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Pratik bhai,first of all i want to say that u are mindblowing writer and above OS was u'r memorable creation..i just loved it...u always come with unique and different concept just like this...And it was really awesome to memorise tanha wala swaron in u'r story...it was completely bang on update..becoz all the integradients for a beautifull story was added by u beyond perfection..So,whole n whole i just loved this concept,story and tanha..Well,now i am going with update..
Firstly i loved this new way for narration,becoz it is different from other..initially loved the characters of pratik and nehal as a st. louis students,who are preaparing for project.."life after break up"..sounds great here...then karan malik was good twist in u'r story..and loved his answer regarding swaron as a couple..After that loved to see swaron as a dancers and beloved couple..And then loved the total narration point..it was great to read swaron as a narraters..loved the way u describe swaron love in college time,and their running out for marriage..sharon luggege scene was intersting...Well,juliet character was a big suspence for me becoz i was thinking that it would be a girl..but it was different and opposite..she was dog..🤣..but no facts..it was interesting twist..
Swaron break up was a usual twist as the story moves,and the reason behind their break up was a dog...and lesbian thing was shoking...After that u explained so well about their current life,and it was great to read kriyansh as a catalyst here...loved their character...nicole and swayam date was big interesting and full of fun...it was surprising that rey and sharon are gf bf...and then swayam was trying to date with kriya..which jealous sharon..And i liked the way u fold the story at end with kriyansh as a couple..becoz they was really worked hard to make swaron together...Then,swaron saying words or dialogues was awesome at last scene..loved the swayam words specially..
And finally swaron apologise with each others..clear their misunderstandings..and re_emmerged as a magical and lovable couple once again..and yes i like the idea of swayam to running out for marriage again.. and beautifull the ends where swaron and kriyam are couples.."happy and adorable ending"..So,at last i just loved it..it was really great and adventurous to read this story...complete unpredictable..and i enjoyed so so so much...Thanx for giving us such a unique and beautifully perfect story...which is full of wonders...And thanx to characters of pratik and nehal for sharing their project with us...
Awesome os and keep writing..
thanx a lot for pm..it was beautifull ride to memorise tanha..
prateek
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