#1| AsYa Fanfic: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 1-20) *Completed*

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

this is sooo good

asad is a confused idiot! how can he possibly believe tanveer

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

OMG...That was so good ...asad calmed down and den da kiss

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Thank u 4 updating! I hope ur feeling better:-)

Fabulous update! Though ur so mean to stop there heehee. I adore ur zoya:-). She's smart and strong and confident with a great deal of respect for herself. I love how she stands up to Asad which few other people in his life do. I absolutely loved the scene when zoya tells asad "she's ur best friend, it does'nt mean she's my best friend". Will he kiss her, will tanu interrupt, who knos.

Loving ur story. Cant wait for the next chapter. Take care and get well soon:-)

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Aileen134

@Aileen134

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

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Firstly, thank you sooo much for writing it even though you were not feeling well 😃 Get well soon sweetie 😳

Story :

I HATE THAT TANU MANNN !!!!!!!! 😡 and OMG 😭 The way Asad speaks to Zoya!!! is way too mean and unexpected from him. 😭

AND still Zoya cares about his injury! + Asad's ignoring the pain he's feeling just to say those stuff to Zoya ! I can't take this anymore! this TANU man!!! I just hate her from the bottom of my heart!

And "Just because I'm standing here quietly listening to you accuse me for something I haven't done doesn't mean that I will let you worsen your condition," look at how much she about Asad's injury... I don't think he deserves it!

And OMG finally Zoya did say something to him man that made him realize how mean he was to her! go Zoya!!!! * a big round of applause for you Zoya*👏

'Asad gently pushed a strand of hair away from her face and instinctively leaned forward and pressed his lips against her temple.' ASAD 👏 I love you \O/

OMG that KISS <333333333333333333 I lov'd ittt! write sum more romantic scenes :3

AHJHHH MAN why did you stop here???????? you shopuld have wrtten more yah but it's okay get well soon and then write a longer one 👏

Overall : Nice <3 Sweet ❤️ Romantic ❤️ and Lovely 😳 Nicely written

( if there are any mistakes, sorry 😃 )

PM me

Thanks <3

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Edited by Aileen134 - 12 years ago

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asma

@Asyadeewani

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Wow nice but you left us hanging in a cliffy please continue soon

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Wow..it's awesome! Loved it. Glad zoya has the ability to make asad shut his mouth.

Update the next chapter soon.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

awww...nooo how could you... stop there... nice zoya standing up and not let him go... about her POV... that sounds excellent ...
Waiting for next update...

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917659

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

HOW could you stop here??? 😲 Please continue!!!

I love your fanfiction! ? It's very well written and has an interesting storyline.

Could you please PM me (for updates)?

Thank you for this wonderful story.

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Takia

@Bookaholic1988

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

OKAY,WAIT...

So far all I can say is that i just loved it.This is like the most beautiful ff!!!! Oh my gosh I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Once again this is a beautiful ff of asya. Hope you feel better. 👏

Edited by Bookaholic1988 - 12 years ago