SO my sorry Viren bhayia updated part 3

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After watching today episode I have come with a small story for v brothers. It will quite emotional but hope you enjoy , so here goes:

It Saturday 1 June 2013 in the evening, Virat had final sign biggest contract of his career. He was really at time and emotional at the same time as been over a months since he seen family and the most person he loves Viren now was idol. Virat hate admit that there has been day he miss his Bhai who has been his biggest strength, his wisdom. Every day Virat would pray Viren forgiveness the way he spoke that day. But Virat knew he could go back until proved himself that Virat Vadhare not a loser and he had so his idol, his hero, his god father brother Viren Vadhare be the proud of Virat. Virat and Maanvi where in car on way Vadhare house return back for good between family and at home. "Partner are you nervous returning home after such a long time." Maanvi broke the silence,Viren smile and took Maanvi hand an said "yeah partner especially after way we left. My ego had come in way of my love for my family. I hurt everyone a lot especially Bhai who has been my idol and inspection. I know how face him after all harsh words I said him. Bhai only trying help get on my feet. And I thought it was charity but actual fact it was his love toward me. Bhai was right it was his right help me but push him way and hurt. Oh god what have done I hate myself because that." Tear roll down Virat eyes his emotional come out on how much his brother viren. Maanvi kiss Virat hand and said "Don't worry Virat Jiju will forgive you. You seen the anger in eyes but I seen the love and care in his eyes for his son. You Virat jiju see as son and no parent will be that upset with their child. Especially you tell about activement he will so proud and will give big hug."

Then Virat phone ring and his mum, Virat up and say "hello." Vanshika Virat and Viren mum start crying a lot in pain. Virat sense something not right "mum what why crying." Virat kept asking his mum but no responds then Kadmire chachi come phone "Wo actually." Then chachi start, Virat get more worried "chachi please tell what happen why you and Ma crying so much." Then Kadmire chachi speak "Viren had accident, he is in ICU and serious please come back Viren needs you he is fighting for his life." Virat shock hear that, park car and scream his lungs and "No" start cry in pain. Maanvi was confused what happen Virat broke down said "Bhai had accident and he is in ICU fighting his life." Manvi had tears eyes listen to this she gave broken Virat hug and said " Virat please control yourself you need be strong the family especially ma and di" Then maanvi stop what must be Jeevika going thought first got sepated from person she the most her life, her baby mannu parted her. Now her heart beat going away from her Viren the two reason she alive. Maanvi her di must totally broken and in bad state. To be continue.

Hope you like it please be free to leave your comment on views and thought about my story it late and tired good night x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love reading these short stories by u...plz continue it


Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was brilliant dear ...👏👏
plzzz do continue...!
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Part 2:

Viren lay on the hospital bed lifelessly in hospital bed with the life support machine keep him alive. On the other hand Virat driving to the hospital having flash back on the way he had treat Bhai, Virat wish he could turn back time. Virat had prayed to god nothing happen Viren as he would never again to forgive himself. The reach the hospital and Maanvi held Virat hand said "Please Virat don't loss hope nothing will happen to Jiju". They held each hand given courage to each other. Virat ask the reception which ward Viren in. As soon First found they rush to see Viren. They got to ward and saw everyone seating out ICU room crying. Virat rush to the ICU room to see him is Bhai, when Inder Chachu said "Virat stop Viren under observations no one allowed go into the room" Virat reply "but chachu Bhai need me". Virat break down and chachu hugs him and say's "virat please control yourself nothing will happen Viren he is fighter".

On other Jeevika sat the lifeless her tears dry up, Maanvi walk her and gave her Di a hugged. But Jeevika did not respond she was still shock. Then Vansika walk said " This morning Jeevika and Viren so happy as found out Jeevika 4 weeks pregnant. They on way to the hospital when Viren stop get gift for Jeevika when a bus drive ran Viren over. Jeevika had seen everything that way she in shock."

Maanvi thought herself why god so curl one minute he give so much happiness and next minutes he take away. Maanvi did now how react either happy for di who has been trying have baby a long time or sad for di as life inside ICU fighting for his life.

To be continue...enjoy and please free for leaving comments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
good job girl
loved the sequence
hope it goes something like that in the show
do update soon
and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read both parts and it's lovely.
😭
Pweeaaaseee update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb part! Loving the story but wish viren gets back sson! and so happy my jeevs is pregnant..make the updates a bit longer,you are a fab writer! 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
seeing jeevika lifeless😭...u r an amazing writer👏
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update!! Please continue soon!! :)

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