Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 90

awesome update dear👏, i guess now payal is arpita's daughter. and rahul is he not tanya's bf nd wat link them to arpita something is fishy. ur last sentence is she in her senses she is telling yash congrat instead of apologising, thanx for the pm and this lovely ff.👍🏼😊 update soon dearie u re awesome😊

Very Nice Update Indu

Third time's not a charm for Yash 😔.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks pal (Psst...may I know your name. I never know how to address you.)

Yash is definitely connected to Aarti. As for his accepting Arpita's baby...we know how Yash is. So that part should be beyond doubt.

WOW what a twist indu superb update didn't expect yash to marry and she's pregnant .hoping for a bit of light to come yash way example the author of the journal .still hating arpita

Excellent piece of writing dear!

Edited by Surish - 11 years ago

Fantastic turns in the path, Indu. I'm clinging to every word of prose and poetry, severely regretting that I can't update each and every review right now!

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Fantastic turns in the path, Indu. I'm clinging to every word of prose and poetry, severely regretting that I can't update each and every review right now!

 

In appreciation of beautiful and poignant words...

 

A long conviction of worthlessness builds strong walls.

 The nearer you approach me...the blinder I may strike back.

 I fight against the very thing I want as my defender,

I fight against surrender. 

I am told that love is stronger than strong walls...and in this lies my hope.

And if I know myself...I will fight against even that hope.

 

Oh, dear God...How many times will I end up feeling this way after reading a chapter? Immediate twinges of pain, slowly followed by an odd mixture of sadness, hope, and happiness, given all that we know of Aarti's samarpan so far...If Aarti's heartfelt words impact me so, it is all due to you, Indu...

 

*RESERVED*

Borna, I just hope I get issues of this particular relationship clear by next update. I would hate it if anyone is left in doubt about Arpita's motives and Yash'secision on line of those motives. Also, this part of Yash's life I was very clear from the beginning. I always meant this as some sort of a triangle...with a hidden third side...Yash marrying Arpita while he is in love with essence of Aarti...like Triveni, where River Saraswati is the hidden source and we only see Ganga and Yamuna, whose merger may be called Sangam but there is a clear line demarcating the two rivers. Gosh, did I go tangent with that analogy...but kya karoon, it is what I had always in mind.😳

You said it pal...those emotions are exactly what describe Aarti and Yash. Sorrow is easier to handle in a way...but hope isn't, cause it pulls you both ways. That's why a person coming out of a dark tunnel is vary of the blinding brightness, cause they cannot envision the other side of it.

Thanks...Don't you worry about the reviews. As long as I know you are with me I am fine.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

Borna, I just hope I get issues of this particular relationship clear by next update. I would hate it if anyone is left in doubt about Arpita's motives and Yash's decision on line of those motives. Also, this part of Yash's life I was very clear from the beginning. I always meant this as some sort of a triangle...with a hidden third side...Yash marrying Arpita while he is in love with essence of Aarti...like Triveni, where River Saraswati is the hidden source and we only see Ganga and Yamuna, whose merger may be called Sangam but there is a clear line demarcating the two rivers. Gosh, did I go tangent with that analogy...but kya karoon, it is what I had always in mind.😳

You said it pal...those emotions are exactly what describe Aarti and Yash. Sorrow is easier to handle in a way...but hope isn't, cause it pulls you both ways. That's why a person coming out of a dark tunnel is vary of the blinding brightness, cause they cannot envision the other side of it.

Thanks...Don't you worry about the reviews. As long as I know you are with me I am fine.😊

 

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

Oh my! What a beautiful update it is. I love the connection that you always do between Aarti and Yash, even though they aren't together physically but still the connection that they felt unknowingly is there. And oh, you've also gave a special character of Aman another one of my favorite in PV, and he's a true friend of Yash in any word. By the way, is that Aarti' journal? Why is it in Arpita's house? Waiting for the next part, I know answers are there...😳

Sunrio...thank you for being with me on this and understanding the inherent connection I have tried to show that existed between Yash and Aarti from the day she was born.

Arpita had confiscated Aarti's general before their final exams in college (Part 6).

Arpita has used Yash...absolutely. Let's see how this will turn out.😊