ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 👏
Wah! Aunty toh expert nikli 😆
B/w interesting precap!
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
liked the way choree teasing ariya always
wondering how aunty managed to bring arjun to the party
everybody enjoying the party & arjun is standing away from them ohhh
somehow he has to come out from his past, otherwise riya will be hurt
poor ariya
precap seems interesting
looking 4ward
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi! I am back with another part of 'An odyssey of love'.

Hope, u can enjoy it……

So so so sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—12 [A]

Every sound just stopped to enter in riya's ear.everyone just disappear from her sight..she can't take off her eyes from him..

For riya, he is looking like a heavenly gifted person..& seems that without him,she is nothing………anymore.

BGM—

"tumhi dekho na;ye kya ho gaya

Tumhara ho main or tum meri……"

****

The party is over,now it's time to go back home.almost everyone gone,except uncle-aunty,their 5 friends,shree,chotu,riya&arjun.uncle's two friends destination are same as chotu.so he decided to drop them.& shree'll drop another friends.so they start to go for their car.shree is trying hard to start his car,but can't.

Chotu:what happen shree??again ur car down?

Shree;hmm…nothing serious may be,just hav to take it to hospital[workshop].

Riya:oh!god…shree…how long u'll hold this!it's always become useless when u need.

Shree:hey .. don't say like that.it's my priencess!

Chotu:wow priencess!!thats why can't start…shree now it's time to change it.grow up,dude.

Shree:don't u know the importance of 1st love in our life!it's my 1st love,1st car…dad give me after lot of pleading.. & for ur kind information no other car can't suit me!

After hearing the word '1st love' arjun& riya's face fade away.uncle& aunty as well as chotu,shree also see that.

Aunty:shree… it's true that a person can't forget his 1st love easily.but time.. time always change the equation.& as for u,no one here to tell u that u should forget ur 1st one.they just tell u to make place for another without leaving ur 1st.

Or rishtey hamesha ristey hi hote hai.wo payar ka ho,ya nafrat ka,dostika or sirf zimmedarika isse koi farak nehi parta…rishtey sirf ho jati hai………………isse except karna or nivhana insaan ka marji,lekin isse ristay ki sachai baadal nehi jate,beta.

After aunty's word there was pin dropped silence.then arjun talk 1st.

Arjun:shree,take my car.u drop uncle aunty at home.

Shree:but,sir…then how'll u go?

Arjun;don't worry,it's just20 min walking distance.i would love to walk.

Then chotu leaves 1st.aunty-uncle,their friend&shree hav to go in arjun car.so they all take their seat in the car.

Arjun:riya,u should go with them.

Riya:but,sir u…

Arjun:go!

So riya goes to the car,but there is a problem.aunty has a back problem,so she can't travel in congested position.so riya hav to stay with arjun.

They all leave..so arjun & riya start to walk for home in silent mood.arjun is lost in a deep thought while riya is constantly looking at arjun &forget to watch the road.so she lose her grip of legs on shoes & one of her shoes torn apart.arjun see this but ignore.she can't walk properly.she can't even remove it coz,then what'll people say! arjun sees her straggling in walk for awhile. Then he did an unexpected things.

He removes his shoes & hold it by his hand.then start to walk again.

Riya see it & then she does the same.they start to walk in the road in bare feet.

[in the car]

Uncle{to aunty}:when did u hav a problem in back?!

Aunty:from now…listen,we aren't young now.remember,we just celebrate our 53 annivarsary.any problem can creat in a moment at this old age.

Shree:yes,aunty…but I am curious how u manage arjun sir to come?imotinal fact?

Uncle:imotion & ur aunty?forget it!stone hearted queen!u know how many time I beg for sweet but ur aunty's heart never get mild!

Aunty:hello!if I giv that then u'll be ill like always & I hav to take care of u at this age..u know I am 1 month 14 days elder than u.so u should respect me.

Uncle:oh my old queen,now let's stop it,& tell how u bring him.

Shree:hmm…tell quickly.by the way,aunty…thank u..riya was so happy.today we find our old ri…

Aunty:I knew that she'll be happy.sweet girl…madly fall in love with him.

[to be continue]

[ps:how aunty manage arjun to come to the party will be in next part{don't worry,there was no top secret reason behind arjun's entry in the party!just a normal one.i was about to finish it in that part,but can't write anymore today.so hav to stop here.}]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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**EDITED**
Waah! You finally updated!

Aur update tha bhi kaise... awesome.
Especially Aunty's dialogue...so true... And... Arjun removing his shoes just coz Riya's shoe broke was so sweet...I'm so looking forward to the next iodate!!
Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally,u updated.
I just loved it.
Loved the last part,especially.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe uncle aunty r so cute hv a great understanding
loved their nok jokhs😆
wow arjun removed his shoes for riya😳 how sweet
waiting for next part
want to know how aunty managed to bring arjun to the party😆
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update :) loved it
shree calling his car princess :) and he considers the car his first love :) how cute
arjun took of his shoes too and they walked bare feet
uncle and aunty's conversation was so funny
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM :)
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...
loved it...
aunty's talks were lovely...
wow arjun removed his shoes for riya so sweet...
cant wait to know how aunty managed to bring arjun...
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
aunty's dialogue was good...
arjun removed his shoes so riya can feel secure in removing hers,,,sooo sweet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 😊
That shoes scene was cute! 😊
Continue soon!

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