Hey... I started the story today ... And it sounds very interesting... and encouraging as me too have started working on my first story π
read all the parts at one go ... I respect your decision to change the character from Aisha to Sakshi ... but when I was reading the first few chapters...
It was impossible to imagine Sakshi as Jungli Billi ... Jungli Billi is one and only Aisha... Sakshi is a little chuhiya π
And Shree looking upto her as elder sister... I guess Aisha (imagining Sheetal) fitted better because Mrunal looks younger than Sid π ...
Other than that... the story, the case of the love triangle was very impressive... and interesting as it connects Aisha/Sakshi with Arjun - Roshni - Sameer - Ankita ...
I'll send you a buddy request ... please add me to ur PM list π
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