ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 👏
Aww! Poor Shree! Bechare ko har jagah se baatein sunn ke ko mil rahi hain 😆
Continue Soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor shree wat will he do know
Arjun and riya are total workoholic god help them
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Arjun heard wat Shree tld abt him... Shree u r gone😆Mr nd Mrs Rawte both r gone cases 1st time dey r together n deir room nd all dey r doing s discusiing case last scene ws cute... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
awww how sweet riya was waiting for him in the hall
love the way arjun and riya were discussing the case
arjun called shree at that time 😆 poor shree
he asked riya to put the phone on speaker
shree called arjun mental 😆
loved shree and riya's conversation
chotu cricket khel raha hoon 🤣
loved when chotu said "put some heavy make up on you"🤣
last scene was super cute :)
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nicr part
waiting for the next part
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone……back with another part. So sorry if I make any mistake……

& a big thanks to everyone for liking it till now.😊

PART—15

Recap:

[in riya-arjun's room]

They r still working.after sometimes,riya fall asleep.arjun is about to ask something riya,then he see that she already fall asleep.her laptop is still on.her head is slightly on arjun's shoulder.

*****

Arjun feel little bit uncomfortable.riya's head is on his right shoulder.1st he take her laptop&turn it off.place it to the bedside table without waking her up.then he try to place her head on bed but can't.meanwhile riya's head rolls down to arjun's chest.& she hug him in sleep.for the 1st time they r too close to another.

Arjun[with hesitation yet with care]:riya ………get up & sleep properly on bed.

But riya in a deep sleepy mode.then arjun give up on calling her.he sift his laptop in bed side table&turned to riya.with a great care he hold her head with his two hands& shift it to bed.riya still holding him.after placing her,he removes her hand from him& gives her a cushion to hold it.riya lovingly hug that cushion&fall for a deep sleep like ca sweet little baby.her expression is too much pure that arjun can't hold his smile anymore.

Arjun:how quite in sleep… otherwise always taking!& also that two…[he means shree&chotu].i don't get it what the hell they r talking about all the time for all day long!"the three musketeer!" always,one for all&all for one.

It's already sweet morning.arjun get up from bed& stand beside window.he removes the windows curtain.a fresh air & a fresh morning light enter their room.after a long time arjun enjoy the beauty of morning surface.after roshni's death,everthing was same to him.nothing can make a special place on his heart.but today everything seems new to him.don't know why but he enjoys every second.he turns to see riya who is still sleeping.some light fall on riya's face & she move slowly with irritation.arjun sees it & cover the window with the curtain.

Arjun[in his mind]:she should sleep for sometimes,because she didn't sleep in the whole night.i should csll rathore & tell him that we'll be little bit late today.

Arjun leaves the room.he goes to the kitchen for making tea after collecting the empty tea cup from which they drink tea last night.riya really can makes best tea now.

Riya's mom also wake up& she is doing her morning worship.she also enter in kitchen.

Riya's mom: good morning,beta.

Arjun:good morning.

Riya's mom:prasaad?

Arjun:no,thanks.

Riya's mom;what r u doing?& where is riya?

Arjun:nothing,just making tea.riya is sleeping.

Riya's mom:still now?is she alright?because she always gets up early in the morning.

Arjun: no actually,we r working on some urgent case.so she can't sleep all night for preparing case details.so,I thought she should sleep for sometimes.

Riya's mom:thank u,beta.u r really very caring person.she is very lucky.

& I hav to tell u something………………

Arjun;what?

Riya's mom:I am sorry for everything what happen on riya's wedding day… I just… u know, I am a mother.how can I tolerate my daughter's that condition.so I over reacted on both of u.so sorry from my heart.please forgive me if u can.

Arjun:it's alright,aunty.u don't hav to ask forgiveness.

Riya's mom: I know riya……

Arjun:don't worry,she just little bit angry.she'll be ok in any moments & runs to u.

Riya's mom:I hope so.anyway,leave it.i'll make tea& breakfast.

Arjun leaves work & riya's mom makes tea.she gives a cup of tea to arjun & keeps one for her also. Just then riya start to enter the kitchen.she only see arjun so start to talk with him.

Riya: sorry…. Sir,I just fall asleep.

Arjun:it's ok.& good morning.

Riya;good morning sir…& u already makes tea??

Arjun:not me,aunty.

Now riya notice her mom.

Riya's mom:good morning,beta.want some tea or coffee?

Riya didn't give ans to her.just leaves the place.arjun also follow her.

[in ariya's room]

Riya start to prepare her office bag.

Arjun;riya,no need to hurry.i called rathore to inform that we'll be late.

Riya;why sir?i don't think that u should do it.we hav so many work to do.

[then riya start to describe the case part]

Arjun:u don't hav to remind me that.let's come quickly in breakfast table.ur mom really working hard for breakfast.

Riya:sir,u carry on.i m not hungry.

Arjun start to leave the room after riya's word.but suddenly turn to riya.

Arjun:riya,did u ever bunk ur class in school?

Riya:what sir?

Arjun:I said, did u ever bunk ur class in school?

Riya[being surprised]:yes,twice.

Arjun:get caught?

Riya[smile]:yes,2nd time.actually I was playing even after break time is over.so i&some of my friends missed two class.our math sir caught& called our parents.God!what a tension filled day that was!

Arjun;didn't ur parents get mad at u?

Riya:yeah,at 1st.but then they forgive me coz,they know I'll never do it again.

Arjun:great.they forgive u.although u r in fault,they never turned their face on u,am I right?

Riya:yes.

Arjun:but u don't hav the courage to forgive ur mom when u know that she'll never do it again.great!they hav to forgive u on ur every mistake just because u r their daughter& u can't do the same coz they r ur parents,that's not fair.

Riya:it's not like that sir.

Arjun:but seems like that from ur behavior.she is ur mom.she can't think wrong about u even she try.mother is always like that riya.so u should talk to her.

Arjun leaves the room.after sometimes riya goes to her mom&hug her.they say sorry to each other.finaly whole family taking breakfast all together,happily.riya's mom look at arjun's face.he also look up.then she{riya's mom} says"thank u" in silent mood to him.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay...
Me firrst to comment.
Loved the whole update.
Aww...
Arjun really cares for Riya.
Loved the way Arjun made her understand.
Loved everything.
Next time,ek lamba wala update chahiye,ok.
Fab it is.
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi prohelika 🤗...brilliant update dear...

arjum ne riya ki mom and riya ka patch up karwaya...so sweet of him...n the way he cared about riya was also so sweet n caring...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
just love it yr!👏
wow!!!happy family!!& arjun is just awesome husband!☺️😳
plz,plz,plz, do continue soon.
& plz pm me the update next time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome.
continue soon.
& thanx for the pm😊

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