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awesome FF...
riya imagining...🤣
continue soon...
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Cme across ff 2day.. Read ol d parts in go .. D ff iZ lovely... Loved it... Do continue soon
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Hi! I am back with another part of 'An odyssey of love'.

Hope, u can enjoy it……

So sorry if I make any mistake.

PART—11

Arjun & riya reached office .riya enter their joint cabin where shree & chotu are waiting for her.

Shree:good morning,mam!

Riya[with a sweet happy smile]:good morning guys!

Shree:what's the matter??!!ur morning seems very good type morning!

Riya:nothing like that.

Shree:please tell yar,what's the matter?is anything special happens to u today?!!

Chotu: shree… why u always asking so many things to ri!?if anythings happen to her she'll tell us…

Riya:exactly!

Shree;ok,ok.let's do our work.otherwise ur 'khadus' pati will start to

Scold us…samjhe ye samjhau!

Riya:shree,why u always tease arjun sir?

Shree;oh ho…still now sir!chotu,just imagine the scene when our ri will 1st call arjun sir as..

Chotu:arjun ji…?

Shree:what ji ji…just arjun!how romantic!isn't it?

Riya:don't know shree where the hell did u find these thought…

Chotu:actually now a days,shree wants to write another romio-juliet love story..& in this ETF there is no other hope to get some romantic angle on others beside u guys..

Riya:chotu,now u also…

Just then rathore enter their cabin so they can't continue their tease session.

Rathore:guys,we hav a case…it's urgent ,need to solve before evening.otherwise it'll be late.so everybody join me in the conference room now.

The trio:ok sir.

Rathore leave the room.

Shree:oh god!just remember…we hav an invitation for a party in this evening!riya u tell arjun sir about aunty's anniversary party?

Riya:not yet.will tell him soon.

Every etf member are so busy in the case.finally they solve it before the deadline.

Rathore:good job team.let's call it a day for today…meet u tomorrow .

Shree:no sir!did u forget that u hav an invitation for aunty's party?

Rathore:oh,yes.

Arjun:which party?

Rathore:mr.ganguly invite us to his anniversary party.

Arjun face colour fade away after hearing the word 'anniversary'…& he remind his 1st anniversary with roshni…

He didn't say anything further.

Arjun & riya reach home.after freshen up riya select a dress for her to wear in the party.she come to the hall & see that arjun still didn't change.

Riya: sir,u still here?

Arjun:what?

Riya:I mean,don't u be ready for the party?!

Arjun:riya,I am not going…

Riya;but sir…

Arjun give her a hard look 1st then control himself & says politely

'u can go if u want'

Then arjun goes to his room & lock it from inside.

A dishearted riya come to her room.even she didn't want to go to the party now…but uncle aunty…

So she decided to go.

After making dinner for arjun,she goes to aunty's room.shree & chotu are already there.

Riya:hey,guys!where is rathore sir?

Chotu:he hav to see commissioner sir urgently,so can't come.

Shree:where is arjun sir?

Riya[with sad face]:not coming.

Mrs.ganguly heard their talk while passing by.she also notice riya's faded smile.then she leave for a work.

Shree:oh!forget it now.do u know what uncle's plan?

Riya:yeah,uncle told me.he is good planer!

Shree:yes.he always want to cheer up aunty.u know,arnav bro& pial boudi..i mean their son&daughter-in-law can't come frequently from abroad.& they miss them a lot..specialy aunty.

Riya:sad..it's really tough to being apart from family…[riya's eyes fill with water by reminding her own family..she was angry with them for whatever happened in her wedding..also didn't take their phone calls still now..but miss them every single moment]

Shree:true.but I think uncle aunty like u two.they seem very happy today.

Just then ganguly uncle come.

Uncle:hey guys!stop talking now & start helping me.we hav to leave for our party spot.

Riya:ok,uncle.but where's aunty?

Uncle:she'll come…we hav to go 1st.

Uncle,five of his old friends with their wife,shree,chotu,riya leave for the park where they'll party tonight.the park is just beside the ocean.riya&chotu arrange seat for everyone to sit on the ground.there is sweet wind to add extra sweetness in the nature apart from the sea's natural beauty at night.but they are waiting for the party queen..coz,aunty didn't come yet.now the king of the party means uncle is also getting tensed for aunty's late arrival.

Just then aunty comes as well as a shock for riya,shree& chotu.

Acp arjun suryakant rawte is also come along with aunty!

Riya is so surprised that she can't but help to ask aunty how she manage to bring arjun with her.

Aunty[to riya]:I'll tell u later dear..but 1st let's start the party!

They all wish them[uncle&aunty].after cutting the anniversary cake&finishing the eating issue,they start to singing & dancing.chotu just taking everyone's picture while arjun is standing apart from the main party.he's just watching the sea…no attention in the party.

After sometimes,shree plays the Radha song of student of the year movie from his mobile.& riya start to dance on it.shree& ganguly uncle join her.with in a second everyone joined them except arjun.it is really pleasant to see them in dancing.in that old age every uncle & aunty dancing like children.riya is so happy to see them happy.just then her eyes stop in one spot. In a white shirt,he is looking damn hot.his two hands on his pocket& he is lost in watching the beauty of the sea while riya is lost on him…his hair get disorderly arrange by the wind flow.

Every sound just stopped to enter in riya's ear.everyone just disappear from her sight..she can't take off her eyes from him..

For riya, he is looking like a heavenly gifted person..& seems that without him,she is nothing………anymore.

BGM—

"tumhi dekho na;ye kya ho gaya

Tumhara ho main or tum meri……"

[to be continue]

Precap:

While waliking in the road,riya's one shoe torn apart.so she can't walk properly.arjun sees her straggling in walk for awhile. Then he did an unexpected things………

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part

Ria want to go to party ..arjun doesnt

how aunt brought him is a question

Ria mesmerizzed seeing arjun

liked choree teasing ria

waiting for more

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Aunty managed to bring Arjun??? wat did she do??? so Riya s lost n Arjun... hmmm... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg.. I loved it somuch... wondering how aunty made him agree to cum 2 party... waiting eagerly for d next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... your concept itself is quite different. I like!

This chapter had to be one of my faves.
You got Aunty to convince Arjun to come to the party. I'm still wondering how.
Riya is lost in him. I wonder how he's gonna react.

But.
Most importantly.
Your precap. I can't wait to see what Arjun is gonna do.

Looking forward to your next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arya1991

Nice update... your concept itself is quite different. I like!

This chapter had to be one of my faves.
You got Aunty to convince Arjun to come to the party. I'm still wondering how.
Riya is lost in him. I wonder how he's gonna react.

But.
Most importantly.
Your precap. I can't wait to see what Arjun is gonna do.

Looking forward to your next update.


thax..for liking it..dear.😊
Edited by prohelika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one...
What unexpected thing did Arjun do..??
Being curious..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
how did the aunty manage to bring him?? interesting!!

lovely party... hope someday riya will b lucky enough to have an anniversary!!

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