SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 88

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Posted: 9 years ago
super update!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyya sakshi 🤗
very nycly written finally swayam is back
hope sharon will confess soon update soon dea

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Awesome update👏
swaron fight finally solved😃yeee
n their cuet little holi moment i jst loved it😳
sharon n manvi's convo ws jst so nice👍🏼
will be eagerly waiting fr d next part😊
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Fabulous update :)
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Hey Shakshi,

Amazing updates..Loved the way u showed sharon side n that too make her realized her love for swayam.At relationship basis,I like this move to make sharon concerned towards swayam and here swayam's behaviour was usually right,i think..I am just glad to read such emotional part here in swaron relationship..And as i said always,Manvi is doing great as a cool catalyst between two reactants Swayam n Sharon..I liked ur way to wrote sweet n teasing dialouges of maanvi..

Now the last one update was trully awesome as finally u made SwaRon patched up n that too on the occassion of Holi..It was like a holi surprise for sharon...I liked the conversation part of SwaRon most..Loved the way he made her understand his side of story n she forgive him..After then color applying session was dramatic yet emotional one..In all,great done..

So Thanx for ur PM n Do update soon as ur comfort
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
I really love Sharon maanvi bond
Swayam is back and the patch up was too good
Thanks for the scrap
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazingg part😊
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Recap- Swayam comes to manofy Sharon...their convo...

 
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[Convo continues]
Sharon- Sshh... same mere sath... tumhe aise dekha to I... but ab nahi... jao meine maaf kiya... ab I also want maafi...
Swayam- No maafi for no galti...
Sharon *looks straight into his eyes*- Last time...asking you...now tell...mera right hai na ki tumhari care kar saku...tumhe kuch bol saku...?
Swayam *nodding*- Forever right hai... see...proof bhi de diya...
Sharon *smiling*- Haan...sindoor...but aise bahar kaise jaun mein?
Swayam *smirk*- Koi puchega to bol denge... married without rituals..
Sharon- Jokes apart! Ok!
Swayam- Acha baba...okay...

Swayam took the color and asked her to close her eyes...she did that and then Swayam showered some color on her dress...and sprinkled on her hairs too... the color fell on her face too...she guessed what Swayam would have done. Sharon opened her eyes and glared...

Sharon- Arghhh! My hairsss!!!

She snatched the color from him, he ran out but she showered the color on him...

Swayam *winked*- Pay back time will come... just remember my love.

They met their family...and then came out. Maanvi saw them...
Manvi- Jiju...woow! Happy holi...to both of you...
SwaRon- Happy holi...
Maanvi- Vaise Didz...kuch bhi kaho official marriage baaki hai...
Both looked surprised and exchanged looks.

Maanvi- Aww...mere Jiju aur Didz...
Swayam- Acha... Sharon...before the Holi starts come with me...and you too Maanvi.
Sharon- But kahan...? Abhi??
Maanvi- Jiju aap jao mein aur Didz aate hai...


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The three sat in the Car, Swayam was driving...

Swayam- Sharon...you remember mein tumhe apne uncle ke ghar le gaya tha...after exam... and you liked that place...?
Sharon- Oh yeah...I do remember... are we going there?
Swayam- Yup!!

After 15min they reached the place..some final construction was going on...
They came out of the Car.

Sharon- Swayamm... ye construction place pe..hum kyun aaye hai.?
Maanvi- Wait..what is this Dream Destiny Dance Academy' ?
Sharon *surprised*- Swayam..!! You...?
Swayam *smiling*- Hmm...Sharon's Academy it is.
Sharon- Yeh tumne...I mean...
Maanvi- Wow Jiju...
Swayam- Yeh tumhara dream tha na Sharon...so I had to fulfill it...

Sharon moved near to the building... it was 3 floor building (includes ground too). She could't say a word... she was so glad...so happy!

Maanvi- Iska name.."Dream Destiny" kyun hai?
Swayam- Sharon ka Dream... and Destiny is the factor who supports us...and Destiny ke karan we are together...the Academy is standing.
Maanvi- Aww...
Sharon- Thankyou so much Swayam..thanks a lot...

She came and both hugged each other... Maanvi smiled looking at them.
Maanvi- Acha chalo ab...now Happy ho gaya now Holi is still waiting for us...

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Sharon had to pay back... Swayam poured the whole bucket of water on her...which made her furious... Everyone was enjoying... Simmi was with Sharon and Swayam with Nilesh... SwaRon were facing their back to each other...and in front was a big water tub...NiMmi pushed SwaRon into the tub... Sharon screamed Swayam...and immediately held his kurta tightly...

Sharon- Simmi...tu gayiii...
Swayam- Sharon...aaram se...wait...

Sharon was about to fall when Swayam picked her up in arms..and took her out... their eyes locked, after they came to the real world..she blushed at this...

After sometime, Swayam was with boys gang... and had a bit bhang when everyone forced him to have some... he was in the trance of it, not completely, but one could refer him in trance of it.
Sharon was unaware of this... she came to him and dragged him out...

Swayam- Sharonn...kaha...
Sharon- Tum chalo...mere saath... bohot khel liya...

She took him to her room...and locked it from inside.
She turned and he pulled her close holding her waist...
Sharon- Swayam...yeh kya...chhodo..I...
Swayam- Sshhh...

His one hand travelled till her shoulder..and shifted her dupatta a bit down...  she still had a hold of it... his both hands' fingers touched her back and the dress too... making her breath high... He knew what she felt just a second before...

Swayam- Dress ka hook khula hai...wahi laga raha hun...
Sharon *looking down*- Pehle...kyun nahi bola...
Swayam- Fir yeh mauka mujhe kaha milta...

She looked up at him...an her eyes got locked with his... he leaned...bue she didn't move back... he, all the way brushing his lips against her cheeks, stopped near her ears...she controlled herself like hell... her salwar was crushed by her clutching...

Swayam *whisper*- Itna...hot lagna zarurii hai kya...

Sharon couldn't help but blush at this question...kept her hand on his shoulder and made him shift back...he smiled... and left her... She turned back and he sat on the bed...(Sharon not aware)

She released her breath which she was holding from past few minutes. And then after seconds...she spoke...
Sharon- I..I don't know...what to say...but..I made you come with me... uska..uska sirf ek hi reason..hai... ki I want..I want to confess my feelings today... that...Swayam...I..I..lov..love you...

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Edited by sakshibshah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohh sharon confessed his feelings😳
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh wow sharon confess her feelings
hope swayam bhang ke nashe so na jaye 😆
thanks for the pm
do update soon please