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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update mannu di
aur rey ko kisne bola tha itna drink karne ko ab kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai
bechari kria ko faltu daanta
finally yad toh aaya
i wish sab kuch theek ho jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Luvd it...
Finally rey ko yaad aa hi gaya ki kriya usse kal rat kya bola tha...
Fokat mein kriya par chillaya...
Amazingly written...

Waiting 4 de nxt part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya...😊
I have read the updates from part 7 to 13 altogether..
So this comment is 4 all of them..
I m really sorry for commenting this late..😳

The way you showed the gang having fun in the project was really nice..👍🏼
Kriya have totally changed Rey..Wow..😃
Their dance on the beach Haye...Fabulous...
I loved their chemistry ❤️in every scene but that was bad which happened with them on Rey's birthday..😔
Kriya's past😲Hate that RV and his father...😡

Saari updates mast thi...Awesome just like ur every work...😉

Love,
Soha!
Edited by Sohad3fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
iska bi update do na pls😭
i am waiting for this
pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsummm update dear <3
luv it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello people, I'm here with an update. I kniw its been month I haven't updated it and I'm really sorry for that. I have semesters lined up and that makes it difficult for me to write updates. It took me four days to write this small chapter. Now you can imagine how busy I am. The next update will be in december only. I'll be updating my drabble series only till then.


Chapter 14:



Rey was pacing to and fro in his room. He was waiting for Kriya to return from her job. He was determined to confront her and solve all the misunderstandings.


"Chillax Rey, you can do it." He motivated himself. He heard the door bell ring and as expected it was Kriya. He saw her going towards her room and quickly proceeded towards her. Before she could close the door he entered in.


"Aap, yahan?" She asked puzzled. Her eyes depicted her sadness.


"I need to talk to you."


"Boliye."


"Kriya." He took a deep breath and continued "I'm sorry. I'm sorry for behaving like a jerk. I'm sorry for everything. Tumne itni mushkil se mujhe se apna past share kiya and meine bahut galat kiya. Instead of respecting your feelings...I..." his voice trailed off at the end.


Guiltiness was clearly evident on his face.


"You don't need to be sorry Rey. It's fine." She said with a small smile.


"Sure?" He asked taking a step ahead.


"Ye...yeah." She replied moving backwards. He proceeded towards her till she hit the wall. He trapped her between the wall and him. A sly smile was playing on his lips which made Kriya ponder hard.


"Now that everything's fine between us..." he paused for a moment observing her reaction. The confused assertions on her made him adore her even more. He dangerously inched closer to her making her breath unevenly.


"Don't you think you should confess your feelings?" He cooed in her ears whilst caressing her cheek with his. His handa travelled across her waist and gripped it firmly yet softly.


He moved back, observing her expressions. She was still in his trance and her eyes were closed. Those deep and uneven breaths of hers caused her bosom to heave up and down attracting his vision. He shook his head controlling his unnecessary desires.


She opened her eyes and found him staring at her intensly. She lowered her gaze not able to meet his. He took her hand and led her out. She wondered where he was taking her. They reached the garden. There was a huge cave like thing attached to one of the walls. It was purely made up of stones. Kriya always wondered what it was and today she was going to see it. There were mixed emotions playing on her face. She was curious to see what was in and also confused as to why Rey brought her there.


"Stop wondering. The more you think the more confused you'd be." He said with a chuckle.


Rey opened the door and they entered in. It was pitch dark in there. As Rey switched on the lights, kriya's eyes widened with surpise. Saying that she was astonished would be an understatement. There was a bed placed in the middle and it was decorated beautifully with the stuff that Kriya likes.


"Rey yeh sab kya hai?" She asked while adoring it.


"I don't know what is called but this one was built for me when I was around six. I spent most of the time. I shared all my pains and griefs here. And today I'm very happy and want to start a new relation of my life from here."


"New relation?" She aksed though she knew what it meant.


"You know what I mean. Kriya I've confessed it earliern and can say another infinite times. I love you Kriya. Your past doesn't matters Kriya. Whatever happens we'll handle it together. I promise to stay by your side forever no matter what happens. You are one such special person whom I would never want to let go of."


"Rey he'll find me one day for sure. And I don't want you to get hurt because of me."


"How'd you even think that I'll let that bas***d come near you again. He'd have to face me before coming near you."


Kriya had no words to say. She was really touched. "So do I consider that a yes?"


She was too shy to say it so just nodded.


"What? I didn't get you?" He asked in a teasing tone.


"Yes." She said.


"Yes? For what? You have to say that darling." Her cheeks turned crimson at the mention of the word darling.


"I love you." She said slowly. He approached her and in a swift manner pulled her towards him.


"Mujhe sunayi nahi diya tumne kya kaha." He purred in her ears and kissed her earlobe.


"I love you." She said again. Rey grinned wide on hearing this. In an instant he hugged her tight. This was their first hug. Kriya was a bit hesitant to hug him back but then joined him. She found solace in the warmth of their hug. She adjusted herself in a comfortable position. Their hug lasted quite long before he pulled back.


He stared at her face observing her expressions carefully while she blushed and blushed trying to hide it. He leaned forward to kiss her. Kriya stepped a bit back because she wasn't comfortable with it.


"What's wrong?" He asked.


"Uh...I...I...actually am not ready for this." She answered looking down.


"I understand. Toh kya huya agar hum kiss nahi kar sakte, baatein toh kar sakte hai na?"


She nodded her head in a yes smiling. He made her sit on the bed such that she was sitting in between his legs with his hands wrapped around her. Their proximity had a lot of effect on her. Occassionally he would pin her hairs behind her ears, sometimes make randon designs on her back or sometimes just kiss her cheek. All this created a havoc within her. For once she wished her breathing would calm down but no. With the presence of this guy it was highly impossible for her to breath steadily. She really like the way he was sharing his special moments with her.




So how's it? I wouldn't be surprised if you guys say that I lost my touch on this story 'cause I really think that.


Do hit the like tab and leave your reviews please.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooyyeee Miss Assumer..😆
Dats ur New name...😳

First stop assuming thngs
Like u hve lost ur touch n all...

It's nt like dat...

N

On d contrary
Ur skills r improving

Day by day...

N ur writeups r jzzz Fab...

Cumin to d update...

It was WOW.. in Shakti's style...😉

Loved d KRlicious update to d core...👍🏼

Cave scene was Amazing...👏

Do cont ASAP...

N once again h

All D Best fr ur semesters...👍🏼

I knw ur goin to Rock it..😉


P.s hope u like ur new name dear...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yyyiippee m d first one to comment
[:D/] 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
finally kria ne i l u boldiya
anu unke beech sare misunderstandings clear hogaya
loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Logg humpe kitna atyaarchaar krte h ;(
chal superb uadate..
Finally kr togethr... Yupppiiieee

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