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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part dear . Continue soon:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u so much my drs frs...
for liking n leaving ur lovly comment...
its realy importent me to writed next part...
n realy sorry if i dissipoint any one...
i will update next part tomarow hop u like n enjoy...
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so finaly wait is over...
ariya ke shadi jald he hone vali hai flash back mai...
lolll i m so excited,..
but wait for two more part...
i will posted two chaps tomarrow...
more comment Quiq update...
hahhaa...
so ager janana hai what happened in ariya's life so dont foregt to read my story..
Kya yahi pyaar hai...???

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Posted: 11 years ago
Han yar kal ka waite nahi horaha hain and mujhe tumhari har pasand ati hai or ha thodi ther hojati hai comment karne mein kyun ki mein kahi na kahin busi rehti hun fir bhi mein parthi zaror hun thora si par parthi hun comment karneka jab bhi time miltha tab zaroor karti hun thanks and sorry late comment karne ke liye and app sabse mein last bar req karahi hun please ad me in your buddy list mere liye asnai hojaigi please please please and sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Kuch to hai,jo ajeeb hai..
tera samne hoker bhi najare churana.."


SCENCE-Riya carefuly put arjun on a bed,she removes his shoes n cover arjun with one blankate..
She wanna to leave but arjun hold her hand..
arjun mumered plz mujhe jhood ker maat jao,
plz ,sab mujhe jhood ker chale gaye mera best fr,
mera pyaar,main bahoot akela hoon,bahoot akela..
(arjun's voice filled with pain lot of pain,riya culd'nt hold her tears she sits closer to him n moved her hand on his hair,
kahin nahi jaongi aap ko jhod ker sir kahin nahi,
ager aap chahenge tab bhi nahi,
Arjun moves his hand n touched riya's face,
(Baki ke kahi do part ke baad lolll )
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TIME-MOR 9 O'CLOCK-
Case is over etf find kalki devi,
all say thanks to rathor n his team only ariya r missing..
Ra-dammit ye rawte or riya ye dono he kal raat se missing hai,
Sh to Ra-sir arjun sir ka to pata nahi per riya vo pehale he jaa chuki hai,
use koe jarory kaan tha,sorry sir kaam kuch jayada argent tha esliye vo aapko inform nahi ker paye,
Ra-thik hai,per ye rawte
pehale to yahan aana nahi chahata tha or aab yaha se jana nahi chahata hai,
pata karo ye rawte kahan hain,
hamen jald he mombai ke nikalna hai,
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On the otherside-
somone try to oppen his eyes but he feel his head is heavy..
Ahhh mera sir etana kyun ghum raha hai,
(he put his hand on his head n pressed his head with his fingers)
Main room main kaise aya,
jahan tak mujhe yaad hai,
main to riya ke sath function main dance ker raha tha,
he try to remind what happend last night,
yes maine function main ek drink pee the,or usake baad riya ke sath dance kiya tha,
Ahhh ..phir phir kya huya tha..yahh shayad mera ser ghumane laga or riya mujhe es room main le aye,
ahhh usake baad kya huya mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha,
arjun lift his graze here n there..




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(Arjun blanket hatata hai or bed per baid jata hai) his all shirt butten is open.. he feel femail fragnance on his blacket,
Ye fragnance..ye smell to kisi lady perfume ke, bahoot jaani pehchani se,yes shayad riya haan riya use kerti hai,ye ferfume,per eski smell mere blanket main kaise.
he lift his graze other side n saw one glass n one note.
Arjun took that note first,
I kno sir apka ser abhi dard ker raha hoga, es glass main lemon water hai,use pee lijiyega ser dard kam ho jayega..
miss statics..
unknowngly smile crept on his face,yes he is smile..
he even dont belived why..? Arjun took that glass n drank all in one..
arjun try to get up from bed aauch ..
(somthing pinch in arjun's hand ,arjun apna haath hatata hai)
he saw one earing ,the same earing which riya had weared..ye riya ka hai,per yahan kya ker...before he think or remind more somone knok the door.. Arjun sir r u here.. it was shree, haan aa raha hoon..
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All Etf team come back to mombai.. but riya take leave for few days.. Arjun badaly missing her but why he hav know idea.. he missing her antics.. her dimple smile,her hygenic freank nature,her statics thoery.. finaly after three weeks leave she come back.. arjun wanna to talk her wanna to spent some time.. but why..he even dont know his ans.. But when riya back in etf
(arjun dobara apne angry look main aa gaya)
when arjun wanna to talk her riya ignored n when riya wanna to say..us time arjun ke pass waqt nahi.. finaly one day arjun saw riya on coffice counter.. arjun think in mind-kuch to hai jo chut raha hai, jab se ye banglore se vasise aye hai,kuch badal se gaye hai,main jab bhi eske pass jata hoon,ye etana ajeeb kyun behave ker rahi hai,
Ar-Riya mujhe tumse karni hai, Riya feel litle nervse ,
Ri-yaan boliye sir kya baat hai.. sudenly riya's ph
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phone start ringing..
excuse me sir..
she say excuse n left..
arjun bang his feet on floor..
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few minute later-
SCENCE SHIFT-
in conference room-
Ra-guys we hav a new case..
case-Aaj more indian bank se paise se bhari ek gadi bendra jane ke liye rawana hone vali hai or hamen un paison ko sahi salamat us ke jagaha tak pahoochana hoga..
kyunki kuch unkonw logon ne dhamki de hai,
Ke vo en paison ko loot lenge..
(i think u all known very well about case so i dont want to explain)..
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Ra-dammit we lost the connection..
etani sicurity ke baad bhi vo gadi gayab kaise hogi..
Shree jaldy se location track kerne ke koshish karo..
Ch-Sir arjun sir ka bhi kuch pata nahi chal raha..
Riya was warried --
i hope arjun sir thik ho,per mera man etana kyun ghabra raha hai..
Finaly shree is able to trass the location..
All etf member stood outside waiting for backup..
But riya is riya..
(Jab uske arjun sir ke life danger main ho to bhala vo kaise hath per haath rakh ker baid sakti hai)
riya goes inside without knowing any one..
On the other..
arjun fight with goans..his all bullet is over now..
Riya goes inside holding her gun tightly in her hand..
Arjunsir arjun sir..
Finaly he saw arjun..his arjun sir..a big smile crept on her face,
Arjun sir riya shouted..
arjun looked toward riya n unfortunatley goana to..
Arjun shout..
Riya shoot but her full focus on arjun..
unknowgly her heart jump with joy,
Arjun yelled riya kya ker rahi ho goli chalao..
Sudenly she feel dizaly..
her head is moving round n round..
She feel dark around her..
she feel arjun say somthing but she unable to hear properly..
arjun run toward riya to save her,
but befor arjun can reach..
one bullet hit on riya's left arm,
arjunn sir..riya fall on the ground.
Riyaaa.
Arjun took her gun n shoot that gonna.
arjun bent down



Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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PRESENT--
arjun drive his car toward his house..
No kuch nahi hoga tumhen riya or na he mere bachhe ko,
main phir se apni family kise kimmat per nahi kho sakta ,
use din meri life es kadar chang ho jayegi maine kabhi soncha nahi tha,
Main janta hoon maine sirf tumne dhook ke kuch nahi diya kuch nahi..
arjun stop his car outside his house-
In hospital-
Ayesha stand near ganpati temple n pray to god..
plz god meri choti behan ko or uske bachhe ko bachha lijiye,
lise se beintiyahan pyaar kerke ke etani badi saja to mat dijiye,
ek ye bachha he to hai dono ke rishte ke door ager use kuch ho gaya,
nahi ji payegi riya..
bachapan se leker aaj tak sir dhook ke use kuch nahi mila,
aab uske ye khushi usase maat chinana god..
tears comes out her eyes..
Sameer comes near n put his hand on her shoulder..
she culdnt hold herself any more n brock on sameer shoulder..
sir vo thik to ho jayegi na..



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Flash-

Arjun cubbed riya's face..riya riya tum thik to ho na..
riya saw one familer face..but not able to hear what he says..
riya kuch nahi hoga tumhen..
dont close ur eyes..
shhh ..
She says with brocking voice..ar.. rrj..u nn si..r
n try to touch his face..
arjun lift her litle up n hug her tightly..
riya tumhen kuch nahi hoga main hoon na..
Arjun imedeatly lift her in his strong arms n run outside the building..
outside building
(medical team pehsle hi moojood the)
rathor n all othere team member aressted n take the rest charge..
Arjun stood bit away..
Sh-To arjun-Sir goli bus chu ker nikali the, bus thoda sa cut hai,shayad dar ke karan behoosh ho gaye the ..
Arjun without say anythink left there..but riya eyes fix on arjun..
tbc-
Finaly arjun new what happened last night,
some cute ariya moment..
N arjun's babay...????
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bore tha ya mast plz jaldy bataye ..
i m waiting ur feedback..



Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will post next part late night..sorry for any error now enjoys...
ager bore that to maafi chahoogi..
phire next part ke baare main kuch sonchana padega..
ke post karon ya na karon..
pm late
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres

Aww.. nyc part...

Vo bank k paise wala case was one of my favs cause it had Ariya...


Yippeee...!!! 


Riya k saath Bangalore main kya hua hai???
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
as always awesome dr.

really fantastic.

precap looks exciting.

continue soon.