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<font size="4">hello guys,
i am new to this forum and even a silent reader. This is my first story so kindly avoid my mistakes.
so here it goes.
rain
drops are falling on his face, thundering are to be heard, but still he
doesnot care to walk on this stormy rainy nights. tears appered in his
eyes remembering the betrayed he got from his own family, from his own
di, his brother.
flashback______
shyam- i am so sorry saale-sahab
but i couldnot be your puppet and ask money throughout my life time, so i
need to do this. now this rm and AR fashion is on my and aakash name.
Arnav-you bas***d how dare you !!
have you forgotten how i picked up you from the road and allowed you to live here with luxuries.
Anjali- chhote how dare u talk to your jeejaji like that
Arnav- di!!!!!!
Anjali-
yes, i have helped him. have u forgotten the sign i took from you on
some papers reffering it to be bank account paper,those papers are of rm
and ar papers. now these whole property belong to shyamji and aakash.
Arnav-why you did that di.
Anjali-
i need to do this. you have got all the properties in your name. i now
you had built it from scratch and is the result of your hard working,
but i need to think about my family.
i am pregnent now and you are
going to be married.what will happen once your so called wife sheetal
comes.after all i am living on your property and what i will give my
children and i am sure you will give all that to your child.
arnav
got really broken by this,his di is talking like this. he has been
planning to share the property in three names one di, aakash and
himself.his di who had been the whole world to him.
Arnav - why you didnot tell me di. i would have given happily that to you.
Anjali-i
know but i dont want you to be great. everything was perfect till you
are not getting married but when you decided to get married to that
little bitch then i only have to find my way for my family.
Arnav- and aakash you.
aakash- i was tired of you ordering me
everywhere and giving me orders. i really hate you from the core of my
heart. u got u wanted every time and, just a failure, nothing else. you
and i, both got the same amount of money , but you suceed and i am not
suceeding till now i am struggling. and then i decided to work at ar and
get all my revenge. from childhood only you are getting what i wanted.
now this will not to be continued. you payed for everything.
arnav
got totally broken by now. words didnot came from his mouth. after the
death of his family he had made his little family his world. his mama,
mami,di, aakash,nani. what happened all of sudden.
he worked hard so
that they couldnot get a comfortable life. he never thought that they
are respecting him or loving him because of property. why again the
allmighty proved him that he is not there in this world.
Anjali- i
think u should leave chote from here chote. i dont want you to play the
game here by gaining our sympathy . i cant risk my family future which
is secured now.
Akash- yes bhai i think you should leave now. afterall there is nothing left of your own now.
Mami-
i am proud of you aakash bitwa, finally you proved to be very good
buissness man. the path you chosed doesnot matter when you have go what
you wanted. look arnav now you cant say my son is a failure. aakash
bitwa my trip to europe with your dad is sure na
Akash- sure mom, i already got the tickets.
Nani-
chote i am sorry for you but i cannot leave my family for ur sake. 16
yrs back i supported you but now i dont have much more strength
remained.
flashback continues---------
the words they spoke took away the land
beneath the ground from him. he simply walked outside of the house.tears
are continuosly flowing from his eyes. he never has cried after the
death of his mother and after that he considered his di to be his mother
and again destiny played with him and took away his mother.
flashback end-----------------
there
is nobody in the street , he is walking alone in this rainy night.
suddenly one truck came to him. he was walking carelessly in the road.
suddenly everything goes dark infront of his eyes and he felt a sharp
pain in his head not to be ignored. finally he lost his consciousness
the
truck driver flew from that place leaving behind an injured man in the
middle of the road. at last some localities saw him and called for the
ambulance and he is been taken to hospital.
in the morning when he
opeaned his eyes he saw around and found it difficult to recognise. last
time he remembered he was walking alone in the street how came he is
here now and then he got the flashback of the betray of his brother ,
harsh words from his own family. suddenly he got a sharp pain in his
head again.
nurse came to observe him and she ran to call the doctor.
a
beutiful, gordgeous lady with fair skin and a worried look on her long
eye lashes came and place her hand in his shoulder. arnav raised his
chin to look at her properly and was stunned because he recognise her.
arnav- khushi!!!!
flashback---------
akash- bhai please i will die if i will not able to get her.
arnav- try and understand aakash. she is not at all interested in you, she refused for th marraige.
aaksh- if u want me alive you will get her for me.
arnav- aakash listen... aakash...aakash
aakash left the room and went to his room and locked the door.
arnav- damn!!!!...
he banged his hand on the wall
mami- look because of you my son is suffering in the hell
arnav- but mami i talked a lot with that girl but she clearly denied for the marraige.
for about 1 mnth i am going frequently visiting her, but she didnot gave a shit about this.
mami- no u r lying u dont want my son to maary that girl. have u fallen for her????
arnav-
no mami u r getting me all wrong. why i wil<font size="4">l</font> not want her to marry
aaksh. she is a beutifull girl i have ever seen,but her manners,
enthusiasim, selfless nature and above all she is good doctor and hold a
respectful job in the society. even aakash will learn too much from
her.
mami- what do you mean aakash will learn too much from her. my
aakash is already th best. have u forgotten how i brought you up from 8
yrs age, when ur parents died. dont forget that.
aranav was hurt by her words. he didnot mean that but now he choses to remain silent and walked outside of the house.
<font size="4">pt2- pg 3
<font size="4">pt3- p<font size="4">g</font> 4</font>
</font>
p<font size="4">t</font>4- pg 7
<font size="4">pt5- pg 9
<font size="4">pt6-<font size="4"> pg 13
<font size="4">pt7- pg 15
<font size="4"><font size="4">pt8- pg 18
<font size="4">pt<font size="4">9- pg 24</font></font>
</font></font></font></font></font></font></font><font size="3">pt 10- pg 27
pt 11- pg 31
pt 12-pg 34
pt 13- pg 40
pt 14-pg 44</font>
<font size="3">pt <font size="3">15-pg 50</font></font>
<font size="3">pt 16-pg 55</font>
pt 17 -pg 61
pt 18- pg 66
pt 19- pg 71
pt 20- pg 75
pt 21- pg 80
pt 22- pg 85
pt 23- pg 90
i am new to this forum and even a silent reader. This is my first story so kindly avoid my mistakes.
so here it goes.
rain
drops are falling on his face, thundering are to be heard, but still he
doesnot care to walk on this stormy rainy nights. tears appered in his
eyes remembering the betrayed he got from his own family, from his own
di, his brother.
flashback______
shyam- i am so sorry saale-sahab
but i couldnot be your puppet and ask money throughout my life time, so i
need to do this. now this rm and AR fashion is on my and aakash name.
Arnav-you bas***d how dare you !!
have you forgotten how i picked up you from the road and allowed you to live here with luxuries.
Anjali- chhote how dare u talk to your jeejaji like that
Arnav- di!!!!!!
Anjali-
yes, i have helped him. have u forgotten the sign i took from you on
some papers reffering it to be bank account paper,those papers are of rm
and ar papers. now these whole property belong to shyamji and aakash.
Arnav-why you did that di.
Anjali-
i need to do this. you have got all the properties in your name. i now
you had built it from scratch and is the result of your hard working,
but i need to think about my family.
i am pregnent now and you are
going to be married.what will happen once your so called wife sheetal
comes.after all i am living on your property and what i will give my
children and i am sure you will give all that to your child.
arnav
got really broken by this,his di is talking like this. he has been
planning to share the property in three names one di, aakash and
himself.his di who had been the whole world to him.
Arnav - why you didnot tell me di. i would have given happily that to you.
Anjali-i
know but i dont want you to be great. everything was perfect till you
are not getting married but when you decided to get married to that
little bitch then i only have to find my way for my family.
Arnav- and aakash you.
aakash- i was tired of you ordering me
everywhere and giving me orders. i really hate you from the core of my
heart. u got u wanted every time and, just a failure, nothing else. you
and i, both got the same amount of money , but you suceed and i am not
suceeding till now i am struggling. and then i decided to work at ar and
get all my revenge. from childhood only you are getting what i wanted.
now this will not to be continued. you payed for everything.
arnav
got totally broken by now. words didnot came from his mouth. after the
death of his family he had made his little family his world. his mama,
mami,di, aakash,nani. what happened all of sudden.
he worked hard so
that they couldnot get a comfortable life. he never thought that they
are respecting him or loving him because of property. why again the
allmighty proved him that he is not there in this world.
Anjali- i
think u should leave chote from here chote. i dont want you to play the
game here by gaining our sympathy . i cant risk my family future which
is secured now.
Akash- yes bhai i think you should leave now. afterall there is nothing left of your own now.
Mami-
i am proud of you aakash bitwa, finally you proved to be very good
buissness man. the path you chosed doesnot matter when you have go what
you wanted. look arnav now you cant say my son is a failure. aakash
bitwa my trip to europe with your dad is sure na
Akash- sure mom, i already got the tickets.
Nani-
chote i am sorry for you but i cannot leave my family for ur sake. 16
yrs back i supported you but now i dont have much more strength
remained.
flashback continues---------
the words they spoke took away the land
beneath the ground from him. he simply walked outside of the house.tears
are continuosly flowing from his eyes. he never has cried after the
death of his mother and after that he considered his di to be his mother
and again destiny played with him and took away his mother.
flashback end-----------------
there
is nobody in the street , he is walking alone in this rainy night.
suddenly one truck came to him. he was walking carelessly in the road.
suddenly everything goes dark infront of his eyes and he felt a sharp
pain in his head not to be ignored. finally he lost his consciousness
the
truck driver flew from that place leaving behind an injured man in the
middle of the road. at last some localities saw him and called for the
ambulance and he is been taken to hospital.
in the morning when he
opeaned his eyes he saw around and found it difficult to recognise. last
time he remembered he was walking alone in the street how came he is
here now and then he got the flashback of the betray of his brother ,
harsh words from his own family. suddenly he got a sharp pain in his
head again.
nurse came to observe him and she ran to call the doctor.
a
beutiful, gordgeous lady with fair skin and a worried look on her long
eye lashes came and place her hand in his shoulder. arnav raised his
chin to look at her properly and was stunned because he recognise her.
arnav- khushi!!!!
flashback---------
akash- bhai please i will die if i will not able to get her.
arnav- try and understand aakash. she is not at all interested in you, she refused for th marraige.
aaksh- if u want me alive you will get her for me.
arnav- aakash listen... aakash...aakash
aakash left the room and went to his room and locked the door.
arnav- damn!!!!...
he banged his hand on the wall
mami- look because of you my son is suffering in the hell
arnav- but mami i talked a lot with that girl but she clearly denied for the marraige.
for about 1 mnth i am going frequently visiting her, but she didnot gave a shit about this.
mami- no u r lying u dont want my son to maary that girl. have u fallen for her????
arnav-
no mami u r getting me all wrong. why i wil<font size="4">l</font> not want her to marry
aaksh. she is a beutifull girl i have ever seen,but her manners,
enthusiasim, selfless nature and above all she is good doctor and hold a
respectful job in the society. even aakash will learn too much from
her.
mami- what do you mean aakash will learn too much from her. my
aakash is already th best. have u forgotten how i brought you up from 8
yrs age, when ur parents died. dont forget that.
aranav was hurt by her words. he didnot mean that but now he choses to remain silent and walked outside of the house.
<font size="4">pt2- pg 3
<font size="4">pt3- p<font size="4">g</font> 4</font>
</font>
p<font size="4">t</font>4- pg 7
<font size="4">pt5- pg 9
<font size="4">pt6-<font size="4"> pg 13
<font size="4">pt7- pg 15
<font size="4"><font size="4">pt8- pg 18
<font size="4">pt<font size="4">9- pg 24</font></font>
</font></font></font></font></font></font></font><font size="3">pt 10- pg 27
pt 11- pg 31
pt 12-pg 34
pt 13- pg 40
pt 14-pg 44</font>
<font size="3">pt <font size="3">15-pg 50</font></font>
<font size="3">pt 16-pg 55</font>
pt 17 -pg 61
pt 18- pg 66
pt 19- pg 71
pt 20- pg 75
pt 21- pg 80
pt 22- pg 85
pt 23- pg 90
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