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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Thank you so much for the PM! I just love the flow of your story. It's an alternate universe of could've happened had they not gotten married. 


Love jealous Khushi! She feels for Arnav but doesn't want to get hurt by him again. I'm glad she wasn't humiliated at AR Group again. 

Really looking forward to the next chapter. 



Thanks for the comments!

I definitely don't want to humiliate Khushi, as the CV's did. I want her to be a confident woman.

Continue reading and please keep sharing your feedback, I really appreciate it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: deepa.e

Interesting and awesome!! i like natasha but she is poking her nose too much!! now let me see what happens next!! i want arnav to know about that shyam snake soon!!

Continue soon!!



Thanks!!

I definitely have not forgotten about the snake! You will see him emerging in the next few chapters.

Please continue reading and sharing your back feedback. I really appreciate it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: fan123GUNJ

So as I thought Natasha is like lavanya but more professional
Nice update
Natasha thought there can't be love connection how wrong was she
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
:)



Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate all the comments I get!

Natasha won't be mean to Khushi like Lavanya was, but she will be a different kind of a character. I hope I can update before this weekend, as I'm going to be out of town, but I'm kind of busy, so might have to update after Monday.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

It was an interesting update.
Natasha seemed to be practical.Hope Khushi proves herself and does not disappoint Arnav.



Thanks for the feedback!

Yes, Natasha is definitely a practical character in this story.

I really want Khushi to prove herself not just to Arnav, but also to herself. That's kind of one of the goals of this story.

Hope you continue reading and sending your feedback!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Read last two parts just now and I must say both parts are Lovely
Arnav will never change he makes pm much excuses to himself for his own acts
Natasha is nice thank god she is not like lavanya
great work buddy
Please do continue
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: suchikashyap

Read last two parts just now and I must say both parts are Lovely
Arnav will never change he makes pm much excuses to himself for his own acts
Natasha is nice thank god she is not like lavanya
great work buddy
Please do continue
Thanks for the PM



Thanks for the comments!!

Please keep reading and leaving your feedback, I really appreciate it!

I probably won't be updating until after Monday though.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
jus came across this.. wonderfull natasha s a sensible boss! arnav s trying to change everything ffrom the past.. plz pm wen u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: frenzyy

jus came across this.. wonderfull natasha s a sensible boss! arnav s trying to change everything ffrom the past.. plz pm wen u update!



Thanks for the comment! Natasha is a sensible boss for sure.

Hope you continue reading and I will definitely PM you when I update, which I hope to do in the next couple of days.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
when will you update?

please update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: suchikashyap

when will you update?

please update soon



I'm happy to know that someone out there is waiting for me to update 😛

I have written chapter 6 but still need to revise and make some adjustments, so will hopefully try to post tomorrow night (pacific standard time), so probably in the next 24 hours.

Will definitely PM you when I post.