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G u z a r i s h .

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Previous: Part 31 Pg 100

Next: Part 32 Pg 134


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Part 32

{ 1645 words } { 7 Pages }


[ With the long updates, I'm getting lazy on color coding. I know, it's bad. ]



Recap: Kriya comes back. Footloose finale and Weaklings win. Kriyansh misunderstanding solved. Rey feels guilty.

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Part 32

"Kriya," Swayam called out spotting a running Kriya. She immediately stopped hearing the voice. She turned to look at him, tears still flowing down her eyes.

He looked at her with the softest expression which told her he was there. He was there then too. Only she didn't speak up. Now? Now there was no holding back. She crossed the distance between them and ran into his arms, sobbing on his chest, face hidden in his embrace. He was a friend truly missed.

Swayam ran his hand through her hair, an act to comfort her. "Hey, Shh. Everything will be fine. You're back. You have us. We'll make it all right again."

He felt her shake her head. "No, nothing can be fine. Not if he doesn't want it to. How'How can he think that? Was my love so weak? Was our love so weak?"

"It wasn't. You know that. Come." He made her break apart and look at him. He wiped her tears. He was about to put his arm around her and walk in the deserted night when his phone beeped. Seeing the caller ID, he looked back at Kriya.

She sniffled her sob and knowing who it could be, she spoke. "She needs you. Go."

Swayam stiffly shook his head. "I left you then. Not again."

Kriya got ready to protest but he didn't give her a choice. He immediately texted Sharon back. "With Kriya'"

Then the reply, "I understand. Make sure she's okay... I'll go find Rey."

Swayam smiled. 'She really has change' he thought to himself. "Thank you!!"

He now kept his hand around Kriya and took her away.

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Sharon saw Vicky and Nilesh with the rest of the group. She went to them and Vishakha was briefing them on everything she knew.

"Has anyone seen Rey?"

After thinking, everyone shook their heads, realizing they hadn't noticed.

Sharon turned after saying. "I'll go look for him."

Vicky stopped her. "I'll come too." Sharon was about to protest but thought she shouldn't. Vicky was Rey's closest friend and she could understand why Vicky wanted to go find Rey. After events, Vicky and Rey had grown a little apart.

She nodded. Nilesh was about to speak up as well when Vicky told him. "Please get them all home?" Nilesh nodded, knowing it was getting late for the girls as well. Vicky passed one soft look at Neha before leaving with Sharon. Neha too replied back with a blinking smile.

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"Rey'" both Sharon and Vicky called seeing Rey on his knees in the parking lot. Similarly to Kriya, he too hugged Sharon and then Vicky too joined in. Both of them calmed him down.

He was murmuring, "How could I have mistaken her? She never betrayed me. I betrayed her and her trust."

"Then gain it back." Sharon replied back. He looked at her confused and she gave a sweet nod. "She isn't going anywhere. She still loves you. She'll forgive you."

"But how do I forgive myself?" Rey questioned back innocently.

"Aww'" Vicky hummed and gave him a hug.

"Give it some time."

Hearing this, Rey couldn't help but let out a giggle. "Since when did you become a love guru?"

"Hey!" Vicky replied offended. "Acha chod, tu bhi kya yaad rakhega. Forgot all the times when I helped you win over Kriya first time?"

"First time?" Sharon asked.

Both Rey and Vicky looked away, remembering the RDX party time and the very first moments.

Sharon got up and stood with attitude. "Tomorrow begins Pataofy Kriya Mission. Who's with me?"

She held out her hand. Vicky kept his on top of hers and Rey sealed the deal. He looked at his friends, ever glad to have them in his life. If not for them, he would still be crying and wouldn't have had the courage to think of winning Kriya over again. He knew it would be hard but he won't let this golden chance go.

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Shivam was fuming with anger. Once again, his plan to divide the group had flopped. And with Kriya back, he knew it'd be harder than before. Kriya was their driving force and with her comeback, it was as if the energy of the whole team was back. He knew that if he didn't act smart now, his D-Day would come soon.

Just then, he saw Taani walking by in the distance. A plan quickly formed and he grinned. "Hey, Taani!" he said loudly to make sure she heard him. But she was in her own world to pay attention to her surroundings. She didn't know why but her heart was heavy, even after knowing Rey loved someone else. It wasn't her fault. It's the matter of heart, uncontrollable.

He jogged up to her and tapped her on her shoulder, bringing her out of her unconscious state. She got scared and stepped back. Seeing it was Shivam, she took a breath of relief. "Oh, it you."

"What's up? I've been calling you since long but you kept on going!"

"That'nothing. Just thinking. Did you need something?"

Shivam shook his head. "Just thought to give you company. You seem lost."

"That's very kind of you. But I can manage on my own. Thanks."

She turned to go but he stopped her by her wrist. "Hey please, don't be like that. I'll drop you home na."

"Really, it's okay. I have my car. I'll manage."

He was about to force when a voice from behind spoke. "She said she'll manage."

Taani turned to see Kriya and Swayam. Shivam gritted his teeth seeing them as well. Kriya and Swayam walked up to them coolly.

They let their stern look speak for itself. Taani looked from KriYam to Shivam and back to KriYam, wondering what it was all about.

Swayam warned, "Don't start another plan. And by any chance, don't involve Taani in it."

"Why don't you worry about yourself?" Shivam retorted back.

Kriya stepped in. "Enough of your petty games. No more. You've done enough. You have had your chance. Now it's my turn. To get back at Sharon, you hurt my family. You're going to have to pay for that, hook or crook."

Shivam gave an innocent look. "Please Kriya' I've forgotten that and I've even apologized for that. Please let go. I've changed."

Kriya scoffed. "You? Apologize? Change? Do you even know the meaning of those words? I know better." She snapped her fingers in front of him. "Don't take this as an empty threat. If you do anything else, or bother Taani ever again, that'll be the end of my patience. And stay away from Sharon."

She paused for a few seconds to glare at Shivam. Swayam looked at Kriya, surprised. He wondered why Kriya was being so worried for Sharon. And yes, she treats her friends as family. But when she was warning Shivam using 'family', it seemed to be taken in a different way.

"Taani, let's go." Not knowing any better, Taani left with them.

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In the car, Swayam asked Kriya, "Why didn't you tell me? Didn't you trust me?"

"Swayam please'You know that. I just didn't have the courage to."

"I can't believe that. Junior Jhansi Ki Rani and not courageous?"

Kriya giggled. Seeing her smile, Swayam too smiled. "Thank you."

"No, thank YOU! Tum aa gayi na' sab theek ho jayega aab."

"I hope so." She said, with deep meanings. She meant it for her and Rey and also about her family issue.

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Next morning, Kriya entered the college with Vishakha and Naina. "Stop it yaar Naina. You're out friend too. And now even aunty has given you permission! You can continue your college here. You have us and my friends. What else do you need?"

"But' it doesn't feel right. They're your friends'" She told Kriya.

Kriya slapped her friend. "Abey chup. Aur bolegi toh pitegi. Aab chup chap chal."

Naina pouted cutely at the slap and Vishakha and Kriya laughed at it. Suddenly a random person came and handed her a letter. She asked but he didn't respond. He just handed it to her and left. She looked at the letter 'C'.

"C?" Vishakha asked. Kriya shrugged, confused. It happened 8 more times. Each time, a person handed her a letter. She kept them in order and it spelled, "Chubilaal"

Naina and Vishakha were confused on that. "Chubilaal?" they asked. But Kriya knew it was Rey and couldn't help but smile a little. Vicky, who was watching from behind the pillar, commented. "Hasi, toh phasi."

He then called Sharon. "Stage 1 completed."

"Great work comrade. Stage 2 in motion. Over and out." Sharon replied back, fully in agent style.

"Roger that." Vicky commented back.

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Someone tapped Vicky from the back and he sprang back, taken aback. He found Vishakha and Kriya there, hands crossed across their chest. He let out a low scream. "Aah! Oh' hey guys."

They raised their brows. Vishakha asked, "What's going on?"

"Nothing's going on. Why would you ask that?" Vicky fumbled.

Kriya took his hand forward, kept the letters in his hand with attitude and informed. "Tell Reyansh Singhania these antics of his aren't going to work this time."

Vishakha 'patted' Vicky's back dangerously before moving on with Kriya.

Once they were gone, Vicky texted Sharon. "She knows."

"S***. Plan B." came the reply.

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"Reyansh Singhania!!" Sharon sternly called him from outside the locker room. "Get you a** out here. NOW!"

Swayam peeped his head out wondering why she was yelling. "What happened?" he asked.

"Get your BFF out here." She told him.

"Okay chill. Wait a second." He said and went back in.

"Rey' Sharon'"

"I know."

"They why aren't you going out?"

"Plan B'"

"Plan B?" Swayam asked.

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Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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n o t e .

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Like promised, it's Monday and the update is here!! Hope you all liked it 😳


So... Kriyansh happy coming around. As said, Taani's role won't end here. There are still many things to happen 😃



Socho Plan B kya hai 😛 😉


Next update dunno when... I have IJD to update too so... I will try to manage both but no promises this time 😳


Leave your precious likes and views pretty please!

Love,

-Khushi.

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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LB!!!!! 🤗

*ye sirf tujhe pakadne keliye... be in my arms and read warna length dekh ke chakkar aajayega!!!DD se itna lamba ?? karke ...🤣🤣*


me jumping , grinning like a fool re..!!! I am super duper happy for no reason u know ...
Actually I opened this post reply and the first page of this thread just to listen the song and was reading a post which I started in NBTNMKK forum ...but one line took my whole dil dimaag sab kuch


"bas ek haa ki gusarish!!! fir hogi khushiyon ki baarish!!"

well this will and is the exact situation where the story is standing now... frankly speaking lemme tell you when u started this I was like gaana ki aur story ki kya connection hai !!! then I was like sab kuch toh mujhe nahi pata toh mooh band karke padungi... and here it is!!! Yay!!! I got it... and the story is on the right track!!! well lemme keep my rest for the last!!!

coming to part 31!!!

most irritating part

sab kuch padliya!!! skip karke last ki small bit *I am confident that u will give a little part at the last and I am proved right !!*🤔 hogi use padun but u know this stupid thought that beech mei ek line tum extra kardogi karke...grrr...poora padna pada!!!

first of all stop colouring!! no need of it... meri baat maanlo..

Well that was an expected reaction and I personally wanted sharon to be the part of dazzlers only...and yeah I was quite surprised with vish's statement but thinking that she is one practical girl then its quite correct from her side...

I loved this bond of louins!! and I am liking this slight constant change of sharon but yeah I want her to be arrogant at times... think about it once 😉

Next part mujhe thoda filmy laga😳 coz ye over hearing and all quite common in films right!! and I luuubbbeeeddd this small part soo much u see filmy things effect me much !!!😆

Next part sorry no comments!!! Even though I felt it unnecessary at this time and yeah I am right at this moment is not necessary but I think U have some kichdi paking for future...so bhakshdiya tujhe warna kha leti !!!🤣

Tadaa!!!!!!!! I loved smriti re!!! 😆 Seriously even though I hate her for breaking up my KriYaansh ab wapas bhi usi ki wajah se hoying... love you smriti *she will faint*😛

hahaha I still love the line " Finally u found someone else"🤣🤣

wohoo !!!RLB calling Rey Romeo!!! instead of "Mr. Shirtless wonder??"

someone catch me...

😲......🤢

my reaction process!! 🤣🤣

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as I didn't comment on OS too I am commenting here!! wo maaf *not sorry wala* kardena

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Are going to say he is forming some soft corner for her !!!?????😡😡

hehehe kriya ko jalan hoying???🤣🤣🤣

SHIVAM!!!!!!😡😡😡 I hate him!!!!!!😵

lalalalalala... *shaks style* finally my KR gonna meet... suhane pal khareeb aarahe hai!! Hayyeee!!!!!!!!!!

Poor sharon!!! how much can she too do ??

Yay!!!!!! Yipeee yooo!!!!!!! finally my pari back!!! dil taras raha hai iss pal keliye ... *jyaada filmy hogaya na >??* 🤣🤣

and haa Taani achi ho ya buri mujhe toh bohut maza aaying!!!





🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

me doing this dance !!!!!

my confused maharaaj!!! ufff... muaahhh!!!!! love him re kuch bhi ho !!🤣🤣

expected reaction from Rey he does have that right... and yeah I lubbeeddd sharon here a lot...

"If it is, then go talk privately! We don't need to hear this."

rey ki chehra dekhne layak hoga
🤣🤣


Y ?? Y kriya feeling guilty!! grr... :P I am like this only jhelo...

seriously I was supposed to be emotional but may be its coz I know the rest of the story now I am laughing like fool!!!

I loved rey's line...

"From what?? me??"🤣🤣

that actually cracked me up!!!

hawww!!!!!!! I LUB YOU aisa??? maine kya kya socha !!

door raho mere Rey se!!!!! 😛

well no comments aage bohut gandi gaali niklegi u know that so zipping !!

I loved rey's thought well thinking hard I felt Rey is not actuallly at fault ...its quite natural... he is not some Shri Ram to understand the opposite one even when broken totally... I think it is justified...

but I would love to see this "manaofy "session!!☺️

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part 32

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once again nothing bad in it ...stop colouring... second time boling so with a bit of authoritative voice 😛😆

I love kriyam re!!😭

ID dekhke I expected teasing re ... mai hoti toh wahi karti... poochti "someone special calling???? ummm"🤣🤣

Sharon did change a lot...😲

ReCky!!! I still wait for their scenes not some random ones...the actual ones... hmmm 🥱

Loved this whole part re!! mostly on Bff's !!! muahhh!!!!!! I love friendship !!!

Yo!!!!! Mission Kria Ghai again!!!!!

ab toh sharon bhi hai... a perfect leader🥳

Shivam!!!!🤬 no comments... and uske saath jo hai uskeliye bhi no comments!!!

loved hoe Kriya shouted on shivam ...awww family!! her lub for sharon!!!

Swayam dimaag ki batti jala jaldi... nikal info from kriya about sharon and milao them!!! 😆

naina!!!! ab iska kya??? I sense lots of drama ahead!!! 🥱

and yeah!!! chabilaal!!!!!! :*

hehe plan flop hogaya !!! JRLB hai yaha ...samhalke viks !!! 😆

ab ye plan 2 ki hai!!!

waiting now!!!


well mai upar ye kehna chahti thi ki

ab karle jo karna hai...jo bhi drama likhna hai mai khushi khushi padungi coz I will get my KR pakka wala back!!!!!!

it feells megical...!!!!!!!!!


well hope I not pakaofied u with my pakka wala "HinGlish!!"

🤣🤣🤣🤣


Love you re!!!

- your DD☺️




Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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KJ and NJ gonna be so mad and sad =P

I think Mimi too will be.
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shall I complete this page??? sabko jalaungi😆
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Originally posted by: *Khushii*

KJ and NJ gonna be so mad and sad =P


I think Mimi too will be.




KJ is kinju... who is NJ???

and mimi is mish right??😕
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DD_ tum bhi na 😆

NJ is Namrata.

Yup, mimi is misha

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