We Belong Together - LAST CHAPTER pg. 51

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Perfect ending one can ever get.

Awesome update😃
U know dis is one of my fav.Luvd how beautifully u hav described everything,its just way to perfect.
Every emotions r so well potrayed.
Luvd d way viren handled her wth d love n affection.
Glad dat finally viren found out d reason n dat to by himself.
Finally all d barriers hav been removed both hav confected each other moving into starting a new life😊
Hope u hav never ended d story😔

KUDOOS TO U SLEEPING BEAUTY
A GR8 PIECE OF WRITTING👍🏼

Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

so sorry Karina for the late comment...stressed out due to finals

what should I say for this update

fabulous, fantastic, brilliant update👏

viren lending support to jeevika n jeevika crying his arms

both recovering over the loss of their baby..everything was very well-written

really it was so emotional...loved this story

way u showed virika's emotion was just outstanding

thanx for pm

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Ghosh! From Where Should I Start.. It Was Just An perfect Closing!

Im Sad because such a amzing Story Will Miss Dis One! Wish could hav gt 2-3 More parts!

I Really Enjoyed To Evry Bit Of it!❤️

Kayz You Really Write Amaizng Stories 👏

Loved From beging How Viren handle Jeevika I can bet No One Could have One better then Him Because he Is The one Who Understand her From Inside Out

Loved How viren Solved After Seeing The Doll how he Imagind By Himself

Loved Jeevika She Is Already Broken but Still da care For viren Si Same As She Do ❤️

Virika Actually define Husband-Wife realationship!

the Way They care For Eachotehr is Beyond Words loved The last bit

How Viren Brokn & hw Jeevi Cam to Noe They have Dil ka connection ❤️ they Understand Eachotehr Without utterin any Single Word ..

How Wishh Cvs could have Showed Somtjing Like this As now they Running For TRP They Automticlly could hav Gt Seriosuly Loved Each & Evry Single Bit of The Story...❤️

The Tittle Just Perfect To define Virika Relationship "WE BELONG TOGETHER"

-MeHaK-

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

ok i knw im commenting after a veryyy long tym...

nd im really very sry fr dat...

cuming 2 da update.. wat do i say kany...

da ending was jst so amazing...👏

i smetyms feel u shud be in place of da cv's den we'll gt sme amazing virika scenes...

bt really a perfect ending 2 dis story...

da way u showed hw emotionally viren nd jeevika went through everythng..

nd der love fr each other..

it was jst amazing...

bt alas da story came 2 and end nw😭 i wish i cud read mre...

plzz do write more stories lyk dis...

ur an amazing writer dear...

*bows down*

thnx fr da pm...

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808226

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

thank you soo much for this story...its one of your best works though they all r beyond superbbb!!!!

the dilemma was so well expressed...i being oblivious of all such situations could feel the pain..this was the effect of the story...

Jeevika's loss, her pain couldn't really be described better...the way she went in to ease her pain though drastic was something that comes out to be true...

BEAUTIFUL , PERFECT , FLAWLESS , INTENSE and WHAT NOT??!??

I can read this yet another time...and assuring to be filling up my eyes again...

thats your charm ...thank you for treating us

Loveddd this story...though it was super emotional...but super gorgeous

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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mariarauf48

@mariarauf48

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Okay so ik the story ended but still incomplete without my comment :-P
omg this is the only story who gave ne goosebumps n made me cry :'(
all emotions so perfect n just cz of the perfect writter like u
u described so well jeevika painviren uneasiness his attemos to bring her back to normal
the doll part the guilt vuren had
confrontation omg i was so hooked to each and everyline n dat a writer like u can u
beautuful perfect are even short for
thanks for an amszing story n the pms tooo :-)

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