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Posted: 11 years ago
Hoping ki geet maan ki baatein samaje it's sad for maaneet
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Nice update...
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RECAP

Maan saw this and nodded dismissively that she's not gonna leave her baby doll.Maan carried her towards the kitchen and said,"Mujhe black coffee chaahiye tumhaare haathon se banaaya huva'banaavoge na?"Geet cutely nodded seeing his eyes.His eyes were red due to last night crying and Geet asked,"Kya huva aapko aapke aankhen laal kyun hai..kal raat theek se soye nahin kya?"Maan nodded and said sadly,"Mera sar dukh raha hai!"Geet touched his forehead and slowly slowly squeezed it to make him moan in pain.Geet was shocked and said,"Aapke liye mein adrak waali coffee banaati hoon pain bhi kam ho jaayega!"Maan nodded and Geet stood to make Ginger coffee for him while he slowly took her doll to throw it but Geet said immediately Maan tab tak baby ko sambhaalna!"Maan banged his palm to his forehead and thought,"Yeh baby ke baare mein bhoolti hi nahin!"Geet prepared Ginger Coffee and served it to Maan and slowly took her baby and sat beside him.Maan saw the doll longingly and started sipping his coffee.Her coffee made his headache to get less pain but his real headache was abt to start.

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PART 36

Maan wanted to distract Geet from the baby doll so he said to Geet,"Geet tum college jaavo aaj se'ghar mein baithke bore ho jaavogi!"Geet said giving an innocent smile,"Mein bore kaise hongi..mere saath toh mera baby hai haina baby!"She stroked the head of the doll and was caressing it lovingly.Maan suppressed his tears and said slowly,"Jaan'tum apne studies complete karna chaahti thi na..toh fir aaj college jaane se mana kyun kar rahi ho?"









Geet too thought of this and immediately nodded to him innocently,"Maan mein college jaavoongi!"Maan saw Geet as easily persuadable and he knew what happens in the college.Maan dropped Geet to the college and went to work but here Geet stood holding her baby doll and walked inside the college excitedly.Meera saw Geet and greeted her hugging her tightly,"I missed u Geet!"Geet said innocently to Meera,"Yeh dekho yeh meri baby hai!"Meera was aware of her condition and she gave a weak smile to her and for Geet's satisfaction stroked its head.Geet smiled cutely while Parul came on her way to see Geet standing holding a doll.











Parul got liking to the doll and she wanted it for her so Parul asked Geet,"Geet yeh gudi humein dedo!"Geet clutched it tightly and said scared,"Nahin yeh humaara baby hai gudiya nahin!"Parul was totally smitten with the doll that she even dint think of Geet's emotions and snatched the doll from her rowing with her just like the small child.On that time the doll fell and broke its neck.











Geet was horrified and screamed,"Baby!"Parul was shocked seeing Geet scream and said with anger and annoyance,"For god sake geet..woh sirf ek gudiya tha'tum kyun aise over react kar rahi ho!"On that time she got a tight slap from Meera who stood seething with anger.Parul held her red cheek glaring back at her when Meera said,"Tumhe doosron ki emotiona ki kadar nahin hai toh unhe chedti kyun ho?"On that time Geet felt dizzy and she was about to fell when a strong arms held her and she fainted.












Maan had seen all this & before he come to Geet's aid Meera handled the situation.Maan spitted fire to her and spat,"Iske baad agar tum mere Geet ke aas paas bhi bhatka toh mein seedhe tumhe shamshaan ghat pahuncha doonga'just remember that!"Maan securely lifted and ran to his car.Meera helped Maan to keep Geet bahind the seat while Meera climbed into the car and kept Geet's head on her lap.Maan drove to the hospital and doctor examined Geet.Doctor gave some more tablets to Geet to take and he gave another doll to Geet telling that it is ok.











Geet was delighted to see the doll and she clutched it to her chest securely.Maan felt his heart has been squeezed tightly seeing Geet in that state and try to enlighten her that night.Maan was trying to convince that their baby is no more but Geet dint took it for granted and she wanted to be with her dreamland where she can see her baby alive.Afterall she was a mother and the torture she beared for one week and the lose made her vulnerable.













Maan made Geet to sit on his lap and said feeding the paratha bite,"Jaan tumhe jeevan aur maran ke baare mein pata hai?"Geet who was listening said,"Maan please ab aage mat bolna ki mera bachcha mar chuka hai!"Maan said,"Haan jaan yahi sach hai!"For Geet's eyes spitted fire but Maan slowly lifted her in his arms keeping the dinner plate aside and took her to the balcony which had starry dark sky.It was full moon day and full moon gave pleasant smile towards them.














Maan said,"Jaan tum yeh taare dekh rahe ho'inme hum apno ko dhoondte hai'kyunki humaara maan na hai ki jab log marte hai toh woh log aakaash mein taare banjaate hai..woh log humein aur humaare zindagi ke har ek hisse ko dekhte rahenge taare bankar'toh Geet humaara baby bhi ussi taaron ki tarah reh raha hai..humaara baby is duniya mein nahin hai jaan..woh taaron ki duniya mein hai!"First time Maan Singh Khurana who never believed this was trying to convince his jaan by giving examples like star and all.













When Maan explained,"Geet us din meine humaare bachche ko dekha woh humaari beti thi'.humaara angel'lekin humaare dushmano ke wajaise woh hum se door hona pada'Geet kya tum mujhe sazaa dena chaahti ho usse zinda rakhkar'haan woh zinda hai humare yaadein bankar'humein pata hi nahin chala..in fact mujhe pata hi nahin chala ki tum pregnant thi..uske baad us Vikram ne tumhe kidnap kar diya'aur mein humaare bachche ko khona pada..lekin jaan sachchaayi to yahi hai ki humaara bachcha is duniya mein nahin raha'please Geet is sachchaayi ko maanlo'aur mere paas laut aavo..mujhe tumhaare bagay jeena nahin aati'please jaan mein tumhe aise nahin dekh sakta'please Geet kya tumhe mere upar pyaar nahin hai jis se yeh incident tum bhool jaavo'mujhe maaloom hai ki woh tumhaare ander tha..humaara bachcha'lekin hum abhi tak nuksaan mein nahin hai jaan..hum firse maa baap ban sakte hai'aur is bachche ki kami hum us bachche mein dhoond sakte hai'kya kehti ho jaan!"Maan turned to see Geet but was disappointed seeing her sleeping on his shoulder.Her loose tendrils were disturbing her sleep while she was pouting her petal lips.















Maan saw her angelic face and tucked her loose tendrils behind her right ear and pecked her forehead.Maan lifted her and made her to sleep on the bed and pecked her petal lips and was abt to get up when he felt Geet searching for the doll.Maan came forward and thought of throwing the doll but thinking abt the dream he shuddered and immediately he gave the doll to her hand half-heartedly.















Maan took off his shirt and slept beside her half-naked and saw her sleeping admiring her in sleep.After his hours of admiring he too got tired and his eyes slipped into the sound sleep as he snuggled closer to his wifey.Geet too searched for her husband's warmth and slowly rolled towards him and his hands automatically encircled her soft waist and went inside her top to feel her skin and Geet moaned in her sleep and more snuggled closer.

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On that time in the outskirts of Delhi near the burnt factory..there was a meeting going on..but it was more of begging instead of meeting which was the voice of a girl a 21 yr old..who was pleading,"Please Angad aap mujhe promise kiya tha ki agar mein Maan ki zindagi barbaad karoon toh aap mujhe apnaavoge..mein woh sab kuch kiya jo aapne kaha..mein apne baby sister se pyaar karti hoon lekin aapke liye mein paththar ban gayi lekin ab mein aur dard nahin de sakti Geet ko'usse mein aise nahin dekh sakti'please aapke badle mein meri behen Geet ko kyun itna dard de rahe ho'please!"













The man stood wearing a black shoes..he had shower and his hairs were uneven and the cologne of Men scent entered the nostrils of Sameera who stood with wide eyes and tears were pouring from her eyes.He reached her face and wiped her tears but was totally anger when he slapped her.Sameera stood staring him with total shock holding her cheek when he spoke he was totally angry,"Meine kaha tha sirf Geet ko kidnap karne ke liye uski bachche ko maarne ke liye lekin tum logo ne uski bachche ko kyun maara?"Sameera said,"Meine nahin Vikram maamu ne kiya yeh sab'woh humesha Geet ko apnaana chaahte the since my mom tried to marry her to him!"















That man said angrily,"And u let him do all this!U said he's perfect for this work but why he killed her baby giving that sleeping tablets?"Sameera said with disgust,"Meine unhe bahut roka lekin usse Geet chaahiye tha aur woh he tried to rape Geet giving sleeping tablets!"That man was totally shocked and he cant able to control it and turned opposite Sameera when his face reflected in the full moon light.His face was gaunt and he had round black eyes which had pain and his flat sculptured lips was quivering with disgust but he controlled himself closing his eyes and said turning in enormous contempt and sneer,"Now something have there in Maan Singh Khurana's life to be discussed which is his painful parts'.And am so happy to be the downfall of Maan Singh Khurana!"Sameera was shocked and asked,"Angad kyun aapke ragho mein itni nafrat hai Maan ke liye'please aap mere saath bhi share nahin kar sakte?"
















On that time they heard the police siren and both got scared while Angad said,"Veer'am sure he will be since Geet's kidnap happened he's searching for clues'and i dont like seeing him involved in my revenge..as a matter of fact he's keeping an eye on all the surroundings of Delhi..what is going on here can be informed to him straightly.Look i dont want him to be involved in this u know our secret place and tomorrow am gonna introduce myself as Angad Khanna to the inhabitants of Delhi the most famous singer and am sure Veer and Maan will come to know about this but for now i cant explain i want Maan to accept his mistake in front of Geet and Veer..i want the broken Maan Singh Khurana..then only Anjali sleeps in peace!"












Sameera was shocked hearing a girl's name but dint argue with him and both hid themselves when a police jeep went across them.When the jeep went both Angad & Sameera ran towards their respective cars and both parted their ways towards their destiny.










Precap-Geet entered Maan's office totally broken.Sasha saw Geet's state but tried to stop her but before she cud do anything she was inside the conference hall where the meeting was going on.When Geet entered then every heads turned to Geet's direction including Maan.Maan saw Geet's devastated state and was abt to speak when Geet collapsed in front of Maan on her knees and started crying hoarsely inside his laps.Maan was shocked seeing Geet like this and spoke softly,"Jaan kya huva?"Geet dint answer him and sobbed harder closing her face inside his lap.Maan stroked her hairs lovingly and asked with concern,"What's wrong jaan?"Geet still dint answer on that time Maan said to his client,"Guys pardon me but we need privacy..go and have lunch in pantry and then we will speak!"One of his client said politely seeing Geet apprehensively,"Oh no Mr.Khurana we r ok we will resume this meeting tomorrow if u wont have any objection as seeing Mrs.Khurana's state we can understand u need to be with her importantly instead of us."Maan was grateful as he understood him and said gratefully,"Thank u for understanding me sir!"He said giving warm smile,"Not a problem Mr.Khurana..will see u tomorrow!"Maan shook his hand and said,"Adi!"Adi nodded politely and went with the clients while Maan cradled Geet inside his embrace pulling her on his lap.Geet was totally devastated with something and Maan wanted to ease his pain.




Angad Khanna-new entry..he has grey character due to some reason and have come to take revenge on Maan'


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 10 years ago
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awesome amazing update di

loved it so much loved the new entry
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Awesome...oops new twist wid new character...cont soon
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update geet condition is so painful sameera angad talk sameera love geet but on angad say doing this



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😭😭😭 poor geet and who is anjali? something related to maans past