We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51 - Page 11

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ElmWizard5017 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
M commenting cuz I owe u a Thankyou for this one :)
SO A BIG THANKYOU ! <3

U asked me if I was liking it ??
M Loving It ! <3

I know how u hate small comments but u have to bear this time ;P

THIS IS A SOO DAMN EPICLY FREAKING AWESOME STORY WHICH WAS AMAZINGLY TREMENDOUS AND SUPERBLY WELL WRITTEN AND ENOUGH TO LEAVE PEOPLE UTTERLY STUPIFIED N HORRIFYINGLY DUMBSTRUCK !

This was line I just invented ;P (some words dun even exist ;P)
I'll be bak until u'll be able to digest this one ;P lol

P.S : Continue soon and bring viren bak in the next part ! Plzzz :)

I gotta run :P
Bubye !
Lots of love <3
Mirah ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have actually read the update before so I am the first technically! πŸ˜†
Haha
What to say about this?
Simply Poor Jeevika!
Angry at Viren 😑
How could he leave Jeevika without even telling her πŸ˜•
I'll get him back for this!   πŸ˜†
The way you described the feeling were superb!
I simply can't tell you how much I owe a thank you for writing this for me! 😳
You're the sweetes person I have ever met in my life thats why I love youuu
πŸ˜ƒ
The update was simply terific!
I hope you continue this soon! 😊
I like the line "Where is the baby, Where is the husband?"
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey amazing update!! Feel so bad for jeevika! Wish viren comes back soon n takes care of her! Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww my baby jeevs did not even eat for two days so. Sad
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so damn furious at viren
ya exactly what os happening
superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGGG! ANOTHER ONE!

It was like cake on top of a yummp Sundae!

Loveddd this update too!

Thankk yuh!

Nd best of luck for yur Exams! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
UnRes.

Awesome update .
U hav left me speechless.
Awww poor jeevika going through a lot of pain😭 she shouldnt do like dis bt wht to do her state of mind is like dat.
Hope viren cums sooon n comfort her its only how jeevika will feel good n cum to sense.

Continue soonEdited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update again😊
You have penned down each emotion of Jeevika superbly...
the pain of losing her child and the guilt is very evident still...
Viren's presence is what she is missing now..

Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
feeling bad for jeevika why viren not take care of jeevika he come soon and take care his wife awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww..
jeevika 
feel so bad 4 her..😎
Yar a little angry  with  Viren
because of him jeevika is in such a condidtion..
Hope Everything sets soon...
Nice update
next chapter soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

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loved ur update...this time jeevika actually needs viren...no one can console her...feeling bad for manvi too...jeevika scratching with blade...gosh this gives me goosebumps...thnx for pm ...update asapEdited by urmil - 11 years ago