Ansh os:YOUR LOVE MAKE ME CRAZY updated in page 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Plzz update sooon ...
Cant wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
MOmrin...y did u stop it at this point...could not u write it a bit longer...now write fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
second part is very good, please post next one too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
How cute it is😛 just superb update... Thank god KMHs gone & ansh update soon yaar, itne interesting mode par roka kyun???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-3

Anandi surprised to see him..


A-shiv!! Aap iss waqt yaha??
S-ha main..kyun? Aap khush nehi hui mujhe dekh ke..
A-nehi..
S-nehi??
A-nehi..wo..mera matlab..wo..ap to office me gaya tha na..
S-ha gaya to tha per mera dil nehi laga..kyun ki mera dil to ghar me chod k gaya tha..he winks..
Anandi feeling nervous & looks at his eyes..she lost..he starts coming close to her..she backward..he comes close..suddenly she bumps with bed and fall on it..shiv comes on top of her..he is so close but don't touch her..she close her eyes..feels his breath on her face..she waiting for his touch..suddenly she heard her phone ring..at first she don't understand what is happening then she open her eyes & become dumb there is no one in the room..😲

her phone still ringing she ran and pick up it..its cm..
A-hello cm..
Cm-anandi beta humare bus abhi abhi nikla hai udaypur ke liye to maine socha ki tumhe inform kar du..
A-bohot accha kiya cm..acche se jana aur khayal rakhna..aur pauch te hi phone kar dena..
Cm-thik hai beta tum dono bhi apna khayal rakhna..ab rakhti hu..

After the convo anandi thinking
*Ye kya!! Main jagte huye sapna dekh rahi thi??wo bhi shiv ki!!*😲

She day dreaming about shiv the rest of the day..in kitchen..in bed room..in leaving room..only shiv & shiv..

In afternoon someone ring the door bell..its must b shiv she thought..she ran towards the door & opens it..yes its him..she looks at him lovingly & lost in his eyes..suddenly she heard a voice which is not him..

"bhabi sa kya hua?Kaha kho gaya aap?Aise kyu dekh rahe meri taraf?"

oh no its pappu!!😲

A-wo..wo..kuch nehi..wo..um..aap kuch keh rahe the pappu vaia..
P-main bazar ja raha hu..to aapko kuch mangwana hai?
A-ji nehi..*still in shock*
P-thik hai to main chalti hu..

Anandi close the door hurriedly & thinking*hay bhagwaan ye kya?mujhe pappu vaia me bhi shiv nazar aa raha hai..shukar hai ki main kuch aisa waisa nehi kya..😳main to pura pagla gayi hu..kya ho raha hai mere sath..😲nehi mujhe khuli hawa me ghum ke aana chaiye*

she goes to garden & start walking there..& then again she saw him..she close her eyes & start mumbling..
A-nehi..ab aur nehi pls aap jaiye..
S-kya bol rahi hai anandi aap? Main kaha jau?
A-dekhiye pura din aap mujhe tang kya..pls ab aur nehi..ap jaiye..
Shiv hold her shoulder & jerk her..
S-anandi kya pagolo ki tarah bake ja rahi hai? Aap ki tabiyat to thik hai na?
A-shiv? Aap sach me shiv?
S-😲??
A-wo..wo..nehi mujhe shayed galatfemia ho gaye..
S-aap thik to hai..
A-ha shiv main bilkul thik hu..pls andar chaliye na..
S-lekin..
A-shiv kuch nehi hua mujhe..chailye na..
S-thik hai..thinking*pata nehi kya ho gaya anandi ko aise kyu behave kar rahi hai*
A-thinking*ab main aur der nehi karungi ab main unhe keh dungi ki main usse pyaar karti hu warna main to pagal hi ho jagungi*

next some days shiv was too busy for ganga's case so anandi don't get any chance to express her love..finally in valentines day she plan to open her heart to shiv..she get knowledge about this day from gulli and mahi..& makes plan to surprise shiv..

In the evening of v day Shiv thinking in bedroom*its not like that i forget v day but i hesitate to give any surprise to her cause when i try to show my love to her i saw guilty & sadness in her eyes..i buy a gift for her but how i give it to her..*

his phone ring..

Its Anandi!!??

S-anandi aap kaha ho aur mujhe phone kyu kya? Aap ghar me nehi ho kya?
A-shiv pls chad per a jaiye..
S-kyu?
A-sawal maat puchiye bas aa jaiye..
S-ok as ur wish..
Shiv walking towards the terrece..

Note:frnds main idhar aake atak gayi..mujhe romantic & intimate scenes likhna nehi ata..pata nehi ab kya karungi..pls do comment anything bad or good..
Edited by Momrin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Don't understand the Hindi parts. But what I understood I liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serviana

Don't understand the Hindi parts. But what I understood I liked it!


sry my english is very bad thats why i write the dialougs in hindi..pls forgive me and thnx a lot for liking it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
WOW Momrin it is very good...well ask Neha or Vedo for romantic ideas 😉 they can give you bestest idea 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khoob bhaloo...i have a idea... tomar nischoyee love and romance niye nijer dream aache?? otaket lekhar chesta karo...just a idea😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
definately vedo will help you with the romance!

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