ArHi SS-First Impressions[CH9 PG-87]

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Sanki you are really Sanki, I mean why didn't you write anything till now? You are fabulous!

Why are you troubling my poor Arnav? Bechara, he had to face so many tragedies in one day, pehle his car broke down, then he was slapped, then his leg broke down & the worst of all he fell down..in love :p

I liked Arhi's first meeting, Arnav is totally mesmerized & Khushi is also attracted. But I loved the way khushi protected herself. Poor Arnav, I sympathize with him :D

My condolences are with Aman, poor guy has to bear the brunt of everything. I hope he'll survive till the end of this OS :P

Continue soon nahi toh *evil grin* :D

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
Sanki you are really Sanki, I mean why didn't you write anything till now? You are fabulous!

Why are you troubling my poor Arnav? Bechara, he had to face so many tragedies in one day, pehle his car broke down, then he was slapped, then his leg broke down & the worst of all he fell down..in love :p

I liked Arhi's first meeting, Arnav is totally mesmerized & Khushi is also attracted. But I loved the way khushi protected herself. Poor Arnav, I sympathize with him :D

My condolences are with Aman, poor guy has to bear the brunt of everything. I hope he'll survive till the end of this OS :P

Continue soon nahi toh *evil grin* :D

Haha! Sad day for Arnav no? And the day hasn't even fully begun yet. :P

I have to continue...varna mujhe Ankii se kaun bachayega?😆

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hey wow!! this is really good yaar.. specially the humor.. Aman's firing part and the rock parts were sooo hilarious!! literally gave me a tummy ache! please do continue...

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Flora3333

@Flora3333

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

So u finally posted your crap 😈

RES 🤗

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Mrs.Beckham Sobti

@.shinchan.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

after a long tym..i hv read such gud writing..
story is gud but writing is Voeeewww
u hv becum a writer after u turned SANKI.lol..
waiting fr PART-2..
Thanks fr PM

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

It doesn't look like your first attempt Medha...You are awesome..BAS!

So Arnav was mesmerized by her beauty and Khushi was kinda attracted too and then she proceeded towards him to...slap him? I wasn't expecting this :P

And Arnav instead of being all angry he was lost in her beauty...I can see him falling for her :P

I feel bad for Aman..Poor guy always have to face all the wrath..LOL

update the second part soonwa :D

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Mariam

@--Amy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Anji Di

Don't tell me you pestered her to write :P

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

wow she is doomed
aww he called her an angel
and did he actually say that to her
and she did what she id to him
please continue soon please
would love to know what going in that devilish brian of his
oh boy khushi is doomed right
just her bad luck man so bad