Swaani SS: The relationship *DISCONTINUED* - Page 4

bhavi ho to sahon jaisa

Aashna love both parts, it was amazing so romantic and the place was beautiful. Rey staring at Taani and admiring her beauty was tooo cute. Taani getting all hyper on him because of her bhai and Rey asking for forgiveness was too funny lol. Distraction 33 wow poor guy counting lol swayam always call at the wrong time. U did a superb job, love your writing skills. Plz continue soon.

nice update.
sharon ne bacha liya taani ko..
thanks for the pm and as per d3 precap reyam ke bich me mu..😭
continue soon.

Aesome! Awesome! Awesome!

Dii.. I've no words again.. Taarey romance left me dead blushing.. specially Rey's that line.. Distraction no.33 Hahahah!!! Loved it.. I love the naughty side of Rey.. N jitna mai naughty Rey se pyaar karti hu.. usse zyada Possesive Swayam se karti hu.. actually mera bada bhai nahi hai na.. Isilye I love possessive Swayam.. Jaldi update karo dii.. and pm karna zaroor!

Awesome update i love this part

loved both the updates dear and distraction no. 33 was awesome😆 update soon

hey aashna nyc concept
pls update soon cant w8😃

hii aashna..
I read all 3 parts together, you wrote it so beautifully, n how dare u underestimate urself**angry***dont do that, u wrote it so beautifully dear..and yes what i feel-i could visualize swayam that means u did justice to his chara, it was typical d3 swayam , possesive bhai and mannerisms were xactly the same i cud visualize it. And taarey awww so chweeet.. I am waiting for the next part , update soon

Hey i read both 2nd n 3rd parts 2gedr...i think u r doin a beautiful job!! Thnx 4 d pm dear...all m hopin is swayam does 2 taarey...undrstndin hw pressurised he is at d moment ...update soon :)