Ansh os:YOUR LOVE MAKE ME CRAZY updated in page 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: roberoi

A sweet dose of Ansh...loved it to the core...u may request someone for editing...I am sure many will help you as we all love Ansh and want to see more of your wonderful writing


Thnx for ur suggetion but kya meri post aur koi edit kar payega?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's adorable and lovely. 😳 Thank you for this beautiful OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivandi

It's adorable and lovely.😳 Thank you for this beautiful OS.



wlcm and thnx for ur appriciation 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-2

Next morning the ray of new sun fall in anandi's eyes..she opens her eyes and wonder where is she!! Then she remember that she is in her husbands warm embrace..she blushed hardly..shiv's watch start elarming and she hurriedly try to escape herself from his embrace..

He mumbled-anandi kaha ja rahi hai? Pls don't go..b with me..

Now anandi blushed more hardly..
Suddenly shiv realise that its not a dream..he open his eyes and release her quickly..

S-wo anandi wo..main..main shayed sapna dekh raha tha..
To make him ease anandi jokingly asked,"kya dekh raha tha aap sapne me?"
shiv understand that she become very comfortable with him & she isn't awkward for what happened just now..so he is back in his flirting mood,"aaj kal mujhe apke lawa sapne me aur kuch dikhta kaha?"
A-dhat..

She feeling too much shy and run away towards bathroom..
Shiv start laughing and thinking,"anandi jo apki ankho me dekh raha hu pata nehi kab wo apki mu se sun paunga..anyway mujhe intezar hai us pal ki jab aap apne ankho ki bhasha zuban se baya karenge..till then i'll wait"

In bathroon anandi look at mirror and blushed..she thought "kya ho gaya tujhe anandi!! Itna khush kyu hai tu!! Achanak kyu sab kuch itna accha lagne laga hai tujhe?? Kahi tujhe shiv se pyaar to nehi ho gaya??"

PYAAR!!??

Ha ye pyaar nehi to aur kya hai..mujhe pyaar to jarur ho gaya shiv se..kaise na ho..usne mujhe phirse jina sikhaya..phirse muskurane ki himmat diya..mujhe apna naam diya..itna izzat itna pyaar diya..kaise pyaar na ho usse..per use batau kaise ki mujhe usse pyaar hai??

She come out..shiv already go for his morning walk..she go to kitchen and start making breakfast..after sometimes all are in sitting in table for breakfast..shiv come back after taking shower..he smiled at anandi & she blushed..

CM-Kya hua anandi? Aaj tum kuch alag dekh rahi ho?bohot khush lag rahi ho..kya koi baat hai?
A-Nehi to cm..she looked down to hide her blush
CM-khair main aur sanchi udaypur ja rahi hu aaj..
A & S-kya? Per achanak aise kyu?
N-wo bhaiya meri frnd ki phone aya tha kal raat ko..kal se mere cls shuru hai..festival ki chakkar me main to bhul hi gaye thi..thank god ki usne yad dilaya..ab agar aaj bapas na jau to kal meri cls miss ho jayega..
S-thik hai tumhara cls important hai i understand but cm aap kyu jana chahte ho? Aap aur kuch din..
CM-nehi shiv mujhe kuch jaruri kam hai..pls zid maat karo..
S-thik hai agar jaruri kam hai to main nehi rokunga..

After breakfast choti ma and sanchi left for udaypur & shiv went to office..

Anandi come to her bedroom & thinking,"kitna suna suna lag raha hai sab kuch.."
suddenly she feels somones hands around her waist..she shocked and turn around..see a handsome face with cute smile infront of her...

Note:kuch frnds mujhe continue karne ko kaha to finally maine update karne ki himmat kar hi liya..pls do comment anything good or bad are welcome.. 😊
Edited by Momrin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nice part yar...😊 but why its so short...😭... aisa mat karo ... nd roka bhi to itne interesting mode pe... areee... Pls update fast nd long...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
a big thanxxx.for updating on ROSE day"👍🏼... and just one thing to say...when ever shiv is talking in hindi...it will naver be dekh rahi hoon. it will bhi dekh raha hoon.and sun paunga coz of gender..😊 isliya bataya.kyon ki shiv ki zuban se kdekh rahi hoon sun paungi parhe me ajeeb lagta hai...plz don't mind😊😊

and yes plz continiue...love to read it👏 👏
Edited by chumki... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Manshi

Nice part yar...😊 but why its so short...😭... aisa mat karo ... nd roka bhi to itne interesting mode pe... areee... Pls update fast nd long...😊


actually main mobile se update karti hu wo bhi bohot purana model ki set hai..itna type karne me hi bara baj gaayi meri..to meri update thoda chhota hi hoga..and thnx a lot for ur sweet comment..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: chumki...

a big thanxxx.for updating on ROSE day"👍🏼... and just one thing to say...when ever shiv is talking in hindi...it will naver be"karungi. .it will be karunga ya kahunga...😊isliya bataya.kyon ki shiv ki zuban se karungi sunne me ajeeb lagta hai...plz don't mind😊😊


Lol meri hindi bohot kharab hai mujhe pata hai thnx a lot for correcting me..actually main bangladesh se hu to mujhe hindi & english dono me prblm hai..age se dhyan rakhungi..aur mind kyu karungi aap aise hi pls meri galtya nikalte rehna taki main apna mistake sudhar saku..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin


Lol meri hindi bohot kharab hai mujhe pata hai thnx a lot for correcting me..actually main bangladesh se hu to mujhe hindi & english dono me prblm hai..age se dhyan rakhungi..aur mind kyu karungi aap aise hi pls meri galtya nikalte rehna taki main apna mistake sudhar saku..😊

....bangla te tahole prob nei???😊😊😊...thiik achche correct kore debo...
Edited by chumki... - 12 years ago

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