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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz plz plz cont eagerly wating fr nxt update thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
dii!!!
awsome part.
next kaab likhogi...???????
i can't wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART=13
"kuch baaten..."


SCENCE-
PRESENT ARJUN HOUSE-
arjun stoped his suv outside his house,
(Arjun stil sitting in suv..)
the few flashes comes in front of his eyes..
Riya kahan ja rahi ho,
Rukooo meri baat sono, mera vo matalab nahi tha,
.
riya didnt say any single word,(tears comes out her beautiful eyes,)
riya plz meri baat to sono..
Riyaaa..
arjun shout his name..
he take a long breath n wiped his face,no it was not his dream it was just past flashes..
(Arjun comes out the car)
marched toward his house..
.
FLASHBACK-

One week is passed after bank case-
In conforence room-
Shree talk to chotu-
Yr chotu ager dekha jaye to poora ek month ho gaya hai,
Ch-kis baare main baat ker raha hai Shree.
shree hits chotu shoulder..
ager khane ke alawa kuch or sonchega tabhi to samajh ayega..
main riya ke baat ker raha hoon,
pehale banlore case ke baad usane two week ke chuti le..
or jab two week ke baad vo office aye,to kuch badaly badaly lag rahi the..
or bank case main..
ager arjun sir nahi hote to..
Ch-han yr shree us case ko over huye ek month ho gaya i realy miss her..
.
hu huu..kon mujhe ker raha hai..both turned n saw riya standing there with her cute dimple smile..
both shouted n run toward her,N hug her tightly
Sh-ri
ch-Riya
aree choto mujhe kya marne ka erada hai,
Both imedeatly remove his hold..
riya give a big dimple smiled..
Ri-Guys mujhe nahi pata tha tum dono mujhe etana miss karoge..
Sh-in bit teasing way--riya koe or bhi hai, jo tujhe bahoot miss ker raha tha,
Riya looks enquirly..
both say together
samjhi ya samjhayon..
trio brust out with laugh..
kya ho raha hai yahan..
trio turned n saw arjun n rathore is standing at the door,
RA-riya how u feeling now..
Ri-i m fine sir,
n look toward arjun as he say somthing but no..
but he dont ...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Speek n not even looked her..(Poor riya)
Ra-Guys one importent case aya hai,hoa ke ek resort ke malik ka marder ho gaya hai,
hamen abhi goa ke liye nikalana hoga..
Ar-ye case hamen kyun ye case to local polish bhi solve ker sakti hai..
Rathore giv a dead look to arjun..
Ra-haan sakte hai,per kuch saboot haath lage hai,uska relation don ke sath hai,
--
all left for goa--
Soon they slove case..
(sorry case cut n lot of think changed)
but they got one link about mafiya..
Ar-hamen ek baar us jagah ja ker check kerna hoga..
All nodded n goes that place..
outside one old building..
Rathore n shree goes in one direction ..
chotu in other n ariya together in other direction..
soon firing start ..
Arjun notice riya stil scare to shooting..
Ar-es ladki ka kuch nahi ho sakta..
riya kya ker rahi ho shoot karo ..
Ri-no sir i cant shoot..
Ar-ager tum unhen shoot nahi karogi to vo log tumhenshoot ker denge..
(but riya is riya arjun ke theroy bhi samjha nahi paye)..
arjun notice one gona coming in their direaction..
Arjun comes front n wanna to shoot..but his bullet is over,
(he just act as his bullet is over in front of riya )
Riya yelled sir aap shoot kyun nahi ker rahen hain..
esase behale gonna arjun ko shoot kerta riya shoot that gonna..
YES she shoot to save her arjun sir..
Her face is covered with gonna blood..she was shivering n her body become cold..
Ar-riya r u ok..
riya,
but she didnt say any any single word..
she was in hell shock or opper se gonna ka blood..
jo all over usake kapdon per or face per lag gaya tha..
she feeling not well..
she feel vomting..
.
before arjun come forward to console her..
Soon all etf member came there..
mission is complete..some gonna r arrested n some shoot,
Rathor n choree notice blood on riya's face n dress.
Rathore n all ask her in concerned..


Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Voice..
but riya didnt say anything,
She put her one hand on her mouth n goes in one cornner..
n start vomting..
riya r u ok..
Arjun runs behind her just concern..
chotu gadu ke tarf bhag ker jata hai or ek water botel leker ata hai..
She stil vomting n arjun jentaly pathes her back..
Rathore n shree standind near..
rathore yelled on arjun..
Jaror tumne he use shoot kerne ke liye force kiya hoga..
kya jarorat the ye sab kerne ke,

chuto give water bottle to arjun n arjun forward riya..
riya spread some water on her face n try to clean the blood,
Arjun apna romal nikal ker riya ko deta hai,
riya took n looked up in arjun eyes..she cleary saw concerned for her in his eyes..
both looks each other eyes..

bg music-
chup reh ker bhi yeh sab kuch kehatin hani..
sab kuch kehker bhi chup he rehati hai,
Kabhi ankhon se ker ke esara kabhi bahon ka de ke sahara..
Anhh mera en rahon se hai rista koe..
anjana sa purana kissa koe,
mujhase jo pojhe to kahen ye meri kahani...


rathore got one impotent cal..its from local polish station,
rawte rawte..rathore shouted arjun name ..
rathore voice brock ariya eyes look..
--
shree drop riya in her hotale room..
n rathore chotu n arjun goes local polish station..
--
After one hours-
arjun tense about riya so he goes to meet her room..
arjun comes inside n found she is not there..
(he call her name)
riya riya..
(Arjun bathroom main paani ke girane ka sound sunta hai)
He notice door is opened..
n heared riya's crying..
Ar-in mind-ohh god ye ladki bhi na kitani pagal hai,
ek to eski tabiyat thik nahi or upper se,
arjun took tawal n comes inside,
she was sitting on a flore hide her face on her legs..
n tap is opened..
arjun first closed the tap..
Arjun yelled on riya-
Riya ye kya haal bana rakha hai,had hoti hai lapervahi ke,




Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Arjun bend down n held her by her shoulder n lift up,
ar-meri taraf dekho riya..
riya looks in arjun ..
her eyes totalt red..may be last one hours she continusly crying..
But the reason of her crying is somthing more that was hidden inside..
Arjun say very politly..
Riyaaa..
she culdnt hold herself any more..
she badly needed her arjun today...
she hug him tightly n brock down..
that time she wanna to forget her all fear n pain..
she wanna to feel his warmthed embrace..

chup reh ker bhi ye sab kuch kehati hain..
sab kuch seh ker bhi chup he rehti hain..
kabhi ankhon se ker ke esara ..
kabhi bahon ka de ker sahara..

arjun stood there like a satute..
he was fighting with her brain n heard..
(not hugging her back)
what to do or what not..
Ar-riya riya baat kya hai,
i know baat kuch or hai,
u hidding somthing..
he try to free himself from her hold but she tightly clenched his shirt..
n hide her face in his chest..
--
they stood the same possion for few minute..
after few minute arjun feel riya stop crying..
but in realty..she uncoinsious in his arms..
Arjun lift her in (stil holding arjun's shirt) arms n comes outside..
put her carefuly on a bed..
called imedeatly doctor..
--
After few minute doctor come..
Ar-Doctor plz check her..
Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai..
pehale vomting n ab behosh..
shayad tenstion or dar ke karan..
Arjun stood outside..
n doctor check riya..
after few minute doctor call arjun inside...
Ar-sab thik to hai na..
Doctor jayada ghabrane bali baat nahi hai,bas thodi weekness hai,
Ar-weekness..??think (goli lagne ke vajah se shayad abhi bhi kamjori hai, )
he comes out his thought when doc say..
Doc-aap jayada tension mat lejiye ehsi halat main akser ehsa hota hai,
bus aap enka poora khayal rakhiye..
Arjun confused ehsai halat se aapka kya..


Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Kya matalab hai aapka doc..
Doc-ohh apko nahi pata apki wife pregnent hai..
Ar-What..??
(in big shock)
kya kaha apne doctor pregnent..
Doc-yes she is pregnent..
Ar-lagta hai aapse kuch galti ho gaye hai doc..
Doc-Dekhiye mr rawte main ek doc ho..galti ke to koe gunjayesh hi nahi hai,
infact apki wife ke pregnancy ko almost
one week ho gaya hai..
shayad unhone apko bataya nahi ya shayad unhen bhi nahi pata..
App pehale enke kapde change ker dijiye..
ehsi halat main jayada der rehana dikh nahi..
afer saying this doc left leaving behind confused shock acp arjun rawte..
Arjun moved his hand on his hair ..
n waiting for riya's ..
ke kab vo apni ankhen kholo..
doctors word hitting his mind..
but hows thats possible..
jahan tak mujhe pata hai..
riya ke abhi tak shadi nahi huye..or mlna he uska koe bf..
orr..
nooo no ehsa nahi hai,
haan ehsa ho hi nahi sakta..
mere or riya ke bich..
but how..??
arjun try to remind benglore night..
(vo apne dimag per kaphi jor deta hai but kuch yaad nahi ata..)
Arjun benged his feet in fustration..
per mujhe kuch yaad bhi to nahi but his cop mind cant ignored all this fact or clue..
the female fragnace n riya's earing,..n her brock bangles,
ensab ka matlab to saf hai ke...
per main etana niche kaise gir..
nahi nahi main ehsa nahi ker sakta..how culd i betray with roshani's memory n lov..
he shut his eyes tightly for few second...
a beautiful face comes in his thought..her smile ..her beautiful dimple smile..
yes arjun saw riya..
(ehsi haalat main jayada time tak gile kapde nahi pehane chahiye)
sudenly doc ke baat arjun ke dimag main ati hai,
Arjun took tawal n hegitatly sit closer to her ...
TBC-BIG TWIST..
Banglore night ke kahani...
ab arjun kya karega...
is he trust riya...?
if u interest to read more..
then dont forget to read my story ..



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Posted: 11 years ago

R U ALRIGHT guys...
ya abhi bhi shock main hoo...
realy sorry if i dissipoint n hurt anyone...
as i say before meri story hat ker hai...
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i think for today its long enogh..
bore the ya mast...
like new twist or not,..
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Plzzz apni raye jaror den..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update, you must continue.
Thanks for the PM and do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update... so Arjun findout wats wrong with Riya... nd he knws Riya s carrying his baby... waiting to see wat he vl do nw... update soon