun raised his eyebrows..

Arjun:-Thadai..?(smile)thandai bata kar muze bhang pilana chahti ho..

She get suprized.."how can he know..that I want to made him drink "bhang"..zarur..unhone muze glasses exchange karte hue dekh liya hoga..ab kya karu..?challenge haar jaogi..Ritz..kuch kar.."

Riya:-toh..aap bhang pine se darte he..?

Arjun(smile):-mein nahi darta..ye tum bhi acche se janti ho..aur muze bato me fasane ki koshish mat karo..jo tumne Vishal aur Sam ke sath kiya woh mere sath karne ki koshish mat karo..

Riya:-par..

Arjun:-no way Riya..tum kya samazti ho..ke tumne Shree aur Chotu se shart lagai he..aur muze pata bhi nahi chalega..

Riya(in mind):-oh..god..inhe toh sab pata he..(mutters)Ritz..tu toh haar gayi..

Arjun:-kya kaha tumne..?

Riya(sadly):-umm...pata nahi ab Shree aur chotu muzse kya kya karwayege iss shart harne ke badale..

Arjun:-uff..wifey..tumhe sach me lagata  he ke mein tumhe harane dunga..

Riya(suprizingly):-toh aap bhang piyege..?

Arjun(winked at her):-thodisi..

Riya(excitedly,happlily):-wow..thats gr8...(she give him the glass)

He drink some bhang without moving his eyes from Riya..

Shree,sonali & Chotu watching this..

Sonali:-oMG..mein sapana toh nahi dekh rahi..?

Shree:-kamal he yaar..ye Ritz ko hipnotizam toh nahi aata na..ab pata nahi kya kaam karwayegi hamse..?

Chotu(mutters):-ye..toh hone hi wala tha..muze toh kabse doubt aa raha he..

They all start walking to Riya & Arjun..

Arjun starts rubbing his forehead..

Riya:-kya hua..?

Arjun:-pata nahi..muze kuch ajeeb feel ho raha he..

Riya:-oh..shayad bhang ke wajah se...

Sonali:-kya hua..?

Arjun:-muze chakker aa rahe he..

Riya:-OMG..

Sonali:-ye tumhe shayad "bhang " pine se hua hoga..Riya..Arjun ko ghar me lekar jao..aur usse lemon juice pila dena..isase bhang ka nasha kam hota he..

Riya cursed herself.."meri wajah se inaki tabiyat kharab ho gayi..kya zarurat thi muze inhe bhang pilane ki.."

She hold his hand..& they both started walking to home..

They come to guest room of Rathod's house..

Riya made him sit on bed..& she sit near to him..

Riya:-abhi bhi aapko chakker aa raha he..?

Arjun(still rubbing his head):-hmmm..

Riya:-oh..god..ye sab mere wajah se hua he..I am so sorry..mein abhi aapke liye lemon juice leke aati hu..

She about to leave..but he hold her hand..& pull her to him..

She look in his eyes..he is looking lovingly to her..

Riya(in mind):-oh..no..(she remember what Neha has said about "bhang")

 Arjun:-Riya..mat jao..

Riya(mutters):-hey bhagwan muze bachalo..

Arjun:-kya kaha tumne..?

Riya:-plz..chodiye muze..

Arjun:-you are looking so beautiful..

Riya:-leave me..aapne bhang pi he..

Arjun:-tumne di issi liye toh meine pi na..

Riya:-sorry..muze kya pata tha..Neha sach keh rahi he..

Arjun:-Neha..?kya keh raho thi woh..?

Riya(innocently):-she said..that boys get more romantic after drinking "Bhang.."..now you leave me...(she tried to leave..)

He started laugh..

She looks suprizingly..

Riya:-aap has rahe ho..?

Arjun(smile):-Riya..tum bhi na..

Riya:-kya..?

Arjun:-tumhe kya lagata he ke ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte ko 5-6 sip me "bhang" chad jayegi..(he started laughing)

Riya:-what do you mean..?aap drama kar rahe the..?you make me fool..?

She comes to door..& about to open it..

Arjun hold her hand & pull her to him..his both hand on her back..

Riya(angrily):-chodiye muze..aap muze bewakuf bana rahe the..aur mein soch rahi thi ke aapko sach me bhang chad gayi he..muze laga ke aapki tabiyat mere wajah se karab ho gayi he..aur aap..

Arjun:-uff Riya..tumhe ye shart lagani hi nahi chahiye thi..

Riya(angrily):-whatever..par ye mat bhuliye ke mein jeet gayi hu..aur muze kya karna kya nahi karana chahiye..ye aap muze mat samazayiye..

Arjun:-oh..ho..accha itana gurur he tumhe apne shart jitane par..toh thik he muzse bhi ek shart lagalo..aur jitake dikhado..

Riya:-muze koi shart nahi lagani aapse..

She trying to leave..but he don't allow her to move..

Arjun:-kyo darr rahi ho..?

Riya(angrily):-mein darati nahi hu..

Arjun:-toh thik he..jo mein karuga woh tumhe karna padega..done..

Riya(angrily):-done..mein aapse darti thodi na hu..aapko kya lagata he sabki tarah mein bhi aapse darti hu..aap apne aap ko..

Arjun(in mind..):-uff..ye ladki kitani bakbak karti he..

Riya(continue):-samzte kya he..?mein itani aasani se haar maanane walo me se nahi hu..aap..

He pull her more near to her..& starts kissing her lips gently(before she can complete her words..)

She is in shock..& don't even understand when he started kissing her..she just lost..not even giving response to him..

He is still gently kissing her lips..then suddenly stops..& mutter in her ear..

Arjun(romantically):-wifey..tumhari bakbak band karne ka naya tarika kaisa laga..muze toh pata hi nahi tha ke itana aasan tarika he..warna meine toh isase pehale hi try kiya hota..

She is shaking little bit..

Arjun:-toh ab rahi shart ki baat..toh mein jo karuga tumne kaha ke tum bhi karogi..

Before she can come out of shock that he has kissed her..he placed again his lips over her..& this time passionately kissed her..put his hand on her waist..& starts playing with it...his another hand is in her hairs..he pull her face near to him..& passionately kissing upper lip..then her lower lip.. bite her lips..

She is so stunned by all this..she is start shaking..after almost a minute he broke off due to lack of breath...but still don't allow her to leave..

Arjun(breathing heavily,mutter in her ear):-so my brave wifey..its my challenge ..now complete the challenge..

He kiss her her cheek..& look to her ..she has closed her eyes tightly..

Arjun:-wifey..I know you cant complete the challenge but atleast give me response I will take it as if you complete the challenge..

She open her eyes slightly..his lips are still near to her..& he again starts kissing her passionately..she closed her eyes tightly..& starts shaking...

He broke off after a while..& look her..her whole body was shaking badly..her lips also shaking badly..

Arjun:-Riya..?are you ok..

He tightly hug her..& starts moving his hand to her back to comfort her..they remain in hug for sometime..

Arjun:-riya..(he look her..she seems to not shaking now..)muze laga ke...

He remain quite..& hug her again..

She want to move apart..he realize it..

Arjun(naughtly):-so..Dr.Mehata ki medicines asar dikha rahi he..warna tum toh muze haat bhi nahi lagane deti thi..aur aaj toh tumne muze..kiss karne diya..not bad..you are improving fastly..

He put her hair on behind her ear..

Arjun:-you loss the challenge dear..but let me ask you something did you eat something sweet..?

She suprized by his question & manage to nodded negatively..

Arjun((romantically):-fir bhi tum kitani sweet ho..the sweetest dish I ever take..

He put his lips over her lips slightly..& remove it immigiately..

Arjun(mutter in her ear):-aisi dish jise baar baar khane ka mann kar raha he..

He leave her..& walked to door..& leave..

Shree & Chotu who are come in to Rathod's house to see Riya..see Arjun leaving from guest room..& smiling to himself..

Shree:-ye Arjun sir smile kyo kar rahe he..?

Chotu:-chal..Ritz..ko dekhte he..

Riya still in shock..& standing where he left her..

Shree:-Ritz...kya hua..?

She don't answer him..

Chotu:-Ritz..tu kuch bol kyo nahi rahi he..?

She don't give any response..

Shree:-oh..god..zarur Arjun sir ne kuch ulta-sidha bol diya hoga..Ritz..(he shake her)..doctor ko phone karu kya..?

She try to give him answer but cant

Shree:-oh..god..starts dialing his phone..

Riya(finally manage to speak):-he kissed me..

Shree cut the phone..chotu also looking her suprizingly..

Shree:-kya kaha tu ne..?

Riya:-he kissed me..Arjun sir..kissed me..

The both Chotu & Shree..dont belive on their ears..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 11 years ago
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Nice part love it please cont soon
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☺️❤️❤️LUV IT...ARIYA SCENE WERE SO ROMANTIC☺️OMG SUCH A ROMANTIC UPDATE ITS MY FAV UPDATE BY U THNX SO MUCH FOR SUCH A SUPERB UPDATE STILL WAITING FOR MORE KYA KARE YEH DIL MANGE MORE AT LAST THE GREAT ARJUN SURYAKANT RAUTE KISSED MISS OPSS MRS RAUTE M JUST BLUSHING DANCING JUMPIN WITH JOY LETS HAVE A PARTY FOR ARIYA KISS...🥳Edited by kurkuresandwich - 11 years ago
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u are a awesome writer i just lov it. plx cntn sooon
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Loved it!!! Aww... Sweet Arjun!!