10. Tremble-
Wow I always seem to fall in love with the flow of your writing... you seem to sweep me into the land of your characters. 👏
Naina is a dreamer she is so lost that she tends to live in a world where everything would be so love filled and wonderful... sometimes I feel that makes her actually keep her sanity. This Dreamy and lost in her world persona sustains her.
She may like to see all those intimate moments among a couple ... like a Voyeur but indeed it is quite different living it. She got to be a part of her fantasy even though very less of it and not in the same sense yet that moment was indeed very serene... the thudding of hearts and the tremble they both felt. Even though nothing much transpired between them, yet some much more did happen. Wonderful collision... and the words put in.
The whole scene with her neck being exposed to him covering it was intimate and somewhere clicked more than what she herself watched as a Voyeur. The intensity of both situations though similar were very different for her as an experience.
Beautiful ❤️
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