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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: naughtykittyyy

nice 1 dear...n its nt atall pakaoo ...its realyy gd

mujhe to laga key jayse main arjun serial ko firse strtng se dekh rahi hoon
sirf  ye thora diffrnt hay iaha sab hay includng aysha too  
like riya n puja s convo...
1st day etf n  she s late
hr is a new trio...aysha chotu shree...riya wl b added soonšŸ˜Š
lv der chttng its veryy  funny
rathor as al ws ...lv his marrg bureu wala diolgšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
bt main riya ko dekh ke shree ki smile dekhke laga kahi wo usse pahele se to nahi janta naa??
precap mein som1 meets sm1 is dfntlyy arjun n riya haynaa..
watng 4 moree


oh thank you so much yrr for liking it..
main toh bohot darii huyii thi ki kisiko pasand bhi ayega ya nehi...
Next chapter on its way..i will update it soon dear...šŸ˜³

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: dashequalsd3

NYC 1 ... Please PM me!!


thank you..i will pm you when i update it for sure...
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Dear friends i am back with my pakao update..hope you like it..and here you go for Chapter 2...

Chapter 2[Part A]

Aisa kyun hua??kyun???

Khoya hoon main

Kahi na kahi khoya hoon main

Apne apme jina aur eye saase

Tanha eye dharkan-tuhare bina..

 

Janta hoon galti hain

Mera hi galti hain

Janti hoon main tum to nehi

tum bhi main toh nehi

Par firbhi hum toh haina

Fir kaise chali gayi tum ..kaise??

 

Kitni baatein hain,joo tumse kehna hain

Eye akhey joo tumhey dhunta hain

Dharkane joo aab bojh sa hain

Sirf mera hi tanhaiya hain

Mere paas kuch aur toh nehi hain

Baas ek adhuri zindegi hain

 

Sawal tho hain paar jawab nehi

Dard toh hain paar dawa nehi..

Shayed tumhara vagwan bhi hain

Paar mere jine ka wajha nehiii!!!!!

 

Wo soch raha hain baas soch raha hainā€¦He was sitting in his Rocking Chair[But it was no more rocking baas kisika ehsaas hain..kisika yaad hain..aur dard hain] and thinking at that moment his cell phone was ringing continuously..He was going to pick it up when his eyes fixed in the time clock it was already 10.00 pm..Ohh he was late. Paar aisa kaise huya?Itne saloon main Roshni ki janey ke baad wo kabhi aise late nehihua..waise Roshni ki hote huye bhi kabhi wo late nehi hota tha Roshni kabhi use late hone hi nehi detithi.Firbhi wo kabhi kabhi late hone ka bahana dundhtah rehta tha,paar aab uske chale jane ke baad wo ghar main hi nehi ate..pata nehi kal kyun ghar aneka maan kiya..jaise Roshni use bula raha thaā€¦

 

10:30 Am

Rathore was already out of conference hall.Shree check it twice outside of the conference hall that Rathore was there or not..But rathore was not there[outside of the conference hall].He was in his Cabin now..So Shree Back to his Team "BakBak".

Here Aiesha tells Riya that what will she do when she was in Office..

And here Chotu was damn exited to know why Shree said "Cute toh hogahiii"Akher chakkar kiya hain??

Fer shree ko unlogo ki taraf ate dekh te hii wo bol parda hain..tune aisa kyun kaha Shree????

Shree: Kiya kaha maine?

Aiesha Riya together says kiya huya?

Chotu : Aiesha  main Shree se puch raha tha ki Shree ne uss waqt aisa kyun kaha?

Aiesha: kaisa kaha?

Chotu: wo wala jabā€¦paar Riya ko dekhte hi rukh jate hainā€¦

Paar Aiesha samajh jata hain aur bolta hain ohh ho ho..ha Shree tumne aisa kyun kaha tha?

Shree:Maine kiya bola? kuch bhi toh nehiā€¦

Riya: Kiya bola usne Aiesha?batao na Chotuā€¦Ohh sorry without your permission I call you Aiesha  aur Chotuā€¦

Aiesha Chotu together says Naam se nehi bulaogi toh kiya Nana Nani kahogi..come on yrrrā€¦

Riya:Nehi nehi Nana Nani kyun bulaungiii?lets leave it..Batao na kiya kaha Shree neā€¦

Abb Chotu aur Aiesha Bilkul chup ho jata hain..kiya bolegi aab wo Riya ko..ki use dekhte hi wo log use Shree ke saath jor diya thaā€¦Aur Shree ne use complement bhi diya thaā€¦

Chotu maan hi maan kaha faas gaya yrrrā€¦

Aiesha: Eye Chotu bhi na koyi Sabar nehi..Riya ke jane ke baad Shree se nehi puch sakta tha???

Kiya ajib situation hain..chotu soch raha hain aab kiya karun..kiya kahoon..Chotu aur Aiesha baas lachroo ki tarha ek dusre ko dekhte rehte hainā€¦

Aur ussi waqt Shree Jorse haas parta hain..Aiesha aur chotu Shree ko Gusse bhare nigaho se dekhte rehte hainā€¦jaise najar se hii use goli maregiiiā€¦ā€¦

Riya:Kiya hua Shree haas kyun rahe hoo?

Shree:Who kiya hain na Rii..Acctually tumhe dekhte hi eye log I mean eye logā€¦ ha ha..fir jorse has parda hain..kuch keh nehi pate has ne ki wajah seā€¦

Scroll down for Part B...

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Chapter 2[Part B]

Shree:Eye log..Eye log'

Riya: Eye log..eye log..kiya Shree..age bhi toh batao'

Now Aiesha And Chotu was covering their face in shame..agar Shree ne puri baat bata di toh pehle din hi Chotu Aeisha kia Izzat reh jaye ga Riya ki najar main'

Shree:bothot koshishoke baat apna haasi rokke bolta hain eye log baas tumeh Complement de raha tha ki tum bohot sweet hoo.Aur you know main tumeh dekkhe kuch jiyada hi Kush ho gaya tha..toh in logo laga ki main tumeh..i mean they think I liked you yrrr'

Riya: So they think You like me..but you don't???!!!

Shree: Kiya yrr..i like you na..you know that I like you very mach..paar in logone toh hamara jodi hi bana diya tha yrr..jaab eye log bol raha tha kit um cute ho tab maine baas itna bola tha ki "Cute toh hoga hi".Kasamse maine baas itna hi bola tha aur kuch nehi.

Riya Shree se saab kuch sunke has parda hain aur uske gale lag jata hain..

And here Two buddies of them watchong them in a shocked mood..Yes the are damn Shoked and when they[Shree & Riya] breack their hug  they loughs at thir antics[Chotu & Aiesha].. they call them Chotu..Aiesha'

But there was no response..so the called them loudly Chotuu'Aieshaaa'.

They are comeback from their Shocked mood..and tell Shree what was that..eye kiya thaaa???

Shree un dono ko batate hain ki he knows Riya from last two years...And they are good friends share a beautiful bonding'

When Shree was finished his line Aiesha and Chotu Start running after him'.

Aiesha: Shree tune toh mujhe dara hi diya tha..Tera friend hain pehle nehi bol saktatha??

Chotu:  tujhey toh aaj main chorunga nehi'

Shree aise main Riya pise jake khare ho jate hain..

Aiesha aur Chotu Shree ko Riya ki pise khare hote dekhhke dourna band kaar deta hain..aur Shree ko kehti hain bahar aa Shree..warna tera kheir nehi'

Shree:Kyun tum nehi pakar sakte o mujhe???

Aiesha: Riya please use hamare  hawale kardo..please kardo na..

Shree: kyun dar gayii meri Rii se..ohh meri Rii kitna strong hain tuu'

Chotu: bahar aa tu shree..Riya mera dost use hamare hawale kardo naa'

Shree haste huye kehte hain kiyaa??..Rii aur tera dost..soch na  bhi maat..Oil your own machine dear'waise tere paas tera machine chalane ki oil bhi nehi hain'wo mera dost hain..mera dost sumjhey? Aur mera dost mujhey tum log jaise jalim ke paas kaise chor sakte hain? kyun Riii??

Aiesha: Kiya kaha tune hum jalim hain..Aab tuu dekhegiii  jalim kisko kehte hain aur jalim kis kisam ki hoti hain..Riya please uske samne se haatjao..please..

Shree: nehi hategi..

Riya: kyun nehi hatungi'jarur hatungiii..tumne un dono ko sataya kyun???

Shree: kiya yrrr tum bhi aise jalim nikli??maine tujhey kiya samjha tha aur tum kiya nikli!!!

Riya: jalim aur main..aab toh main bhi marungi tumhe Aiesha aur Chotu ke  saath milkar''.

Shree: kiya jamana aagaya..vale admi ka toh koyii mool hi nehi'Kiya dosti nibhaiyiii tum sabne..

Aiesha:Abb kiya??

Shree: In sceared tone..no..noo..nooo..nehi  Aiesha maaf kardo naaa..Dost dost naa raha'dushman hain jamana mera'main kaan pakad ti hoo yrr aisa fir kabhi nehi karungi..maaf kado please'

Fer teeno Shree ki halat dekhke Saath main has parte hain..Aur  Shree bhi..

Then Aiesha,Chotu Aur Shree Riya ko hug karte hain..aur use BakBak team main welcome karte hain'

Scroll down for Part C...

Edited by Moumimon - 11 years ago
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Chapter 2[Part C]

11:30 Am

Everyone[Aiesha,Shree,Chotu,Riya] is busy in paper work and their small chitchat..And at that moment a man in white Shirt enter in the conference hall.

Jaab wo insaan entry le raha hota hain tab Riya ki pith uske taraf hota hain..So he can't see her face..

Aur Riya ki mu Shree aur Chotu ki taraf hota hain..Aiesha riya ki paas hii hote hain..wo log apne kaam me itna khoya huya tha ki kheyal hi nehi karte ki koi conference hall main enter kar raha hain..

Riya paper work karte kart eek paper pe ETF ki member ki list aur Signetures dekhti hain taab uski najar ek naam paar atak jati hain ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte[ETF second in command].wo puche bina reh nehi paate aur Aiesha se puch leta hain Eye koun hain Aiesha??

Arjun pise se Riya baate sun raha hota hain aur sochte hain eye koun hain?ETF ka naya officer?Paar eye kiske bare me puch raha hain?..And then He was astonished By his own thought wo kisike bhi baare main baate kare mujhe kiyaā€¦

Aur Aiesha Riya se puch ta hain koun Riyaā€¦

Riya: Arjun Suryakant Rawte !!!

Aiesha: maan hi man bolta hain Sidha Sher ke bare main puch liya..Then she answer her loudly Eye Arjun sir hain ETF ka sceond in commandā€¦

Riya: Sceond In command hain?? Toh fir ajj aye kyun nehi?

Aiesha: kyun nehi aye wo toh pata nehiā€¦

Riya: kyun pata nehi?

Aiesha: Kyun ki wo sher hain aur Sher ke bare main kisiko kuch pata nehi hota..bohot confusing hain yrr..tum abhi nehi samjhogeā€¦jab Arun sir samjhayenge taab samajh jayogeā€¦

Ten Shree Chotu Aur Aiesha  haas na shuru karta hain..

Aur haste haste Shree Chotu ka najar Arjun par jata hain aur wo dono achanak se stop mood mai chali jaate hainā€¦

Paar Riya Aiesha ko abhi Arjun dikha nehi..firse Riya puch leta hain...Kyun Aiesha wo bohot khadus hain kiya?Rathore sir se bhi jiyada??

Shree aur chotu Riya,Aiesha ko rokne ki koshish karte hain paar wo log un dono ki taraf dekhti bhi nehiā€¦

Aiesha: Yrr un dono ka gusse main koyi compete nehi karsakteā€¦firbhi Rathore sir ka gussa toh samajh ata hain paar Arjun sir ka Kuch pata hi nehi chalta ki unhe kaab gussa aajayee..

Riya: bohot confusing hain kiya?

Aiesha kuch kehne lagti hain tabhi piche se koi bol parda hain..

ETF main kiya ehiii kaam karne aayii ho?Uske ke baremain itna sawal kyun??eye saab jaanke tum kiya karogi???Tum boss ho uska Ya fer PHD karna chahte ho Arjun Rawte par????

Aab wo charo apni apni chair chorke khare ho jaate hain..Aiesha aur Riya Arjun ki taraf mud jata hainā€¦

Aiesha maan hi maan bolraha hota hain,kaab aya Arjun sir?Aaj toh hum gayee kaamseā€¦subkuch sunliy kiya????

Paar Riya jorse bool padta hain aur Arjun se puch leta hain koun ho aap???

 

To Be Continuedā€¦..

Precap: Fight between Fighter'

Friends waiting for your coments dear...šŸ˜›


Edited by Moumimon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Starting lines grt dear.!.
nyc concept...
gud gng dear..
all d best..
thanx fr d pm..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
superb update...!!!
loved shree chotu riya and aisha's bonding...!!
kya maara teno ne mil ke bechare shree ko...!!!šŸ˜† awww bechara shree...!!!
wow riya aisha to gaye...!!! ab arjun se kon bachayega inhešŸ˜‰ aur riya to abhi bhi chup nai huišŸ˜†
precap is interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!!
cant wait for the next part...!!!
thanx for the pm...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice update... ek ssaath 3 parts... wow...
update sooonnn...
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aate hi Sher se panga?? Bechaari Rii!!