SO my sorry Viren bhayia updated part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg!!!!!!!!!!
it was sooo touching...😭 😭
brilliantly written
plzz plzzz continue soon...
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hey really very nice...i loveeeddd it..,plss do continue
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awesome
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nice start should continue...liked it!
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OMG this is great!!
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brilliant dear! Continue soon! So excited to read further!
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this is amazing plz do continue and pm me if possible!
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amazing
loved the concept
Please continue
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Part 3

It been two days but Viren had not regain consciousness the doctor had given his answer that Viren had gone in coma. On the other side Jeevika was still in shock she did not utter a word she did not eat, sleep or talk to any one she sat in one place holding Viren picture on one hand and one hand on her stomach. The doctor had examined Jeevika and said if Jeevika does not come her shock then it could be danger for the baby. Everyone tired talking to Jeevika but all their efforts went vain. But Maanvi and Virat did not give up with help of sholk. What ever had happen before Virat and Maanvi left home. Virat and Sholk had pretend fight like Viren and Virat fight but there was not reaction from Jeevika. Virat and Maanvi was hoping that Jeevika would get up and asked stop fighting but all effect went vain. Jeevika just sat with on emotion but Jeevika where in pain silently praying that her Viren ji would come back her, and unborn child who needs a father.

On the other hand Virat walk in Viren and start shouting "Bhai what hell you think of yourself. You always a idol son, Bhai and husband but your not Bhai. You can't run away from responsibility Bhai babhi need you and your un born baby need you. I know you mad at me as made a mistakes why are taking your anger out on bhabhi when no fault of her own." Virat broke down and started cry holding Viren feet and "Bhai please wake up we all incomplete without you the family, please don't make the mistake I made. Please Bhai I beg you." Then slowly Viren had started move his finger Virat had notices, he run out to the doctor who had exam in Viren and asked Virat to step out the room. The come out and said "look Mr Vadhare it very common that Viren react as he can hear and feel emotion but he in coma. But with love effect ion Viren soon come out his coma as started respond." Virat agree with tear in eyes...to be continue

Enjoy reading and please feel free to leave comments will pm later as it late good night.
Edited by indian10 - 12 years ago

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