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little_squirrel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

nice one.. 😊

waiting for next part..

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Srishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: little_squirrel
nice one.. 😊

waiting for next part..

thanks di

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Padmpriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Very nicely written story...

all ur pains and excitment and all is very much expressed...

do continue dear...👍🏼

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Srishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Padmpriya
Very nicely written story...

all ur pains and excitment and all is very much expressed...
do continue dear...👍🏼

thank u my dear padma di
of course i will

cid team ko poorvi ko and poorvi ko srishti ko bachaana bhi to hai😊

next story will be action packed. Haaiyaa😃

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Srishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: little_squirrel
very nice dear.. 😊

thank you di!😉

wahi soch rahi thi abhi tak aapka comment kaise nahi aaya😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Very nice Poo dear...Oops!! I mean Srishti...😉

Keep going...!!!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: neha_dna
Very nice Poo dear...Oops!! I mean Srishti...😉

Keep going...!!!😃

hahahahahaha😆

call me whatever u like di!😛

and thanks a bunch😳

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Srishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

girls cid team 6
an unexpected case
part two

Scene 1-

"Kya! chali gaayi! aise kaise jaa sakti hai?" CID Inspector Shreya said to the manager of the hotel where her collegue, poorvi and the young girl had come
"maine unhe pucha magar unki tabyat dikhne mein theekh nahi thi aur unke saath jo kaali t-shirt mein madam thi unhone mujhe bataya ki un madam ko aachanak kuch ho gaya isliye wo unhe aspatal le jaa rahe hai." tha manager replied

"kya poorvi ki tabyat kharab, magar wo tooo... ek minute kaali t-shirt waali kaun hai? poorvi to yahan ek chotti bacchi ke saath aayi thi."
"haan madam ek bachi bhi thi, aur do kaali t-shirt waali ladkiya."
"Kya! do the.. magar poorvi akili aayi thi na us bacchi ke saath."
"ayi akili thi lekin beech mein uthkar us bacchi ke saath washroom chali gayi. Aur jis wakt wo uth kar gaayi usi samay vo do kaali t-shirt waali madam bhi unke peeche peeche chale gaaye aur saath bahar nikle. Aapki saheli ki tabyat wakayi bahut kharab thi."
"kya hua tha meri saheli ko?"

"madam unke sar ke peeche se khun aa raha tha aur unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki vo behhosh hone waali hai."
"What! saar ke peeche se khun, tab to aapko un ladkiyon ko rokna chahiye tha na aapko shak nahi hua ki unhone kuch kiya poorvi ke saath."
"madam unhone kaha ki vo unke saheliyaan hai aur aapki dost ne inkaar bhi nahi kiya."

"inkaar kaise karti semiconcious jo thi, usse to samajh bhi nahi aa raha hoga ki chal kya raha hai aur un gondo ne srishti ko blackmail kiya hoga ki vo aapna mu band rakhe, ye sab meri galti hai poorvi tumhe akela nahi chodna chahiye tha." Shreya said to herself
"kuch kaha madam?"
"nahi tumhe nahi tum jao thank you."

The manager went away. There were literally tears in Shreya's eyes as she pulled out her phone, dialled a number and put it on her ear
"hello! asha mam."

scene 2-

finally after two hours poorvi was able to stand up. She was now back to her senses completly. She could not remember what happened after she was hit on her head as she became semi concious after that.

Poorvi held the side of her waist. Her whole body was throbbing with pain. Those crooks they had tossed her into an old tenty feet well and had themselves run away with the little girl.

" I am sorry srishti mene tumhe promise kiya tha ki mein tumhara dhyan rakhungi lekin. I am sorry. Chinta mat karo mein tumhe zarur bachaungi, kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe, i promise." Poorvi said in a voice lower than a whisper.
But how could she? Here she was trapped in a twenty feet deep well, no way to get out, poorvi did not even know where she was. The crooks had emptied her pockets and taken her purse away, but they had not taken away her wrist watch. This was a mistake by them because none of them knew that it was no ordainary wrist watch, it had been gifted to Poorvi specially by ACP pradyuman on her birthday. Poorvi recalled the event

"ye lo poorvi." ACP sir had said handing her a box "tumhaare liye meri taraf se ek special gift."
"sir gift ki kya zarurat thi, mein ye nahi le sakti sir."
"poorvi gifts ko kabhi inkaar nahi karte aur ye mein khaas tumhaare liye laayo hun koi aam gift nahi hai ye, ek minute ye dekho." He removed the lid and removed two alike watches.
"Wow itni sundar ghadi hai sir, magar sir do kyun laaye."
"Kyunki poorvi ye koi aam ghaddi nai hai, yahan upar ye dekh rahi ho." He said pointing towards a small box beside the main box on the clock which was showing the time.
"Haan sir."
"In dono ghadiyon mein iss wakt uss box min kya dikh raha hai tumhe poorvi."
"Sir zero."
"Haan aur agar ek watch mein pehenu aur ek watch tum peheno aur phir mein tumse ek kilometer ki duri par jaun tab yahan tumhe 1 dikhega, 2 kilometer ki duri par jaun to 2 bas issi tarah ye 100 kilometer tak detect karega."
"Wow sir ye to ek tarah ka tracking device hai."
"Haan aur poorvi ye gift khaas tumhaare liye laya hun, please manna mat karo."
"Ok sir thank you so much ye gift mere bahut kaam aayega."

"Haan sir." Poorvi said in the same tone "Ye gift ab bahut kaam aayega." Poorvi had given the second watch to srishti so that she could track her if she got lost or something happened and now was the time to use it, only if they had not pulled out the girl's watch.
"Yes! Poorvi said as she saw the number 15 appear in the box. First she doubted that had they discarded the watch at a distance of 15 km from where she was, but then 15 changed to 16 clearing her doubts.
Poorvi was glad for a second but then she realized that first she would have to get out, but how??? Poorvi felt the walls of the well, and slihtly scratched them with her nails. The walls seemed to be made of plaster of paris. And it seemed almost impossible to climb out. Poorvi had a knife hidden in her shoe, but how could she get out with only one knife and moreover she was very weak. Now she could do only one thing.
"Bachaoo, koi hai, please meri madaat karo, please bachaoo!!!!" She screamed with all the strength. But she had no hope someone heard her. She shouted again and again, but no reply. With all her strength, in anger, she hit the wall with her fist. Just then a loose rock which was sticking out from the walls a little higher than where she was moved slightly from it's position and fell down. It did not land on top of Poorvi's head luckily but it slightly touch the back of her head where the lady in black t-shirt had hit her and knocked her out.
She screamed lowdly. And fell on the ground crying with pain. Her eyes slowly shut.

SCENE 3

Srishti along with other kids whom those bad people were working to the bone were in a van, on their way to gujrat from bombay.
"Tum log bahut pachtaoge, Poorvi didi tumhe nahi chodegi." Srishti screamed at the four elders in black t-shirts.
"Hahahhaha suno ye ladki kya keh rahi hai." One of the men said as all of them burst out laughing
"Mein saach keh rahi hun, jaise poorvi didi ne aakhri bar un teeno ki dhulayi ki thi iss baar tum logon ki karegi."
They laughed again
"Beta tumhaari poorvi didi ke saath humne kya kiya tumne dekha na, usse us 20 feet gehre kuen mein phek diya. Wo bhi bilkul sunsaan jagah par. Wahan se usse kaun nikalega tera baap."
laughs again
"Poorvi didi ko bhagwan jarur bachaenge."
"Oh aacha."
"Haan poorvi didi ek aachi insaan hai, kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kar sakti aur mummy ne mujhe bola tha aise logo ko bhagwaan kuch nahi hone dete."
"Ohhh."
"Haan unhone mujhe kaha tha- jako rakhe saiyaa mar sake na koi."
"Wah beta wah, sahin keh rahi ho tum. Tumhaari poorvi didi bahut aachi hai. Isliye to bhagwaan ne unse prasaan hokar abhi tak to unhe apne pas zarur bula liya hoga."
"Nahi kabhi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.." Srishti said with tears in her eyes
And the four people in black t-shirts began rolling with laughter.

Scene 4-

"Bas muskaan gaadi roko, mam yahi hai vo jungle jahan se poorvi ne uss bacchi ko bachaya tha." Shreya said from the backseat of the qualis, as Muskaan drove up to something like the entrance to a forest.
"Yahi hai vo. To fir un gundon ka adda bhi isi jungle mein hoga aur unhone poorvi ko bhi yahin rakha hoga." Asha said
Shreya looked down and said
"Sorry mam ye sab meri gaalti hai. Mujhe poorvi ko akele nahi chodna chahiye tha. Agar mein unke saath hoti to vo gunday shayad ye sab nahi kar paate aur shayad.." Shreya stopped as she almost began crying. Tasha who was sitting next to her put her hand on her shoulder
"Nahi Shreya kaisi baat kar rahi ho tum." Asha said "Tumhaari isme koi gaalti nahi hai, infact kisi ki bhi nahi hai." Her ACP said
"Sivaaye un gundon ke." Kajal aaded "Un gundon se bahut badi gaalti ho gaayi ki unhone CID se panga liya, bachoo par atyaachar kiya. Ab vo nahi bachengi."
"Haan kajal. Aur shreya philal jo ho gaya uss par rone se aacha hai ki aab uss baachi ko kaise bachaiye vo socho."
"Haan mam, ye jungle to bahut bada hai itne bade jungle mein unka adda dhundne mein to bahut samay lag jayega." Muskaan said

"Ek taarika hai mam." Shreya said wiping off her tears
"Wo kya shreya?"
"Mam kal raat ko mene kariban 10:30 raat ko poorvi ko phone kiya tha ye jaanne ke liye ki vo party ke baad theekh tarah ghar pahunchi kya. Tab usne mujhe kaha tha ki wo iss jungle ke raaste se aanewaali hai aur tab vo is raaste ko enetr kar rahi thi."
"Haan fir."
"Fir mam kariban 10:40 ko uska phone aaya tha. Jungle mein theekh network nahi mila usse shayyad magar vo kuch gundey ladki kuch keh rahi thi. Phir network chala gaya uska. Mene usse message kiya, usse us wat to nahi mila magar thodi der baad uska reply aaya ki kya hua vo mujhe sab aagle din bataayegi."

"Ooho, iska matlab jungle mein ghusne ke 10 minute baad poorvi ko vo ladki mili, bhagte hua. To vo adda bhi vahin kahin hoga. Aacha vaise kya lagta hai poorvi ki gaddi ka speed kya hoga."
"Mam Poorvi ko pata tha ki ye raasta sunsaan hai aur sunsaan raston par vo aksar kariban 90 km/h ki speed se chalati hai. Ek bar hum kisi sunsaan jagah par gaadi se gaaye the tab yahi speed thi." Tasha said
"Hmm muskaan ek kaam karo, 90 km-h ki speed se 10 minut tak gaadi chalao. Phir hum uss point ke asspas honge jahan par poorvi ko srishti aur vo gunday mile." Asha said

scene 5-
"Pahunch gaaye mam." Muskaan said stopping the car
"Chalo girls." Asha said as she along with the other cops got out of the car
"Iss pure area ko check karo koi ghar ya kuch to hoga yahan par."
"Yes mam." The girls said
"Tasha shreya tum dono uss taraf jao, muskaan kajal tum dono udhar jao aur mein idhar dekhti hun."
The team split, inspecting the whole area properly. In about fifteen minutes Tasha spotted a small house. She pulled out a gun and called Shreya who was scanning the near by area
"wo dekho." Tasha said pointing to the house. "Wo log vahin honge."
"Haan umeed hai ki Poorvi aur srishti dono theekh ho."
"Yahan chillana sahin nahi hoga ho sakta hai andar ke log alert ho jaye. Mein muskaan ko call karti hun aur tum Asha mam ko."
Five minutes of calling the team was united again.
"Guns tayaar hai na?" Asha asked
"Haan mam."
"Theekh hai, sambhal kar andar chalo, andar bacche ho sakte hain."
The cops slowly crept towards the house with guns ready. Asha and Shreya walked towards the door while the other cops were suppose to surround the house.
"Shreya iss darwaaze par to tala laga hai."
"Haan mam lagta hai wo log bhag gaye."
"Bhag kar jayenge kahan iss taale ko todo."
Shreya picked a small rock from the ground and broke the lock. Then she pushed open the door and she and Asha enterd. Muskaan , kajal and Tasha too entered.
"Aachi tarah talaashi lo, kuch to milega." Asha said
The cops looked around scanning the area bit by bit. Suddenly on the corner muskaan noticed a crumpled paper. She picked it up and opened it. On it was written something like a adress
"Mam."
"Haan muskaan."
"Mam ye kagaaz ka tukda yahan tha. Is par kisi jagah ka adress hai aur yahan par pin code."
"Aacha dikhao zara." Asha said as she took the paper and studied it
"Oh ye pin code gujrat ka hai. Iska matlab ye lo gujrat bhag gaye. Tasha eek kaam karo ye jo adress hai pata lagao gujrat mein exactly kahan hai."
"Yes mam."

scene 6-

"Aaah." Srishti screamed as she fell on the ground, her cheeks red
"agar dobara uss poorvi ka naam liya to aur zoor se marungi samjhi. Chup chap kaam karo." Tha lady in black t-shirt said
"Kya hua naina? iss ladki ne ab kya kiya." A man wearing an old worn out jacket, old trousers, badly shaven with white hair said as he descended down the stairs
"sir ye ladki kaam karne se inkaar kar rahi hai.Mene isse samjhaya to sirf yahi keh rahi hai ki kaam nahi karegi aur ek baar poorvi didi ko aano do phir bataungi."
"Hahahaha Srishti beta agar tum chaho to tumhari uss poorvi didi ki laash lakar tumhaare aagey rakh de."
"Poorvi didi zinda hai, unhe kuch nahi ho sakta."
"aacha! chup chap kaam karo samjhi warna.."
"warna kya hun? kya karoge bolo." The man pulled out a gun and pointed it towards the young girl.
"Warna tujhe teri poorvi didi ke pass pahuncha dunga."
The girl got scared
"Pahuncha dunga nahi sir pahuncha do. Iss ladki ke vajah se CID humaare peche padhi hui hai aur agar ek ladki mar bhi gaayi to kya, itne saare bacchee hai humaare pass aur to aur humara kharcha bhi cum ho jayega" One of the men in black t-shirt said
"Sanhi keh raha hai tu, beta ab upar ja apne bhagwan aur apni uss poorvi didi ke pass."
"Nai uncle please."
"Hahaha ab gidgidaane ka koi faida nahi bachche, alvida." He said as he loaded his gun, pointed it towards the young girl and was just about to press the trigger when suddenly a rock hit his hand and the gun fell, which srishti immediatly picked up.
All the men turned to the direction from where the stone came. And there they saw none other than CID inspector Poorvi standing there
"Huh! Poorvi" Tha gangster said
"Poorvi didi" Srishti cried with joy
"Aatma." All the mensaid
"Haan aatma, mein Poorvi ki atma hun." Poorvi said
"Tum zinda kaise bach gayi?" The boss said
"Hahahaha bahut lambi kahaani hai, jail mein baethkar sunna."Srishti ran towards poorvi and flung her arms around her waist
"Didi thank god aap bach gaaye." She said
Poorvi took the gun from srishti and said
"Theekh hoi na beta?"
"Haan didi."
"Dekha kaha tha kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe."
"Thank you didi aap bahut aache ho."

"Agar aap dono ka milan ho gaya to poorvi ji kya aap mujhe batayengi ki akili hokar aap hum sab ko arrest karke kaise le jaayengi?"
"Aacha agar 5 pandav 100 kauravo so ladkar jeet sakte hain to kya mein app5 logon ko arrest karke nahi le jaa sakti."
The boss laughed. All the other young kid siting there were staring
"Suna tum logon ne, ye ek zakhami kamzoor ladki hum teen mardon ko aur do kaafi takatvaar lakiyon ko arrest karke le jaayegi."
They all laugh
"Didi aap kya karoge?" Srishti said
"Chinta mat karo beta, kuch na kuch zarur karungi. Aapni jaan de dungi magar aap sabhi bachoon ko kuch nahi hone dungi."
"Didi agar aap margaye to hume kaun bachaeyga."
"Chinta mat karo kuch nahi hoga kisi ko bhi."

"Agar khusur phusur ho gaayi ho to please batayiye hume kaise arrest karogi?"
"Hmmm ek kaam karte hai, hum sabh banduk neeche karke ek chota sa fight karte hai. Result to apne aap mil jaayega."
Everyone bursts out laughing.
"Nai nai haso mat iss bachi ki himat ki daat to do, maut ke mun se bachkar aayi pata nahi kaise ur keh rahi hai ki humse ladna hai. Arre tere liye to meri naina hi kaafi hai."
"Wo to mukaable ke baad hi pata chalega."
"Soch lo tum bevakufi kar rahi ho, apni halat dekhi hai tumne."
"Haan didi." Srishti whispered "Please aapki tabyat theekh nahi hai."
"Meri chinta mat karo srishti mujhe koshish to karne do, auar shayad yahan par police ya koi aa jaye."
"Didi aap iss halat mein in logon se ladoge to mar jaoge. Ye log bahut strong hai."
"Meri chinta mat karo, infact mauka milte hi tum aapne saathiyon ko lekar bhagne ki koshish karna mere baare mein mat sochna."

"Beta poorvi agar aap dar gaaye to koi baat nahi magar hume batao to sahi bar bar uss ladki se kya khusur pusur kar rahi ho yaar?"
"Haan haan mein taiyaar hun."
"Naina iss poorvi ka dimaag uski sahi jagah se hil gaya hai zra usse theekh to karna."
"Yes boss."
Poorvi and Naina both walked forward
"Kya yaar poorvi tumhaare saath iss halat mein laadne mein bahut time waste hoga, please haar man lo."
"Aacha time kiska waist ho gaa abhi pata chal jaayega." Poorvi said. She raised her hand for a punch but Naina caught it and twisted it behind Poorvi's back. She was literally crying with pain
"Yahi kiya tha tumne humaare un saathiyon ke saath, ab samajh aaya. Haar man lo."
"Didi!" Srishti cried
"Kabhi nahi." Poorvi said. Naina pushed her on the ground. Her head hit against the ground, the very party where she had been knocked out both the times.
"Kya hua utho." Naina said. "Ab kya hua, har man li, mujhe laga nahi tha ki itni jaldi haar man legi tu"
For Poorvi the pain was unberable. She lay on the ground, moving like a fish does when it is removed from water. The boss moved forward
" Achi koshish thi magar afsoos wakyai naina sahi keh rahi thi tumne bahut wakt barbad kiya isse aacha ladai karti hi nahi. Kher" He said taking a gun from one of his associate "Ab to tumhe bhagwaan bhi nahi baacha sakta." He pointed the loaded gun at her. Just then Srishti turned and started to run
"Haye ruk." The boss said and pointed the gun at srishti instead
"
"Nahi Srishti!" Poorvi shouted. The boss placed his finger on ythe trigger and a bullet shot echoed. Srishti fell down
"Nahi!!!" Poorvi shouted. But the bullet had not hit srishti. Poorvi realized that when the boss fell on the ground right beside her. The four assitants turned and all four of them were shot in the heart. Poorvi smiled as she saw her collegues standing there, fumes still comming out of their guns.
ACP asha
They had shot the four associates and ACP asha had shot the boss on his upper thigh. The boss turned to see who had shot him and was stunned to see CID there
"C..C..CID." He said
"Haan CID" Asha said"
all four of them were
Srishti too stood up, perfectly normal
"Srishti!" Poorvi said
Muskaan ran to the young, extremly scared girl, while kajal and tasha took the others out. While Shreya ran to poorvi and supported her in standing
"Tum theekh ho?"
"Haan Shreya thanks"aan Shreya, thanks"

"to tu hai vo jo bachoo se kaam karwata hai, unki jaan tak lene ki had tak gir sakta hai."
"Haan"

"Insaan nahi ho tum haevan ho haevan." Shreya cried
"Sharam naam ki koi cheez hai kya tumme? Bahut badi saaza milegi tumhe."ACP said

"Kyun, mene kisi ko nahi mara."
"Maarne jaa rahe the srishti ko, aur humaari Poorvi usse bhi to mar hi diya tha. Aur child labour aapne mein hi bahut bada guna hai samjhe."

"A couple of police officers came in.
"Inspectors yahi hai vo mujrim please issay lae jao aur hum sarkar se darkhwast karenge ki isse sakt se sakt saaza ho."

scene 7-

The CID cops along with Srishti were in their qualis.along with Srishti were in their Qualis. Only Kajal was not there who was in the van following them. They were taking the kid's to an orphanage in Bombay owned by Muskaan's relative
Srishti wassleep in Poorvi's lap
"Poorvi tumne vakayi mein bahut bahaduri dikhaayi, itni kamzoor hone ke bavjod tum un gundoon se laadne ko tayaar ho gaayi, jab ki tum jaanti thi
ki ki tum mar bhi sakti ho."
""Mujhe aapni se jyaada in bachon ki parvaah thi. Shaayad ye bach jaate inki jaan zyada zaruri thi. Mujhe laga ki mein pehle in gundon ko thoda kamzoor kar dun phir mein un baancho ko vahan se bhak un bachon ko vahan se bhagne ko kehti ya kuch aisa."
ki tum mar sakti hoke bavjood yi mein bahut bahaduri dikhayi, itni kamzoor hone
""I am sorry Poorvi agar mein uss din tum logon ke saath rehti to hayad ye sab nahi hota"
"Shreya tu kaisi baatein kar rahi hai, teri kya galti hai, galti to meri hai ki mein ek baachi ka dhyan bhi nahi rakh paayi."
"Nahi poorvi."
"Haan Shreya."
"Oh bas karo tum dono, kisi ki bhi gaalti nahi hai, ab poorvi tum mujhe yeh batao ki hotel se lekar ab tak mein kya hua." Asha said
"
"
ya
Poorvi narrated the whole episode from the part they knocked her out in the hotel to the part where she was again knocked out in the well.
"Baap re, phir kya hua."
"Phir mam jab memri aankhein khuli tab mene dekha ki main ek ghar mein hun, kuch aurtein meri baju mein behthi thi. Unhone kaha ki mein gujrat maharashtra expressway mein ek chotte se gaon mein hun. Unhone ne mujhe bataya ki unke pati roz sheher se gaon aur gaon se sheher cheezein bechne jaate hai aur aaj jab vo jaa rahe the tab unhone meri cheekh suni aur uss kuein se nikala."
"Chalo ye aacha hua. Phir."

"Un logon ne mujse mere baare mein pucha mene kaha ki mein police se hun aur mene unhe shorten karke bataya ki mai uss kuein mein kaise pahunchi aur jab mene unhe bataya ki srishti jan ko khatra hai tab vo meri madat karne ko taayiyaar ho gaaye. Mam ACP sir ka diya hua iss ghadi ke bere mein aap janti hai na."
"
" ho gaayetab unhone
"Haan Poorvi ACP ne mujhe bhi aisa hi hai ghadi diya tha."
"To fir mam ghadi se mujhe pata chala ki srishti mujse 20 km door hai. Fir mujhe samjha ki vo zarur Gujrat mein hogi. Pehele to gaon ke aadmi ke saath ghoda gaadii par mein gujrat aa rahi thi, magar raaste mein ek gaadi mil gaayi to unke saath aa gaayi."
"Oh ye aacha kiya, vaise gao walon ne tumhaari ye halaat dekhkar tumhe roka nahi?"

"Haan magar jab mene kaha ki kisi ki jaan ko khatra hai to unhone mujhe kuch fruits khila kar jaane diya. Aur mam jis gaadi se mene lift li uske logon se mene indirrectly jaane ki koshish ki ki aisi konsi band padi jagah gujrat ke outskirts mein hai jo band pada sunsaan types hai, tab unhone mujhe 2 factories ke baare mein bataya. Goa eneter karne par mene dekha ki ek kilometer ki duri par hi srishti hai tab mein aa gayi us ek kilometer ki doori par factory ke pass."
"Wah kaafi aacha kiya , manna padega mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itni bahaduri dikhaogi."
Poorvi blushed. Just then the car stopped
"Pahunch gaaye." Muskaan said.
Poorvi woke srishti up and the team and kids walked to the entrance. Muskaan's relative was there and he greated them warmly
"Chinta mat kijiye hum in bachoo ko aache se rakhenge aur inka khaani peena aur padhai ka bhi pura dhyaan rakhenge.
"Thank you." Asha said
"Chalo bachon." Kajal said and took all the kids inside but srishti remained there
"Poorvi didi mujhe apke saath rehena hai."
"I am sorry srihti rehena to mujhe bhi aap ke saath hai par aapko jaana padega."
"Nahi didi, mein nahi jaungi, ye jagah aapke ghar se bhi bahut dur hai"
"Chinta mat karo beta mein aapse milne aate rahungi i promise."
"Par didi mein aapke saath kyun nahi reh sakti?"
"Beta mein CID officer hun. Subah ghar se nikalti hun to aate aate subah ke 3-4 baaj jaate hai, aise mein aapke liye time kaise nikalun, aur subah nikalne par ye bhi confirmed nahi hai ki raat koi aayungi bhi ki nahi."
"Par didi"
"Srishti please zid mat karo yahan ke log bahut aache hai, aapka pura dhyan rakhenge, aur jab aap padh likhar badi ho jaogi na tab aa jaana mumbai, vahin ghar le lena phir hum rooz milenge theekh hai."
Srishti looked down with tears in her eyes, hen looked up again.
"Theekh hai didi, magar mujhe mat bhulna."
Poorvi kissed her cheeks and said "kabhi nahi."
Srishti embraced poorvi then walked inside. Turned back once, smiled and went again.
Poorvi too was in tears
"Excuse me mam." She said and joigged away crying
"Arre poorvi" Asha said as she prepared to go after her but shreya stopped her
"Mam mein dekhti hun." She said
Poorvi was sitting on a bench tears in her eyes
"Hey poorvi." Shreya said as she sat beside her friend
"Movie dekhne chale kya?"
"Kya movie!"
"Yup."
Poorvi was confused she was upset n shreya was thinking about movies!
"Is tarah mein sorry bhi bol dungi, tumhara mood bhi theekh ho jaayega and mene suna hai jo film kal release hui hai it is quite good yaar chal na."
Poorvi smiled
"Thank u so much shreya, par please sorry mat bol."
Shreya smiled
"Tu bhi thank you bolna band kar hum sabko."
"Pakka no more sorry's and thank you's"
"That's the spirit my friend." Shreya said
Poorvi embraced her
"Poorvi dont worry ho sake to har Sunday aayenge srishti se milne, waise wakayi mein bahut sweet hai vo."
"Haan har sunday shayad naa a paaye magar jab jab aa sakenge tab tab aayengay."
"Kyun nahi, now cheer up."
Acp asha asnd the other cops walked there. Poorvi smiled
"Theekh ho Poorvi?"
"Haan mam."
"Aacha mujhe ek baat batao girls please."
"kya mam." Taha said
"Kya mein such much aunty hun." All the girls burst out laughing
'Kya mam aap bhi." Shreya said. Asha at first was staring but then she too joined them in the laughter

THE END

Edited by poorvisinghcd - 11 years ago

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Srishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: suhaani.cidmjht
will read and comment😊

baap re
app badi jaldi aa gaye didi
araam se padho story mein thode problems hai i guess please tell me after reading n ignore the font problem please

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devildiva21

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

res*edited*
mast story hai yr...
omg really adore poorvi for what she did... and loved srishti... she is such a swtie pie... her bonding with poorvi is awsum...
and that goons arghhh hate them child labour karwate hai... acha haal kia cid ne unka...
fb scene where acp gave that watch to porvi was lovely...
loved everyone's concern for poorvi and srishti and the way discovered where they could be was nice...
the way poorvi made srishti understand was adorable ...shreya poorvi convo was cutee... aur end mai asha ka dialogue... awsum 😆
lovely ending to a very lovely story...
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