ArHi SS-First Impressions[CH9 PG-87]

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iram1415

@iram1415

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow wow wow!
Waiting to see khushi's reaction!
Please update soon ans pkease PM me :)

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Mini17

@Mini17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

First of all that was an excellent piece of work :)
I loved Aman's character. Poor guy! So terrified of ASR. Rock bit was very good 😆
Definitely want the next part! Actually you can turn this into a FF, you know 😉

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Mini17
First of all that was an excellent piece of work :)
I loved Aman's character. Poor guy! So terrified of ASR. Rock bit was very good 😆
Definitely want the next part! Actually you can turn this into a FF, you know 😉

Thank you so much MiniWa!😳

FF???? LOL...I don't know about that. Abhi ke liye TS rehne do.😆

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vandana1965

@vandana1965

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

seems to be an interesting OS. thanks so much.

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..

Thank you so much MiniWa!😳
FF???? LOL...I don't know about that. Abhi ke liye TS rehne do.😆

Okay then start a FF after this TS 😆
Waiting 😉

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Mini17

Okay then start a FF after this TS 😆
Waiting 😉

Already demands shuru??😆

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Mini17

@Mini17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..

Already demands shuru??😆

Aage aage dekho kya karti hun! 😆 (I think I have messed up the sentence! )

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oooh! Arnav and Khushi meet and there are sparks but added to it a slap and foot slam?! Ouch!

And bechara Aman...but Amanji, yeh toh sirf shuruaat hai...abhi toh sirf ArHi miley hain...abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai! Muahahahaha!

Okay okay, I admit it I just like troubling Aman. :p

Anyway, coming to the writing - good job, Medha! But maybe you could slow it down and elaborate it a little more maybe? Just a suggestion. :)

Good work! And update Part 2 soon! :)

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Oooh! Arnav and Khushi meet and there are sparks but added to it a slap and foot slam?! Ouch!

And bechara Aman...but Amanji, yeh toh sirf shuruaat hai...abhi toh sirf ArHi miley hain...abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai! Muahahahaha!

Okay okay, I admit it I just like troubling Aman. :p

Anyway, coming to the writing - good job, Medha! But maybe you could slow it down and elaborate it a little more maybe? Just a suggestion. :)

Good work! And update Part 2 soon! :)

OMG Rae!

I just stared at the screen for a second because I couldn't believe you had commented on this!😆

Thank you so much! 🤗

Yeah...even I thought it was speeded up...I'll work on that! :)