Second chances(on HITAUS till notice)

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Posted: 11 years ago
In life we make many  decisions  which are both right and wrong  at the same time ...What do you do when u regret for a wrong decision ...?Is it always too late  to rectify one's mistake??

The heavy down pours had  been flooding the roads ,people were running  everywhere  to find a shelter and save their lives...
However one person 
remaind walking uncaring of everything around him.
The world knew him as RK the superstar but today he was  nothing but a forgotten hero...
Rk now realized his greatest mistake of letting Madhu go away from him...letting go of one soul who truly loved him as he was...but alas she was no longer his to talk about...



Few miles far away...
She sat looking at the rain pouring from her window ...there were no more tears to shed ...not after their eight  months of separation...He was nothing but a constant sting in her heart which depicted her life's biggest mistake as she called it in front of her family...She could no longer smile freely as she used to ,everything was well rehearsed.. like she did in front of the camera and the whole world... She was MADHUBALA -"THE QUEEN OF ACTING"...


He stepped into the alien soils of a new land will he find his heroine for the new film...
"well if god wants me to win ,then i will get more..." thought Avinash...


                             Char sketch n pg-3
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys this s just a random thought in my head do let me know if i shld continue... shld it be an Ss or Ff or better an Os? let me know guys plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yu shuld continue bt this shuld be ss
pa rishbaa shuld be together at he end
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yu shuld continue bt this shuld be ss
par rishbaa shuld be together at the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
carry...on...
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice dear, i thnk i would like to read it as ff
so plz make it a ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesme start.want to knw abt this journey mre.plz cnt sn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Looks interesting 👍🏼 
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
sounds gr8..u can decide on the length after starting the real flow...for now continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
guys whoever is der plz reply so tat i can post char sketch...