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Ok this a random Os I wrote for another couple, on BFF. Changed the names and all :P Hope you guys like it. And yeah I won't continue the work if I don't receive proper responses. I've written it down the entire thing in 2 parts. Part 1 is here, so hit the like button and leave your precious comments pleeeaaassse 😳
"Excuse me, please can you refer me to Dr. Jeet?" a young lady of about 20 requested at the help desk of Jeet clinic. "Why are we doing this Sharon?" Sharon asked for the 20th time in 20 mins. "Ma'am you'll have to wait for 5 mins, plz take a seat" the receptionist replied. "thank you"
"ok Simmi, for the last time i want to know why he left...I'm know he didn't want and that he loved me i could see it. he wouldn't hurt me for anything in this world, whatever he did, he felt it was for my own good." Sharon replied Simmi with tears streaming down her cheeks as she remembered his retreating figure walking away from her, taking her heart also alongside him. "Par he did hurt you na? By leaving you?" Simmi shot back. "Coz he had no choice...i guess...we'll find out pretty soon, that's why we're here" Sharon replied.
Ms. Sharon Raiprakash? the nurse called..."the doctor is ready to see you now" "ok thanks a lot"
As she walked towards the doctor's room she mentally rehearsed on what she had to ask and say. She thought she was prepared to face the truth. She entered.
"Ms. Sharon Raiprakash?" the dr. enquired "yes I'm Sharon, call me Sharon plz ...I'm from St. Louis law college...and i need a few deatils about a patient...your patient in fact"
"And why do you require these details?" "Because i need to know why he left me forever" she thought but she replied "Umm we have an assignment and its kind of like a case study, and he was my subject...but since he left i couldn't ask him anything much" " ok, i know this is a cover up story, but still shoot, i've heard a lot about you from Swayam"
"Swayam visited this hospital often i think coz i found many papers with the hospital's name on it..."
"Yes he had to because he was a patient here, but we didn't have proper facilities to treat him so we referred him to another doctor Dr. Meghana who is a specialist and her hospital has proper facilities"
"Patient? What happened to him?!"
(*note* I'm a psychology student so since i dunno much about bio it might seem pretty stupid k? Bashing tomatoes are welcome)
"He has cancer, secondary stage...it had spread to quite a bit, and it is possible to cure it..."
"But why there? Why did he have to leave?"
"Ms. Raiprakash please dont be upset, but although there are possibilities that one survives the chemo and radiation there are lesser chances of survival when we do surgery"
"And?" she asked dreading the answer.
"He requires surgery...and chemo...it will be quite difficult to cure him...so i referred him to the specialist and now I'm keeping a track on his well being"
"How is he now?!" she asked tears blurring her vision thinking about him undergoing all this.
"I'm sorry to say he is in a very critical position...the chemo has left him weak...he has almost lost his will to live"
'No Swayam you cant lose hope not now...why did you hide it from me...i wouldn't have left you for anything in the world...i could be your support' she mentally conversed with him.
"But why him doctor?"
"Well his dad had cancer, final stage we couldn't save him, in fact he passed away a few days back...just before holi i think...when his dad was diagnosed with cancer we did a check up for the entire family and unfortunately he had it...but he refused to leave then...and when he came to know about his survival chances...well he told me about you...he was afraid of hurting you...breaking your heart if he doesn't survive"
'Why Swayam why?! You could've told me this once...once and i wouldn't have left you...i would've fought with you...we would've overcome it all...hand in hand..we could've been together'
"I want to see him be with him NOW! where is he doctor...gimme the address i'll go to him"
"If you're going i need you to promise me that you'll not cry in front of him accuse him of anything...he's been through a lot of mental stress and more of it will only detoriate his health"
"i...i...i promise. I promise this on my love for him"
The doctor gives her the address and with tears streaming down her face she left the room and went to Rey, told her everything and broke down bitterly into Rey and Simmi's arms.
"i haven't got anyone who loved me...my mom, Swayam all of them left me...but you guys are still there for me in every phase of my life...now i want Swayam back too i'll get him right? He'll come back no? I'll see to it that he survives. He will wont he?" she sobbed
"Sshh babe it'll be fine Swayam will be fine" "haan Sharon dont cry please you've got to stay strong for his sake"
"Rey i think we should take her to the car" "Yup we should"
"Sharon come now...let's go to Swayam k? We'll pack inform your dad and our parents and we'll go...together, BFF we are we wont let you cope with troubles alone."
And they left for Sharon's house where they'd been staying since the past few days...taking home a broken Sharon.
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Swaron OS: Our Flame of love will keep us alive.
"Excuse me, please can you refer me to Dr. Jeet?" a young lady of about 20 requested at the help desk of Jeet clinic. "Why are we doing this Sharon?" Sharon asked for the 20th time in 20 mins. "Ma'am you'll have to wait for 5 mins, plz take a seat" the receptionist replied. "thank you"
"ok Simmi, for the last time i want to know why he left...I'm know he didn't want and that he loved me i could see it. he wouldn't hurt me for anything in this world, whatever he did, he felt it was for my own good." Sharon replied Simmi with tears streaming down her cheeks as she remembered his retreating figure walking away from her, taking her heart also alongside him. "Par he did hurt you na? By leaving you?" Simmi shot back. "Coz he had no choice...i guess...we'll find out pretty soon, that's why we're here" Sharon replied.
Ms. Sharon Raiprakash? the nurse called..."the doctor is ready to see you now" "ok thanks a lot"
As she walked towards the doctor's room she mentally rehearsed on what she had to ask and say. She thought she was prepared to face the truth. She entered.
"Ms. Sharon Raiprakash?" the dr. enquired "yes I'm Sharon, call me Sharon plz ...I'm from St. Louis law college...and i need a few deatils about a patient...your patient in fact"
"And why do you require these details?" "Because i need to know why he left me forever" she thought but she replied "Umm we have an assignment and its kind of like a case study, and he was my subject...but since he left i couldn't ask him anything much" " ok, i know this is a cover up story, but still shoot, i've heard a lot about you from Swayam"
"Swayam visited this hospital often i think coz i found many papers with the hospital's name on it..."
"Yes he had to because he was a patient here, but we didn't have proper facilities to treat him so we referred him to another doctor Dr. Meghana who is a specialist and her hospital has proper facilities"
"Patient? What happened to him?!"
(*note* I'm a psychology student so since i dunno much about bio it might seem pretty stupid k? Bashing tomatoes are welcome)
"He has cancer, secondary stage...it had spread to quite a bit, and it is possible to cure it..."
"But why there? Why did he have to leave?"
"Ms. Raiprakash please dont be upset, but although there are possibilities that one survives the chemo and radiation there are lesser chances of survival when we do surgery"
"And?" she asked dreading the answer.
"He requires surgery...and chemo...it will be quite difficult to cure him...so i referred him to the specialist and now I'm keeping a track on his well being"
"How is he now?!" she asked tears blurring her vision thinking about him undergoing all this.
"I'm sorry to say he is in a very critical position...the chemo has left him weak...he has almost lost his will to live"
'No Swayam you cant lose hope not now...why did you hide it from me...i wouldn't have left you for anything in the world...i could be your support' she mentally conversed with him.
"But why him doctor?"
"Well his dad had cancer, final stage we couldn't save him, in fact he passed away a few days back...just before holi i think...when his dad was diagnosed with cancer we did a check up for the entire family and unfortunately he had it...but he refused to leave then...and when he came to know about his survival chances...well he told me about you...he was afraid of hurting you...breaking your heart if he doesn't survive"
'Why Swayam why?! You could've told me this once...once and i wouldn't have left you...i would've fought with you...we would've overcome it all...hand in hand..we could've been together'
"I want to see him be with him NOW! where is he doctor...gimme the address i'll go to him"
"If you're going i need you to promise me that you'll not cry in front of him accuse him of anything...he's been through a lot of mental stress and more of it will only detoriate his health"
"i...i...i promise. I promise this on my love for him"
The doctor gives her the address and with tears streaming down her face she left the room and went to Rey, told her everything and broke down bitterly into Rey and Simmi's arms.
"i haven't got anyone who loved me...my mom, Swayam all of them left me...but you guys are still there for me in every phase of my life...now i want Swayam back too i'll get him right? He'll come back no? I'll see to it that he survives. He will wont he?" she sobbed
"Sshh babe it'll be fine Swayam will be fine" "haan Sharon dont cry please you've got to stay strong for his sake"
"Rey i think we should take her to the car" "Yup we should"
"Sharon come now...let's go to Swayam k? We'll pack inform your dad and our parents and we'll go...together, BFF we are we wont let you cope with troubles alone."
And they left for Sharon's house where they'd been staying since the past few days...taking home a broken Sharon.
Precap: Dr.: I'm sorry...but Swayam didn't make it. Sharon Rey Simmi and mom shocked and mom faints while Sharon slumps to the ground frozen in shoock
Ok guys that's the end of part one...chapals tomatoes bricks are welcome...coz i know this is crap. However if you want me to continue...leave your views and i shall update part 2 soon :) <3
Loads of huggies and kissies to make up for the crap i've written <3
Loads of love,
Vadhana <3 :)
Loads of huggies and kissies to make up for the crap i've written <3
Loads of love,
Vadhana <3 :)
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