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Hello everyone, I'm writing my own story for the first ever time.
It's going to be a very teenage oriented love story...
I'm not extraordinary at writing, but I just love making up stories! :P
So here's my first completely fictitious story! :D
------Everything is absolutely FICTITIOUS------
The background is very simple.
A place called Starstown. Set on the coast of the upper-eastern coast in North America.
Characters:
(Main)
Brian: 14 year old, 9th grade student. Very friendly with girls, but not the "flirt" type.
Was in a relationship before with an ex-classmate.
Perrie: Brian's classmate, in 9th grade. Very chirpy and energetic girl. Loves to fool around and have fun.
Has a huge friend circle. Popular kid of 9th grade.
Sia: 14 year old, 9th grade. Brian's classmate in 8th grade. Loud, fun loving and straight-forward. Gets offended quite easily and has lot of feelings hidden.
Quite well known, but not extremely popular.
Sharon: A very quiet and simple girl. Though she gets loud when she's around her friends. Sia's best friend.
(Sub)Characters:
Amy: Perrie's best friend
John: Sia's crush from 7th grade.
Hot and very likeable.
Luke: Sia's very close friend, with whom she talks whole-heartedly, though she doesn't share secrets.
Rose: Sia's friend. She ruins everything by telling John about Sia's crush on him. She develops feelings for John
Brief setup of the story:
*Sia and Brian were classmates in 8th grade. They shared quite a good rapport, though they didn't know each other well.
*Sia has some feelings for Brian, and is conscious of it, but never accepted it.
*Perrie and Brian are classmates in the 9th grade. They both are good friends. Both of them are constantly teased with each other, that there's something cooking.
*Sharon knows that Sia likes Brian, undoubtedly, but leaves it at that point, to prevent further problems.
*Rose is crazily in love with John, and Sia is heartbroken about how, her own friend ruined her feelings for John, and now crushed on him.
---------Prologue------------
It was break time, at 12'o clock.
Rose sat next to Sia and started her blabber about how much she liked John.
Sharon quietly watched the drama.
"I think I really, really like him Sia." said Rose.
"Great! Now what am I supposed to do?" said a frustrated Sia, throwing away her food, and rushing to the washroom.
A confused Rose shrugged, and went to get her bottle.
Sia banged the door close in the washroom.
Tears quickly rolled down her cheeks and she struggled to hold them back.
Sharon rushed to the washroom, because she knew, that once Sia cried, it would take her forever to stop and fight her feelings.
"Sia! Please open the door will you! I'm telling you, there's no use crying over this crap. You're ruining yourself. Please! You have to get over the entire episode!"
As Sharon said this, the entire scene came into Sia's head...
..."She has a crush on you John" said Rose.
"I can't believe this!"
... But before the rest came into her mind, she opened the door and ran into Sharon's arms.
Sharon caressed Sia's braided hair and hugged her back.
"It's ok honey, just relax."
"Can you tell her to shut up Sharon? Why doesn't she understand that it hurts me!"
"Just forget it. Like really, throw the crap into the flames."
They both walked back to class. Just then, Brian walked across and looked at Sia's red, swollen eyes.
___________________________
So how was it guys?
I'm really anxious to get your feedback!
Please do comment/criticise, so that I can continue the story. 😳
And yes, the next update will be longer. For sure! 😆
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INDEX
Chapter 1 : Page 2
It's going to be a very teenage oriented love story...
I'm not extraordinary at writing, but I just love making up stories! :P
So here's my first completely fictitious story! :D
------Everything is absolutely FICTITIOUS------
The background is very simple.
A place called Starstown. Set on the coast of the upper-eastern coast in North America.
Characters:
(Main)
Brian: 14 year old, 9th grade student. Very friendly with girls, but not the "flirt" type.
Was in a relationship before with an ex-classmate.
Perrie: Brian's classmate, in 9th grade. Very chirpy and energetic girl. Loves to fool around and have fun.
Has a huge friend circle. Popular kid of 9th grade.
Sia: 14 year old, 9th grade. Brian's classmate in 8th grade. Loud, fun loving and straight-forward. Gets offended quite easily and has lot of feelings hidden.
Quite well known, but not extremely popular.
Sharon: A very quiet and simple girl. Though she gets loud when she's around her friends. Sia's best friend.
(Sub)Characters:
Amy: Perrie's best friend
John: Sia's crush from 7th grade.
Hot and very likeable.
Luke: Sia's very close friend, with whom she talks whole-heartedly, though she doesn't share secrets.
Rose: Sia's friend. She ruins everything by telling John about Sia's crush on him. She develops feelings for John
Brief setup of the story:
*Sia and Brian were classmates in 8th grade. They shared quite a good rapport, though they didn't know each other well.
*Sia has some feelings for Brian, and is conscious of it, but never accepted it.
*Perrie and Brian are classmates in the 9th grade. They both are good friends. Both of them are constantly teased with each other, that there's something cooking.
*Sharon knows that Sia likes Brian, undoubtedly, but leaves it at that point, to prevent further problems.
*Rose is crazily in love with John, and Sia is heartbroken about how, her own friend ruined her feelings for John, and now crushed on him.
---------Prologue------------
It was break time, at 12'o clock.
Rose sat next to Sia and started her blabber about how much she liked John.
Sharon quietly watched the drama.
"I think I really, really like him Sia." said Rose.
"Great! Now what am I supposed to do?" said a frustrated Sia, throwing away her food, and rushing to the washroom.
A confused Rose shrugged, and went to get her bottle.
Sia banged the door close in the washroom.
Tears quickly rolled down her cheeks and she struggled to hold them back.
Sharon rushed to the washroom, because she knew, that once Sia cried, it would take her forever to stop and fight her feelings.
"Sia! Please open the door will you! I'm telling you, there's no use crying over this crap. You're ruining yourself. Please! You have to get over the entire episode!"
As Sharon said this, the entire scene came into Sia's head...
..."She has a crush on you John" said Rose.
"I can't believe this!"
... But before the rest came into her mind, she opened the door and ran into Sharon's arms.
Sharon caressed Sia's braided hair and hugged her back.
"It's ok honey, just relax."
"Can you tell her to shut up Sharon? Why doesn't she understand that it hurts me!"
"Just forget it. Like really, throw the crap into the flames."
They both walked back to class. Just then, Brian walked across and looked at Sia's red, swollen eyes.
___________________________
So how was it guys?
I'm really anxious to get your feedback!
Please do comment/criticise, so that I can continue the story. 😳
And yes, the next update will be longer. For sure! 😆
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INDEX
Chapter 1 : Page 2
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