Second chances(on HITAUS till notice) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Wow yr
can't wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Waiting...teaser luking nice...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Amazing... loved it...
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
very nice
update soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
anyone der for prt-2????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
this was awesome.👏👏.plz update soon and pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

 

PART 2

 

The air was flowing around her mildly as she continued jogging...she found it difficult to jog  at times...but today she was enjoying it thoroughly...she felt in ease after days  ,humming a tune  from Hum dil de chuke sanam.. she jogged along the bay of Marine drive... she stopped for a few minutes to look at the glorious sunrise and the flying of birds which were chirping  their own song to welcome yet another new day in life. She looked around and spotted Sasha struggling behind her. Madhu gave a little laugh and picked her up and cuddled her...The white cat looked at her and mewed softly...

Madhu-"Beautiful isn't it...?" pointing it to the sunrise...

 

He sat in his car astound, stunned...or frozen probably the most apt word... He couldn't just remove his eyes from her...God she was probably the epitome of beauty...indescribable...Probably god did exist ...Well she was the proof of his exisistance'Her eyes were  the most beautiful hazels ever''..a sparkling brown''''.mischief in them. Her lips a developing bud of a young rose''.cute nose and the body''''''OMG she was the Goddess of Venus herself''''

 

 

Rk stood behind  a tree watching Madhu from far '''..Cursing himself for a thousandth time for not gathering the courage to talk to her'''but he had his own plans'''''.

 

 

 

LATER THAT DAY'''..

 

Madhu stepped out of the studio looking at her scheduled for the week'''..Man she did have a tight scheduled''''..not a  single minute for herself. As she alighted   someone pulled her by her arm'.She tried to struggle but in vain'She felt her phone fall but before she could pick it up someone hugged her'''..She felt a familiar warmth that she detested according to her mind but her in heart felt like  she was carving for it from a long time now''''

 

 

He hugged her with all his might'''..but was careful not to crush her''.tight yet gentle and a hug filled with love .Madhu looked up to him and saw a familiar face which she hated but yearned for..

She pushed him with all her might.

Rk staggered backwards and cupped her face and looked at her in her eyes as if searching for something in them desperately'..

 

Madhu saw one emotion which gave her the worst pain in her life ever "LOVE". She hated the very feel now ''though she did act in love stories'..she preferred only acting and nothing else

 

RK-"Madhu I am really sorry for everything that happened"

 

Madhu gave him a blank look and walked away '''''..

 

The jerk of her Mercedes brought her out of the past incidents''..she peeped out to get a better view of what was happening'''

                                      Part 3 in pg 13
Edited by smritiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
I know the precap was different but felt Rk had his own class no matter what...so will propose oops confess his own way


FUTURE SPOILERZ

unexpected meeting...
Avinsash...
RK,DIps,Siky,Madhu ,Avi in one film...(Allha jane kya hoga)😕😉

Jealousy...😃

Edited by smritiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Nice update But pls try n make it a little longer    😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
too good...
carry on soon...
thanks for pm...