We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
I hate it when i have to comment on last 😭 I feel worst and its only due to you 😡 if you have allowed me to comment then I would be first ughhh

I seriously cant wait Mirah to come back, if she comments first then I would feel little better but I can see someone else grrr MIRAH BABES I MISS YOU ❤️ (SOON WE GONNA BE WE!!)

Coming to update:

I loved the first part, as I already told you 😡 ... the concept was superb and the start was amazing, How i wish it was on going like this in show as well but CV's always think crap ideas 😆
Also what happened to Jeevika? omg i'm scared :/

Viren didnt even told jeevika that he was leaving 😳

omg idk what to say like I'm so dam speechless 😕 for most you made me cry 😭

I hope viren comes back before Jeevika does something (just a thought)
And that date omg bless Jeevika 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Amazing!
Simply loved it! The story is interesting!
Superbly expressed!
Update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
keeni meany im mad at you😡 but wont tell you here why lol
update was super emotional dude you made me cry😭
i feel really really bad for Jeevika😔
Viren should have at least woke her up before leaving
hope everything goes well
update fast dude..i wanna read moree
waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting impatiently lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

u r a superbbb writer really llove the updates

very emotional  concept

pls do continue 

thanks fr the pms 


 

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Such a great topic, I'm glad you chose to write on this. Their emotions can really be visited and tested throughout this.

Great job so far and explain Jeevika's feelings of her lose of motherhood. Yet I still think Viren in oblivious or hasn't really matched up the time. This week, not this week.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
wow awesome
today would have been jeevs due date but alas fate decided otherwise
there was no one with whom she could share her sorrow n on top of all viren was not there, he left considering it unwise to disturb jeevs but still unknowingly jeevs is hurt being alone :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
short but sweet update!
jeevikas pain 😭
 
and viren just went???
 
and what was the story behind her scars???
 
i just have too many questions which need answering so i need an update soon to naswer my questions!
 
UPDATE SOON!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88



its superb
i loved the way of describing jeevika's emotions
awesome 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Superb Update..
Beautifully penned down..
Loved how you wrote about Jeevika's pain and loneliness...and viren being  ot by her side just makes it more sad...The emotions were nicely brought out ..👏

thanks for the PM..Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
omg , 
di what a lovely cuty update just loved it... aww jeevika thinking of her baby but no one to share her feelings wid ... i wished viren was there for her.. but i noe viren will come soon after finishing the meeting... thanks for the PM, di and thanks for updating... i wish we can get lots of likes and comment so u can update it for us <3