ArHi SS-First Impressions[CH9 PG-87]

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Anji Di

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So I had told you how much I loved this through PM way back when. But I'm here to tell you again! :D

I loved the way you portrayed ASR! I could just see him in a suit in a barren road ready to murder someone... Particularly Aman! LOL.

And I love Khushi's fiesty and act now, think later attitude! Hehehe. ;)

Bechara Aman! Poor thing! I want to just hug him. (Make him really cute na! LOL.)

And Payal, always there to calm Khushi down... Except forcefully this time!

Like before I could just imagine that smirk! Lol.

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 12 years ago

No res. 😔 😔

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Do I need to say that how much I loved reading this? 😳 The starting itself is so interesting.. 👍🏼 Aage padhe ka padi! 😉 You stopped at such a crucial point. 😳 Evil kahinki! 😳 Arnav HAS to give her the job.. Warna lub-eshtory shuru kaisan hogi? 😉
And what do I say about your writing style? ⭐️ I need to improve mine now! 🤔 You have to teach me okay! 😳
And no need to thank re.. Dosti ki hai toh nibhana padega na! 😉
Post the second part soon.. Before I kill you! 😈 *Threatens* 🤣
Love you loadz! 🤗

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LilButterfly003

@LilButterfly003

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow!
Congo buddy🥳
finally i'm reading a work of yours😃

that was a really good start!!!!😳

And Arnav is so funny-i will fire you after you make me reach office🤣
N also you pointed out the situation of Aman-poor him😆

Loved it loved it loved it❤️

thanks for pm :)

please update soon😛

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

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Posted: 12 years ago

😛my first impression is ...interesting,awesome...waiting for ur update...

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Butterfly003
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Wow!
Congo buddy🥳
finally i'm reading a work of yours😃

that was a really good start!!!!😳

And Arnav is so funny-i will fire you after you make me reach office🤣
N also you pointed out the situation of Aman-poor him😆

Loved it loved it loved it❤️

thanks for pm :)

please update soon😛

Thank you so much Diksha! :)

Originally posted by: gopikaaji
😛my first impression is ...interesting,awesome...waiting for ur update...

Thank you !

I'll update as and when I write the next chapter. :)

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Spring Pearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

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One moment please ~ let me log in through my lappy 😛

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Hawww...kya first impression hain!! First meeting mein he THAPAR 😲

😆😆

Way to go Medhz!! I loved it

It was really gripping from the very beginning!!

I am SOOO looking forward to your next part!!

PS: you are a very good writer!!

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovd the first shot...poor aman...always faces the wrath of asr...waitin fpr interview...

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja
Lovd the first shot...poor aman...always faces the wrath of asr...waitin fpr interview...

Yep...he does face his wrath all the time. :P

Thank you!

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I cant believe it was your 1st attempt of writing on Arhi coz it was freaking awesome.
Poor Aman and his fate...nothing can save him from ASR. I couldn't help laughing after reading Aman's monologues. Poor man is being held responsible even for the breakdown of a car😆
The dialogue "Aman u are fired"then "Wait 1st make me reach AR"🤣
Even Arnav's condition when Khushi stamped on his foot 🤣
Uh uh!! Khushi Gupta is now in for an interesting ride😉

Plz continue soon and PM me if u can.