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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IF_FRIENDS

i read NEW ENTRY n THE HAUNTED FORT
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i lyk the entry of acp asha
in ur stories u try to portrait female cops skill ๐Ÿ‘
u put efforts to show female cops capabilties...
really lovely n fantasic stories ๐Ÿ‘
keep it up



thanks a lot aman di!!!๐Ÿค—
ya i want the girls especially poorvi to be the angelina jolie of CID hehehe
i also like to bond them especiallt poorvi and tasha๐Ÿ˜‰
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girls cid team 6
a very different case



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 Inspector Poorvi slowly opened her eyes. Her back was aching very badly, she felt as though her neck was sprained and it seemed almost impossible for her to move her limbs. There was not even enough place for her to lie straight. About 20 feet up there was an opening from which bright light flooded in, but through a cage which covered the opening. Poorvi lay still for about five minutes, after which she tried to move.
It was very painfull but somehow she managed to sit up against a wall. She was having difficulty to breathe in such a tiny place. Poorvi looked around, and to her horror she realized that she was lying at the bottom of a twenty feet deep well!! But where was she?(the location of the well), and how did she reach there?
Poorvi took a deep breath and tried to recall what had happened, and bit by bit it came back to her...

scene 1-

 It was two in the night., very late especially for women to travel alone and that too by lonely, deserted roads. But inspector Poorvi knew she was prepared to face situations which women do when they travel alone at night. And she was also a CID cop, she knew how to handle those situations well (one jhaapad)๐Ÿ˜‰. That is why when Poorvi was returning from her friends party late at that night she decided to use the mariner road which went through a forest, and moreover she would reach her house quicker via this road than by the main highway(which would mostly be jammed by heavy trucks), and at least have a little nap before she went to the bureau the next morning.
 Poorvi was driving quite smoothly, that too with great speed (as the road was deserted) humming a song to herself. She was facing no problems at all until suddenly,  a shadow at a distance of a few feet from her car appeared from the jungle on the right. As she was driving at great speed she immediately applied her breaks, yet she knocked the person down(luckily her car had slowed down then).
 Poorvi, whose eyes were dull with sleep suddenly widened with fear. Her sleepy mind was now fresh and in shock and her heart was racing. As she came back to her senses in a few seconds she immeiatly got out of her car and and went to the ai of the person whom she had knocked. It was a young girl, about thirteen to fourteen years old, her clothes were torn and her limbs where badly wounded. She looked dead tired. Luckily Poorvi had not knocked her so hard and the girl was still concision, mourning in pain.
"O my god! Aap theekh to ho na beta. Mujhe maaf kar do itni tez gaadi chaala rahi thi magar aap ko bhi is tarah aachanak bhaagte hue gaadi ke saamne nahi aana chaiye tha. Aagar muje break maarne mein deri ho jaati thi to." Poorvi said. The young girl turned her eyes towards Poorvi. She was trying to say something
"Didi...didi...bachao" She said  with a lot of fear.
"Kisse bachao beta? Bolo tumhe kiss se  khatra hai, aur tum itna late iss jungle mein kya kar rahi thi?" Poorvi asked
"Didi.didi please mujhe bacha lo." Was the girl's reply, in the same tone.
"Kisse beta? Mujhe batao mein tumhaari madat karungi." Poorvi said with a smile
"Didi..vo log mujhe mar dalenge...bachaoo." The girl said again
"Kaun log beta?" Poorvi asked. But the girl gave no reply. She just kept on repeating the word "bachaoo."
"Ek minute." Poorvi said as she got up and walked towards her car, and then jogged back with a bottle of water.  She then helped the girl sit up leaning against the car and said
"Ye lo paani pi lo aapko aacha lagega." Poorvi said as she put the bottle to the girl's lips, who immediatly drank heartly the contents. Poorvi eyes suddenly felll on the girl's wrist, as she was holding her hand
"Ye kya?" Poorvi thought to herself as she noticed several slit marks on the girl's wrist "Iss ladki ne khud ko maarne ki koshish ki, lakin kyun?"

"OO to tum yahan par ho." A manly voice said from behind Poorvi's back. The young girl's eyes widened with fear. Poorvi tuned and  she saw three muscular man standing there.
"Madam iss ladki ko humaare huwaale kar do." One of them said
"Nai didi nai" The young girl said throwing her arms around Poorvi's waist "Ye log bahut gaande hai, mujhe inke pas nai jaana. Ye log mujhe bahut maart pithte hai. Nai didi please." The young girl requested
"Kya! Maarte hain." Poorvi asked
"Haan didi."
"Ae madam ladki humaare hawaale kar do." Another man said
"Ek minute haan beta." Poorvi said as she slowly stood up and then turned towards the men.

"Tum log ladki par haath uthate ho!" poorvi said
"Ae madam uthate hongay bhi to aapse matlab?"
"Sharam nahi aati aisi jaanvaron jaisi harkatein karte hue." Poorvi said
"Dekho madam sahi salaamat ghar jaana hai to ladki ko hume do."
"Arre tum jaiso ko jaanvar kehena bhi janvaaron ki badnaami hogi." Poorvi said angrily with gritted teeth
"Monty, yeh madam aise nahi maanegi, ek kaam karo ladki ko utha lo. Dekhte hai ye kya kar leti hai." One of the men said, as another moved forward.
"Nahi! didi bachaoo." The girl cried. But Poorvi stood motionless staring at the men angrily. Just as monty was walking past her, poorvi caught hold of his hand and twisted it behind his back. He cried with pain.

"Baachi par haath uthaogay huh! Aabhi batati hun kitna daard hota hai." Poorvi said as she let go of his hand and caught his collar instead, and gave him one of her strongest jhaapad(slap). The man fell down, his lips bleeding, and he was crying with pain. Another man walked forward. He raised his hand to hit Poorvi but she caught his hand mid air, punched him in the stomach and gave him a hard punch on his cheek. He too fell with blood coming out from his mouth.
 The third man came forward with a stick and hit Poorvi on her stomach with it. It worked as Poorvi fell down with the thrust. The other two men each held her hand and pulled her up.
"Baadi chaalaki kar rahi thi na." He said "Abhi bataata hun." He was about to hit her again, but just then Poorvi kicked him hard in the stomach and he fell down hard.
 She struggled and bit and got her right hand freed from the man's grip(who was holding her her) and gave him a solid punch who fell flying on the ground and then immediately got up and ran away. The man who was holding her left hand just let go off her hand and ran away.
The man whom Poorvi had just kicked slowly got up, still holding his stomach.
"Dekho ye tum theekh nahi kar rahi ho. Pachtaoogi, tumhe saaza milegi."
"Aacha, aisa hai kya, to fir aao, do mujhe saaza."
The man looked at her and slowly walked forward. He was about to raise his hand, but before that itself Poorvi kicked him hard and he fell on the floor. He then got up and ran away crying for help.

Poorvi smiled
"Bada aaya mujhe saaza dene wala." Poorvi said. She had barely turned when the young girl flung her arms around her.
"Thank you didi." She said "Aapne meri jaan bachaai, thank you so so much."
"Arre kya aap bhi beta, isme thank you ki kaisi baat. Infact mujhe aapko thank you bolna chaiye. Aachi exercise karva di. Bas agar teen ki jagah dus pandra hote the to aur maza aata tha."
"Didi aap bahut sweet ho. Vaise aapne itni aachi karate kahan se sikhi?"
"Kaarate hahaha. Vo hume training mein sikhaiyi jaati hai."
"Kaunsi training?"
"CID officer ki training."
"Oh haan ab yaad aaya. Mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki aapko kahan dekha hain. Aap CID Inspector Poorvi ho na."
"Arre wah beta aapne to mujhe pehechaan liya."
"Kaise nahi pehechaanti didi, aap meri role model ho. Mera sapna hai ki aap jaisi bano."
"Arre thank you so much beta." Poorvi said with a blush๐Ÿ˜ณ "Aap ko bhi CID inspector banna hai?"
"Didi please aap mujhe aap mat bolo. Mujhe bada ajeeb lagta hai."
"Okay dear, jaisa tum kaho, ab theekh hai?"
"Haan didi thank yoiu."
"Arre ab isme thank you ki kya baat, vaisa tumne bataya nahi, kya tumhe bhi CID officer banna hai?"
"Haan didi, CID Inspector Srishti."
"Srishti, bada pyaara naam hai tumhara."
"thank you didi."
"Lagta hai thank you tumhaara takiya kalaam hai. Chalo srishti ab baki ki baatein gaadi mein karein?"
"Okay didi."

The girl was still not able to walk properly so Poorvi supported her to her seat, and then they drove off.
"Acha srishti, mujhe ek baat batao ki aap itni raat ko jungle mein kya kar rahe the?" Poorvi asked
 Srishti's face became serious, tears rolled down her cheeks.
"Didi vo darasal hua yun ki do saal pehele ek accident mein mere mummy-papa ki maut ho gayi."
"Oo my god, i am sorry."
"Didi phir mujhe meri aunty ke paas rehena pada, vo bahut gandi thi, mujhe bahut marti pitti thi, Unki beti, yaani meri didi bhui mujhe bahut tang karti thi. Aaur phir ek din meri aunty ne mujhe kisi uncle ke paas chod diya. Vo uncule mujse pataake banvaate the, mujhe bahut maarte peethe the, aur pure din mein sirf ek bread ka tukda aur teen glass paani hi dete the."
"Child labour, ye to bahut galat hai."
"Haan didi. Aur phir mene aaj vahan se bhaagne ki koshish ki, aur mujhe aap mil gaye. Please didi mujhe vahan, ya meri aunty ke pass dubaara mat bhejna." The girl said with tears.
 The young girl's past was in a way similar to Poorvi's. Even Poorvi had lost her parents young and had a wicked stepmom. But then she had been brought up by a sweet man who looked after her like her own father. But this girl, she had no one. Poorvi too got tear eyed.
 She stopped the car and looked at the girl.
"I promise beta dubaara kabhi tumhe unke pass nahi bhejungi."
The young girl embraced Poorvi and said
"Thank you didi."

scene 2(at the bureau)-
"Kya phir se postpone ho gaya." ACP Asha said as she was talking with someone on the phone. "Aacha theekh hai." She said and put the phone in her pocket.
"Kya hua mam." Inspector Shreya asked as she, Tasha muskaan and Kajal looked curiously at their ACP
"Vo nai senior inspector aane waali thi, vo aaj nahi aa rahi. Kuch kaam aa gaya usse. Aab kab aayegi pata nahi."
Just then Poorvi entered holding the young girl's hand, who was now in fresh clothes and had bandged her wounds.
"Good morning mam." Poorvi said and all the officers turned and saw her. But all their eyes ell on the young girl "Sorry mujhe aane mein der ho gayi."
"Vo theekh hai Poorvi magar ye tumhaare saath baach kaun hai?" ACP Asha asked
" Mam ye srishti hai." Poorvi said "Aur srishti beta ye hai Asha aunty, Shreya didi, Tasha didi, muskaan didi aur kajal didi."
 The officers smiled at the young girl who smiled back. Asha said
"ek minute ek minute. Asha aunty se tumhaara kya matlab han? Ye sab didi aur mein aunty??๐Ÿ˜†
'Nai nai mam aap bhi didi v..vo aunty galati se keh diya sorry mam." Poorvi said
"Arre nai nai mazak kar rahi thi aunty hi hun mein."
"Nai nai mam aap didi hi hai." Poorvi said
"Aacha vo sab chodo Poorvi aur bataoo ye baacha kaun hai." Asha asked
"Haan mam batati hun vo huya yun ki-" Poorvi told the whole incident which happened the previous night and all the cops listened attentivly.
After Poorvi finished all the cops felt very sad for the girl.
"Ye to bahut bura hua aapke saat beta. Shaabash poorvi tumne aacha kiya." Asha said
"Bechaari baachi. Aacha kiya ki aap bhaag gaye beta, aap bhi bahut bahadur ho." Tasha said
"Thank you tasha didi." The girl said with a smile
"Pata hai mam isse bhi CID Inspector banna hai." Poorvi said
"Arre wah. shaabash beta. Aap zaarur banoge ek din." Shreya said
"Haan Shreya didi! thank you, mujhe Poorvi didi jaise banna hai." The girl said.
"Hahaha aap bahut sweet ho beta." Poorvi said
"Zaruur beta aap zaruur banoge, ho sakta hai aapki Poorvi didi se bhi aachi cop bano." Asha said
The girl blushed.๐Ÿ˜ณ
"Aacha poorvi, Shreya tum dono ek kaam karo, iss pyaari bacchi ko sheher mein jo naya mall khula hai na vahan le jao. Iske liye khoob saare aah kapde kharidna aur vahan par ek bahut aacha hotel hai sabse upar vaale floor mein, usse vahan se ek bahut tasty lunch kara dena theekh hai." Asha said
"Okay mam." Shreya and Poorvi said
"Wow!! thank you Asha aunty." Srishti said
"Dekha, mene kaha tha na, mein aunty hi hun." Asha said
'Arre nahi mam, srishti beta vo bhi didi hi hai." Poorvi said
"Okay didi, sorry Asha didi." The girl said. Poorvi exchanged smile with Tasha
"Poorvi philal to tum aur Shreya isse le jao, magar baad mein aa kar zara mujse milna haan." Asha said

scene 3(at the mall)-
"Wow didi, yahan par to bahut saari dukaane hai, maaza aayega." Srishti said
"Tumhe shopping karna pasand hai." Shreya said
"Haan didi bahut. Pata hai papa mujhe har hafte shopping karne ke liye le jaate the." Srishti said
"Haan kya, lucky ho aap. Hum to maheene mein bhi ek baar mushkil se aate hai, kyun Shreya." Poorvi said
"Haan yaar vakayii." Shreya agreed.
 They walked around going into all the shops. In abou two hours they brought Srishti four t-shirts and a pair of jeans only! Srishti took a very long time to choose what to buy, and she did not want to waste Poorvi's money also so..

"Didi mujhe bhukh lag rahi hai." Srishti said
"Haan beta, hum upar uss restraunt mein jaakar khaate hain chalo. chal shreyu."
"Poorvi tum dono jao, mein baad mein aati hun."
"Arre tujhe bhukh nahi lagi hai kya?"
"Haan yaar thodi magar vo dekh." Shreya said indicating to a shoe store outside which there was a sigh reading-15%discount
"Yaar Poorvi itne dina ke baad mall aayi hun, aur joote mujhe bahut time se khareednay the. Tum dono agar bado mein thodi der mein aati hun."
"Theekh hai shreya, jaisi teri marazi, par aana haan." Poorvi said
"Haan yaar of course."

The hotel was very beautiful. It was called heera-moti It was quite crowded and a lot of people were waiting, but luckily ,Asha, knew the owner very well and hd already asked him to reserve a table for three.
A waiter bought them their menu. The girl did not waste any money on clothes, but here she ordered the most expensive dishes. But Poorvi did not mind. She just wanted to see the girl happy. But Poorvi was not so hungry so she ordered just a small plate of fries fopr herself
"Sorry didi mene thoda zaada order kar diya."
"Arre bilkul nahi beta, app ba pet bhar ke khao, mujhe itna hi chaihiye."
"Thank you didi"
"Lo phir thank you."
 The two of them were engaged in a conversation when a group of four two girls tow boys entered, seeing whom Srishti's face became serious.
"Kya hua?" Poorvi asked
"Didi, ye log vahi hain, jo uss uncle ke yahan the. Ye log mujhe bahut maarte the."
Poorvi looked at them and then back at the girl.
"Daro met beta, mein hun naa, ek minut" Poorvi said. She pulled out a dupatta from her purse and told the girl to cover her face with it.
"Chalo mere saath." She said standing up and leading the girl to the washroom.
"Mein abhi Shreya didi ko phone karti hun haan, ek minute bas." Poorvi said as she pulled out her phone and dialled Shreya's number. The phone rang but no one picked
"Yaar shreya please phone uthaoo." Poorvi said as she walked towards the window and tried to call again. Just then she felt something on her back. She slowly turned around and saw one of the girls who srishti had said were working at the place where srishti had been kept, she had just entered with another girl, who was holding a gun at srishti, pointing it at her forehead
"Didi.." She said
"Oo inspector Poorvi, jab tumne humaare teen saathiyon ko peeta aur vo darte huevapas aaye tab mujhe laga hi ki vo tum ho." The girl who was pointing a gun at her said
"Ab koi chaalaki ki to srishti ka bhaja uda denge samjhi." The other said.
"Didi bachaoo." Srishti said.The washroom door had been locked, so no chance of any help. Poorvi's mind was compl;etly blank. The only thing she could do was surrender, but srishti, she had to save her.
Just then she saw the girl who had ponted her gun at srishti placed her hand on the trigger.
"Nahi!!!" Poorvi shouted.
"Ae aavaz nahi." The girl who was pointing the girl at Poorvi said
"Bachaoo!!!" Poorvi screamed and then she felt a blow on her head and darkness in front of her eyes.."

This is all Poorvi could remember. How they carried her away?Did the team know? Was Shreya safe? And most important was Srishti all right? All this remained a mystry.
Now she had a task. To save herself as well as Srishti. Will she be able to do it...


TO BE CONTINUED...








Edited by poorvisinghcd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you di
of course i will๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd


thank you di
of course i will๐Ÿ˜Š


have u got my pm?
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Posted: 11 years ago


ya
gimme a little time but. I got ur link, will visit surely๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's really nice Poo...do continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I would love to read the rest! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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@Poo

really nice story ๐Ÿ‘
do continue soon !

ll give a detailed feedback once u complete the story ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks neer di, shreya di and mano di
glad you all liked it๐Ÿ˜ณ
@mano di no probs
will try to post new story asap๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Nice one sis!
Do continue! :D
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Originally posted by: Mini.S

Hey Nice one sis!
Do continue! :D



thanks sis
ya i sure will๐Ÿ˜Š