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That was in its way subtle yet stomach-filling! 😆 To name it as your first try at writing or jigging with words, if you allow me to say so, would be an insult to the bliss you crafted.
I'm dazed at the sincerity that oozes out of the words written. It's like it's written out of happiness and glee, and, not just to please. The sincerity, the simplicity is yet so touching.
The love-the momentary pang of jealousy- the love at its best- the separation- the denial- the reunion; woah Yash Chopra movie huh? 😆
Jokes apart, it was really nice and once again, the sincerity with which you wrote did the work!
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