ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb..
loved it
thank u dear fr d nyc wrk
cngo fr crosing 50pgs
thanks fr d pm..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! 👏
Wah! Aunty toh sachi mein expert hain, Arjun ko le hi aayi 😆
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...
wah aunty bhi amazing h ... love the way she talked arjun into bringing arjun to the party...
aur uncle ka title aunty ko superb... ;)
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
so that's how aunty brought him to the part :)
glue of love 😆
uncle and aunty are so adorable :)
hope they bring ariya closer
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...awesome...👏
aunty tou bohut teez hai...👍🏼
love of glue...LOLZ..😆
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Superb..
loved it
thank u dear fr d nyc wrk
cngo fr crosing 50pgs
thanks fr d pm..!



thanks for 'congratulation'..!!😊
& a big thanx for liking the story...
& a sweet thanx for ur cute comment!😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone, I am back with a new part. Sorry for late update & thanks everyone for liking it till now… and huge thanks to them who press the like button, give their comment by wasting their valuable time.……

Hope u'll enjoy it….So sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—13 A

Arjun & riya reached homethey just about to go in their flat,but in the meantime they got shocked to see rathore in the ground floor.

Riya: rathore sir,u??here?!at this hour?!

Rathore:yes.actually my meeting was over long time ago.so I thought to visit mr.ganguly & congratulated him.

Riya: did u meet him?

Rathore:yes,couples of minute ago.when I arrived here I saw the empty house so I wait in the garden.they just come.

Riya:actually uncle shift the party to park in last moment,so I can't inform u.

Rathore:don't worry.beside,I was engaged in an important work.

Arjun give a glance towards rathore when he says"important work".

Riya:so,u miss the party,sir. But u can have a cup of coffee .let's go in our flat.

Rathore:ok.

Riya tells rathore to make himself comfortable while she'll make the coffee.

Rathore:hmm….riya.

Riya:yes sir…

Rathore:I think u hav to make 2 more coffee…I have guests with me.

Riya:guest?where r they?

Rathore:just giv me 1 min.

When rathore enter with the guest riya was just speechless.there r standing her parents with rathore sir.her eyes just filled with water…she is so happy to see them…after a long time.she is about to run to them,just then she remember her wedding day…& stop herself from going to them.it is high time she even stopped to speak with them over phone….

On the other hand,riya's parents are so happy to see her after a long time.

[riya's parents try to call riya but she never answer.they were worried about her.at last,they called rathore.&rathore knew that riya missed her parents…but also mad at them.so for breaking the ice between them,he calls them here.&he also picked them from airport.thats why he also skip the party]

The room is just full of silence.everybody may be forget to react.then rathore 1st start to talk.

Rathore:arjun,did I give u the red file of last case?

Arjun:file…when?

Rathore:yes,I give it to u…let's check it in ur room.ok?

Arjun get it that rathore want to give space the three family members.

Arjun:it's on my table…lets go.i've some important point to add on that report.

Rathore&arjun leave for arjun's room.then there are just riya&her parents.

Riya's father talks 1st with teary eyes.

Mr.mukharjee:hello priencess…aren't u goona talk with ur stupid old king?

Riya start to cry.

Mr.mukharjee:hey…whats that?don't cry..don't u know,aaj kaal pani ki kitna crisis chaal raha hey.aur tum yeha pani ki ganga behrahi ho.

Riya can't hold herself anymore& start to cry loudly.she just run to him&hug him tightly.

Riya:I hate old stupid king.why he taking so much time to bring my perfect king…why?don't u know I can't leave without him?

Mr.mukharjee:sorry,princess.

Riya:I love u papa…

Mr.mukharjee:I love u too,beta.

Riya's mom just watched them happily.when the father-daughter conversation is about to start she come to hug riya.riya see it & avoid it.

Riya:papa,let's see ur priencess castle.

Then they leave the room.& riya's mom stand alone.

[in arjun's room]

Rathore:is that how u decorated ur room??!

Arjun:why?

Rathore:boaring…just like u.

Arjun:who tell u to come here?

Then rathore start to pack arjun's bag.

Arjun:what the hell r u doing now?

[to be continue]

[ps:I'll update this story on daily basis from today..]

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... reunion... hmmm feeling bad for her mom...

hehee aankhir ye rathore karna kya chahte hai!!

is riya's parents going to stay??

update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
sameer brought her parents to her house :) how sweet
loved mr. mukarjee's dialogue "aaj kaal pani ka itna crisis chal raha hai aur tum yeha pani ki ganga baha rahi ho"😆
love riya's bonding with his dad
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...👏
father- daughter moment...
why iz rathore packing arjun's bags...

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